Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 6:02 pm Post subject: UltimateInterpol Produtions Present...The Ultimate Outsiders
The Ultimate Outsiders. 1st issue.
Issue #1: Assembly
Alice, a regular 17 year old girl, stood in front of a collapsed building, the recently crushed Ultimate Marvels HQ. Alice sighed as she saw no one was around, she was hoping to meet one of the new Super-Heroes. She turned to leave only to be confronted by a familiar boy with black hair, blue eyes, and least was one year older then her.
“John?” She asked
“Hi, Alice” He greeted, Alice knew him because they go to the same high school. He was wearing a black shirt and jeans. She also noticed his above average physique. She only talked to him once before, he acts very coldly to others, which made him an outsider, like her.
“What are you doing here?” She asked.
“I was about to ask you that.” He answered. Something about his voice made Alice answer first.
“I just saw this on the news yesterday and I wanted to check it out. And you? What are you doing here?” She repeated.
“Do you have powers?” He asked. This made Alice really uncomfortable. How could he know...? She thought.
“What do you mean?” She tried to sound innocent.
“Don't play with me; do you or not?” He asked impatiently.
“Uh-um no, no, I don't.” She responded and began to walk away. What's this guys problem? Just comes up to me-- She didn't get to finish her thought, John smacked her back with a metal trash can he found on the sidewalk. It only hurt her a little, but she was pissed. She turned around in a fury.
“The hells your problem @$$-hole?!” she yelled. She threw a punch but only hit air as John easily dodged her, she threw another and it made contact... with the building next to them. Dust and rubble was sent flying in the air, there was a big dent in the building, luckily the surrounding area was evacuated and no one was around to see this.
“Alice, calm down.” John said not changing his attitude. Alice did, she was on her knees, crying in her hands. Now it was John's turn to be uncomfortable.
“What the hell's your deal? Why does it matter? You gonna spread it around school that I'm a freak now, huh? What's with you?!” She asked in and angry tone.
“Alice, I'm sorry. No, I won't tell anyone, the reason I'm here is because I wanted to recruit you for a team I'm going to make.” John explained.
“Team?” She asked.
“Yeah, where a bunch of us can go out and y'know protect and serve.” John said, still uncomfortable.
“Why?” She asked.
“Because I have nothing better to do after school,” John said. Alice laughed with tears still in her eyes. “Because, I look up to people like the Ultimate Marvels.” He said looking at the building. “You don't have too join, but I had to make sure you had powers and the only why I could get you too, was to force you. No one would openly say it.” John finished.
“Sorry I lied” Alice said. Feeling better that someone knew instead of her keeping it in.
“Sorry I hit you with a trash can, even?”
“Not by a long shot, but yes by the way.”
“What?”
“I'll join your team.” she said cheerfully.
The next day at school.
John and Alice are sitting in the bleachers of the football field during lunch.
“So, do you have powers?” Alice asked.
“Nope.” John answered.
“What, but I thought--”
“You don't need powers, but I'm glad someone on the team does.” This made Alice nervous, but then she thought back to yesterday.
“How were able to dodge me so easily yesterday?”
“Just because I don't have powers doesn't mean I'm not trained.”
“So, you're like a martial artist?”
“Yes.”
“Cool, what else can you do?”
“Well, I'm real good with projectile weapons, I'm a decent shot, I trained mainly with a staff, also I'm a Hacker, in a way.”
“Hey, can you fill up my iPod?”
“No.”
“Meanie...”
“I need to ask you also, is it just strength or do you have other powers?”
“I don't think I have anymore...”
“Are you sure?”
“I don't know...”
“Okay.”
“You're not going to come at me with another trash can are you?”
“Of course not. I had a good idea, you could take it.”
“How?”
“In class you broke pencils in half during a writing test, and that fight at our school recently, when that girl got pushed back and you were behind her, you two bumped heads and you made her unconscious.”
“That was an accident.”
“I'm not accusing you, but you should be careful.”
“So anyways... anymore people you need to investigate, or are you just going to throw trash cans at everyone?”
“You're never going to let that go-- are you?
“Nope!” Alice said with a smile. John sighed.
“Our next recruit is Elise Drew.”
“That weird gothicy girl?”
“She's not weird, okay? She's different.”
“What makes you think she's got powers?”
“Her family background is odd, but we can't be sure until we ask.”
“Wow! She lives here?” Alice asked. A huge mansion was presented in front of them, over three stories high.
“This is where it said in her school profile.” John answered. Alice went ahead and knocked on the door, this surprised John.
“Wait, what are we going to do?” John motioned.
“Well there's a trash can over--” Alice didn't finish. The door opened and a petite blond girl stepped out, wearing a black top and skirt. John noticed at once her choker and bracelets, they each had a red gem in it.
“May I help you?” She asked.
“Hi, I'm Alice and this is John.” Alice answered.
“I know who you too are...” Elise answered with a hint of a British accent.
“Those three gems you have... what are they for?” John suddenly asked. Elise had a look of shock on her face for a second.
“What these?” She brought up her hands up to show them. “They're just jewelery.” Elise answered.
“Elise, what does your father do?” John asked.
Elise was getting mad, Pushy bastard she thought.
“That's none of your business! Now leave!” She yelled and tried to slam the door shut, but John caught it and held it open.
“GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME!!!” She screamed. Suddenly, Elise was fuming with a bright red aura. The powerful aura swung at John following Elise's motions. John was sent back but he was able to flip and land on his feet in Elise's front yard. John grabbed a small black baton from his holder on his belt that quickly grew into a staff. Elise came flying out of the house surrounded in her red aura. Alice was stunned and couldn't move.
“Elise, please settle down, I just want to ask you some questions”
“IT'S TOO LATE FOR THAT!!!” she screamed. John was glad that Elise lived outside the city in a secluded area, no innocents could interfere.
“Elise, I'm not going to fight you.” John said.
“Good.” The ground beneath John started to shake, then eventually rose into the air. With a motion of Elise's hand John and the pile of earth was tossed onto another part of her yard. John was able to plant his staff into the ground and swing around and land.
Before Elise could react, John was already upon her. Guy can move... Alice thought watching the fight take place before her still stunned. Elise picked up random objects and sent them at John. He easily dodged them in acrobatic moves. He then got upon her ready to strike, a lightening bolt flashed in between Elise and John. Rain started to pour erratically, someone was coming towards them. A man appeared, walking down the road, towards them, wearing black and a trench coat.
“Oh no... Deathlok...” Elise whimpered.
“Alice! Wake up, I need you for this one.” John called.
“What? O-Okay.” She answered
“BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, children, my won't this be fun? I'm here to fight my old nemesis, but I guess I could use a warm up.” The insane laughter from him sent a chill down Alice's spine.
“Come, and get it!” John yelled.
To Be Continued...
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I, for one, Cannot wait! If the 2nd issue is even half as good as the 1st one, then we're all in for a real treat! _________________ "THE ULTIMATE MARVEL TRIVIA GAME! C'mon it's Fun!"
The Ultimate Outsiders. 2nd issue.
Issue #2: Unexpected Guest
Deathlok's laughter continued to ring out, as the ground began to shake, it seemed a monstrosity followed him “Meet my new pet, Fafnir. He could use a little appetizer before the main course.” Deathlok chuckled. The monster had the appearance of a reptile or a dragon. Big, scaly and green.
“Oh god, where's dad?” Elise asked herself.
John looked back at her and saw her fear, she was shaking uncontrollably. Her red aura disappeared.
“Elise, are you okay?” John asked.
“ohgodohgodohgod...” She kept repeating.
John couldn't take it. He walked right up to Elise and slapped her across the face.
“Listen Elise,” He grabbed hold of her, “You are not going to get me killed today. Pull it together now. I need you to help in this fight, Alice and I can't do it ourselves; we need you” John urged.
“Di-Did you just hit me?” Elise asked with a dark tone, her aura rapidly growing.
“Uh-um...”
“As soon as we're done with this, I'll deal with you...” Elise was once again pissed. She flew up into the air, getting the attentions of both Deathlok and his dragon.
John ran to Alice, “Alice I want you to attack Fafnir” He asked.
“I-I can't...”
“Alice, you could throw that thing, back into the city from all the way out here! Please just give it a try.” John begged her.
She nodded, and John left her, running after Deathlok, whose attention still was upon Elise.
Elise was in the air, her power continued to grow, and she flew at Fafnir, sending energy blast at him through her hands.
The dragon, roared with rage. Swatting at her with it's tail, it missed. John was charging at Deathlok, his attention still on Elise, John pulled out his second baton and threw it straight at Deathlok. It hit him, square in the jaw. This had surprised him. He didn't mean to get involved in the fight that fast.
“Errrr... Little pest, I've been fighting Gaius Drew longer then you've been alive. You're not worthy of my time.” Deathlok bellowed. With that he started to chant a magic spell, he held his hand towards John and he got blown away by a sudden gust of wind. John plummeted back violently until he hit Elise's house.
“Aghhhhh!!” He called out in pain.
“Hahahaha... You're a fool boy! To think you could take me? Ahahaha-” Deathlok was interrupted by car colliding with him.
Alice had got behind him while he was taunting John, and struck him with the car parked by Elise's house. “W-was that my car!?” Elise asked mid-fight with Fafnir.
The enraged dragon took advantage of Elise's dismay and hit her with it's clawed hand. She hit the ground-- hard but her aura was able to protect her from getting injured badly.
Alice was mad as hell, “YOU DON'T GET TO HURT MY FRIEND!!!” She yelled at Deathlok.
Deathlok was down about half a football field from where he was standing a second ago. He slowly got up. Pure rage on his face, “YOU HARLOT, YOU DARE STRIKE ME???!!!” He raised his hand and began to enchant... but before he could finish he was knocked in the back of the head by a powerful blow.
John was back up and already upon Deathlok. The first hit made him stagger forward and the second hit that came immediately after made full contact with the side of Deathlok face.
Deathlok fell down and finally stayed down.
John was panting and Alice came up to him with the car still in her hand.
“You okay?” She asked.
“Yeah... You?” He replied with weight on his staff. She nodded.
“Good, lets go finish off Fafnir.” He finished. They both turned to see Fafnir trying to crush Elise at the same place she hit the ground. The Dragon was trying to palm her into the earth, her aura was fighting back at it. Alice turned to John for a plan, but he was already sprinting towards the deadly beast.
“Idiot.” She muttered to herself.
John was coming up right behind Elise, he threw a marble like device at the face of Fafnir. A flash appeared in it's face and Fafnir was blinded. It roared and backed away from the struggling girl.
As the dragon staggered back a flying car hit it on the side of the head. Alice was of course held responsible for that.
Elise' aura grew bigger, “Gosh, what does that girl have against Civics!?” she asked John.
“Ask her yourself.” He answered.
“Wait a minute! This is all you two's fault!! You come over here uninvited and throw around accusations... What are you even doing here?” she asked, her aura aflame.
“Hey, it's not our fault, your father is a hero of the mystic realm, and his nemesis just so happens to show up when we do.”
“What do you even want with my father?” Her anger increasing even more with his mention.
“We didn't come for your father, we came here for you.” He said back. Elise was taken aback with this comment.
“What do you want with me?”
“We wanted-”
“HEY!!!” Alice interuppted. “If you didn't notice, both the Dragon and weird wizard guy are up!”
Deathlok was already doing a enchantment. The ground shook horribly beneath the trio's feet and the earth beneath them began to raise at an incredible rate. At once as it reached a point where a fall would surely mean death, Fafnir hit the pillar with his tail.
Elise immediately began to fly and picked up the person closes to her, which was Alice.
Ohcrapohcrapohcrap... John thought rapidly thinking of some solution.
Suddenly his fall started to slow down. He then notice he was surrounded by a red aura. John sighed with relief. He landed safely on the ground. The two girls landed beside him and they all got ready for the terrible twosome to make the first move.
“FOOLISH CHILDREN, DID YOU THINK YOU COULD GET RID OF ME SO EASILY??!! NO MORE GAMES!!! THIS ENDS NOW!!!” Deathlok was yelling with all his rage. He began to chant rapidly, but then started to slow down looking towards the sky with fear in his eyes.
“G-GAIUS?!” he yelled with fear.
“Hello, Darius.” the man in the air said.
“Daddy!!” Elise said happily.
Thank god... John and Alice thought.
To Be Continued...
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Hey the third issue is done and will be out soon, sorry for the delay but I had this major english paper due last friday, but it's done and being edited. Get ready this one I'm proud of.
UltimateInterpol Produtions Present... The Ultimate Outsiders
Issue #3: Into the Blinding Light
“GAIUS??!!”
A man from what looked like the Middle Ages descended on the battle field of Elise's front yard, “Darius,” He said calmly, “I recommend you leave immediately. You're a wreck, and no match for--”
“FAFNIR ATTACK!!!” Deathlok commanded. The dragon flapped it's wings and took off in the air.
“Call him off. He shouldn't have to be hurt.” Gaius said.
“Never! I'll finally prove to our master, who the most powerful one is!” Deathlok yelled.
Fafnir began to dive at an incredible speed. It was planning to plummet down upon Gaius. Alice took a step back, fear had taken over her. She looked at John who seemed to be thinking of some kind of solution.
“Do not fear, children. No more harm will come upon you.” Gaius stated.
He lifted up his hand, and right when it was about to crush them... A powerful gust of air was casted upward knocking Fafnir offcourse. The dragon reared back and fell... on Elise's Mansion.
“DAD!!!” Elise yelled in dismay.
“Uh, sorry honey.” Gaius chuckled nervously.
“Oh, no. Was there anyone in that house?” Alice asked.
“No, I live alone... except... <gasp>” Elise said, before suddenly flying off with her aura surrounding her.
“What...?” Alice said.
“Don't worry she can take care of her self. Now as for you 'Deathlok'. One more chance. Then, I'm afraid I won't be able to hold back anymore. Leave now!” Gaius said.
“Hahahahaha... Gaius, the day I surrender to you, will be the day when I die...” Saying that Deathlok pulled out a black gem, the size of a fist. Shock was implanted into Gaius face.
“Don't do it, Darius! Don't be a fool! It will destroy you,” Gaius pleaded.
“HAHAHAHAHA... I DON'T CARE!!!!” Deathlok, Screamed. He then pushed the gem in his chest. The rainy sky got darker and more violent. A dark aura surrounded Deathlok.
“Children,” Gaius said turning to them “I need the both of you to run as far away from here as you can. Just please find my daughter and go.”
“Mr. Drew, what's happening?” John asked.
“Deathlok has taken the stone of most impure, into himself. It will increase his powers to near god-like standards. Please, go and tell my daughter, I love her, and I'm taking this fight to the mystic realm.”
“You will do no such thing!!” Deathlok screeched appearing from no where behind Gaius. Deathlok bit Gaius on the neck, his energy being zapped from him. Alice charged at him with a barrage of punches. Deathlok easily dodged them, laughing at her pain.
John stood by Gaius, lying him on the ground. Black liquid poured out of the bite marks.
“Mr. Drew! Mr. Drew!!!” John called trying to reach Gaius who seemed in a daze.
“MR. DREW!!!” John yelled. Suddenly John was yanked to his feet by his collar. John feared that it was Deathlok so took a defensive position, but then say it was a red light.
“What happened to my father?” It asked.
John was only then able to tell it was Elise who was talking to him.
“Deathlok absorbed the stone of most impure and bit your father.” John replied in a half panic voice.
Elise didn't falter one one bit, her light was as bright as the sun. She let go of John and flew straight at Deathlok to join the fight with Alice. John stood up and grabbed his staff.
“I hate magic.” He sighed.
John began to walk towards the fight, but a voice called out to him.
“Wait...” John went back to Gaius's side.
“Boy,” He gasped “There's a way for you to defeat Deathlok, but it could cost you your life.”
“Go on.” John answered.
“You-son-of-a-b****!!” Alice threw a punch with each syllable. Deathlok dodged every one of them, laughing at her.
“Come, let us see what your little 'Defenders' got--” Deathlok's taunting was interrupted by a powerful energy beam that was shot into his back.
Alice took advantage to counter with an earth shattering punch to his face, “We're not 'Defenders', We're THE OUTSIDERS!!!”
Deathlok was down on the ground. Alice punched him again, making the earth around him raise. Alice backed off, and Elise landed next to her.
“Outsiders?” Elise asked.
“What? It just came to me.” Alice said back.
The ground gave a shock wave, sending both girls off balance. Deathlok charged at them. Alice was swatted away with a punch. Elise tried to fend him off with her aura, but he easily broke through, pushing her to the ground.
“Get away from me!” She yelled at him. He didn't listen and lunged to sink his teeth into her neck. He made contact but was halted by the taste of metal. Deathlok looks to see he had been halted by a staff, and who the wielder was...
“John?” Elise said.
It was John. He had mystical markings all over him, from what Elise could see. The markings on his arms and palms were glowing. Deathlok let go of the staff and took a step back surprised at the markings he had all over him, then smiled.
“Purity marking?” Deathlok asked, “That's dangerous magic your messing with, boy. It could destroy you.” He chuckled at the thought.
“The same could be said about you.” John stated, swinging back his staff and striking Deathlok in the face. Deathlok got up and smiled, his smug smile.
“Don't you know the repercussions of that sort of magic? I can absorb it to make myself stronger.” Deathlok jumped up and grabbed John's throat.
“AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! I WILL BE THE STRONGEST!!!!” Deathlok cried. A gust of wind picked up around them, circling the energy transfer. The markings traveled from John's throat to Deathlok's hands then to the stone of most impure.
John took his chance to grab at the stone hopeing Gaius Drew's advise would help him in some way.
It did.
“ARGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!” Deathlok screamed. Black lighting surrounded Deathlok putting him through excruciating pain. John didn't get out easy, he was also in pain.
The purity markings went into the stone of most impure faster.
John remembered Gaius Drew's words, "These markings will dull the strength of the stone of most impure, when all of the markings are gone you'll be left weak from the transfer of energy, but so should Deathlok. That is the time to strike. Aim for the stone, but as I have said, it may cost you your life, the stone will obliterate anyone in at least a mile radius. The stone will eventually destroy the wielder, but you can't let him cause anymore damage.Please boy-" "John.”
“What?”
“My name; it's John.”
Johns arms burned from the marks that glowed on his arms. Then, it all stopped, John noticed all the markings were gone, even the ones that glowed. He quickly grabbed the metal knuckles he had in his pack, and took a punch.
“S@#$” He said. He had no power behind it, he was drained.
“THE POWER... THE POWER... AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! YOU DIE FIRST, SCUM!!!!” Deathlok bellowed.
“You wish...” Alice came in and made an uppercut on Deathlok, while Elise swooped in to save John. Deathlok barely felt the punch.
“YOU ARE BECOMING A PEST.” He said, hitting Alice. She blocked but that didn't stop the overpowered magician. She was sent flying, but landed alive.
“What are we supposed to do now?” Elise asked John.
“The stone... aim for it... you got to destroy it.” John answered with pain in his voice.
“Right, the stone.” Elise said facing Deathlok. He was walking towards them, Elise became that red light John saw before.
“DON'T WASTE MY TIME!!!” He scowled.
“Okay...”
VZAPPPPPPP!!
Elise gave all she had, but Deathlok wasn't a fool he protected the stone with his arm. Elise was slapped aside and he was upon John.
“READY TO DIE??!!” Deathlok questioned him. He raised both his hands in a hammer motion, ready to crush John. He looked at the over-sized opponent and smiled.
“Maybe...” John answered. He extended his extra baton into a staff, and with all of his might stabbed at the stone of most impure.
It cracked, and a blinding light streaked out of its cracks. John was ready for anything.
“NO!!! NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! DAMN YOU MEDDLING KIDS!!!” Deathlok cried.
“Hey, haven't you heard? We're The Outsiders.” John said. He smiled again, Death already, huh... he thought. The light became more full. Sorry Alice, sorry Elise, I only wanted to help people... John felt arms wrap around his shoulders behind him, Mom...?
No, it was Alice, then Elise was in front hugging him. Her red aura could still be seen through the blinding light.
Then it was over...
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