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PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 4:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry guys due to unfortunate events i was not able to complete the new issue. College messed me up, the only promise I can make is it will be out soon and I haven't forgotten about it.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

We can wait. No rush man
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yo cowboy!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 7:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

It's done guys trully done, Ultimatekevin, be ready to edit man!!!
Also thanks so much for your editing!!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

HELL YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOOOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

UltimateInterpol Produtions Present...The Ultimate Outsiders


Issue #7: Kin




'Power Girl? Ultima? Supergirl? Marvel Girl? Gosh, why is this so hard?' thought Alice leaving her school. 'What the hell should my name be??'
Alice was worried about her codename. She was certain all of the other members of the Outsiders had their own. 'Blood Gem (because that's the source of her power); Arrow (because that's her weapon); Cyclone (because of his speed) and John... well, he doesn't have one yet...' Alice did not know why she was looking for a codename, she wasn't even sure she would be going back on The Outsiders.
Alice was walking home without Elise today. Elise for some reason wanted to visit her old broken down home. Alice suspected that there were things she left there that needed to be recovered for the sake of the universe (in actuality, she had skipped school).
Alice really began to like having Elise around with her. She got introduced to a lot a music she hadn't known about before...
*click click click click click* ...Someone was taking her photograph. Alice didn't notice being lost in her thoughts.

A Few Hours Later
Some Place in the City
*Knock Knock Knock Knock*
A man opens the door to some lowly warehouse.
"What do you want?" the man asked holding a shotgun to the unexpecting man. The man who knocked on the door was dressed in a black suit with a loose tie.
"Get the gun out of me face, Cody, before I shove it down your throat!" The man in the suit said.
"Sorry, Vincent." Cody said to Vincent, quickly moving the shotgun away. Cody was a fat, balding, middle aged man dressed in pants and a buttoned up shirt.
"I got a job for your boy."
"Sorry, he's not taking any jobs right now." Cody stated, closing the door.
Vincent stopped the door with his shoe.
"Why not?"
"He's looking for someone."
"And who would that be?"
"I don't know..." Again Cody tried to close the door, but was stopped again.
"Listen, a*****!" he grabbed Cody by the throat with one arm, "I've got a job for him-- from the higher ups!"
"What is it?" said a voice in the darkness of the warehouse, a dark voice.
"Hey, Damien." Vincent greeted, sounding casual. "I've got a job for ya, cash in advance, as always. I hear your looking for someone."
"..."
"Does this girl look familiar?" Vincent asked, throwing Cody aside and pulling out some photgraphs in his jacket. Alice could be seen on the photos. An ominous glow came from the warehouse in the center. It was like black fire.
"Where did you find her?"
"It's all there... Do what you want with it?"
A crazy laughter came from the warehouse and the glowing became more fierce.

The Middle of the Night
Alice's House
Alice woke up in her bed with cold sweat dripping down her face.
'What the hell?' She asked herself waking from the terrible nightmare.
''Alice, help me...'' A voice in her mind called.
"What the hell?" Alice repeated, this time whispering.
''Alice, help me.'' The voice said again. Alice could swear that it was Elise.
"Elise?" Alice asked.
''Help me, follow the trail...''
A transparent red bubble appeared followed by another, then another. Alice was sure they were from Elise. Alice jumped out of bed and got dressed in a tanktop, jeans and jacket. Then, she rushed after the red visible bubbles.
The voice continued, ''Hurry, Alice! Help me!'' Elise' voice commanded, sounding hurried.
"I'm coming." Alice replied.
Alice got into her car and drove quick, towards the bubbles that started to raise in the sky. A couple of blocks and Alice was already at the business district with tall buildings all around her. The bubbles reached up towards on particular building: an X3 building. It was a very tall building reaching eighty-three floors. She parked her car in front of it and looked at the bubbles flowing up towards the top. Making sure that was the destination.
The building was open as if inviting her and she walked towards the elevator. She pushes the button up, and it opens as if waiting for her.
'This has got to be a trap...' she thought.
Alice felt she didn't have a choice. She went inside the elevator and automatically it began to rise, higher and higher. Alice was scared now.
'What the hell was I thinking?' she thought to herself. The elevator kept up it's pace not slowing down. Alice could hear her heartbeat, fear was taking over her. She started to shake.
'Get a grip!' she told herself, but then she began to see what she was so afaid of: a dark aura. Something was at the top of the building and she was not going to like what she would find.

The Same Time
The 83rd floor of the X3 Building
The floor was one giant room, the office of the president of X3. A lone boy about the age of eighteen stood in there anxiously waiting for the elevator to reach him. The room was lit with moonlight. 'Here you come...' the boy thought excitedly.

The Same Time
The Elevator on the X3 Building
'S***. My phone won't work!' thought Alice, 'Okay, I just have to get throught this. I'm strong; I can handle this...'
DING!
Alice jumped at the noise. The doors opened.
CRASSHHHHHHH
From the office someone hurdled the office desk, a desk that must have weighed just under a ton, into the elevator.
"Aaagh!!!" Alice choked as she slowly pushed the desk off of her. The desk was a direct hit, and it hurt her real bad. She finally saw the source of the terrible power that she could actually feel. A boy with black hair, black eyes and wore nothing but black. He reached out to her, which Alice thought was strange considering he was a couple yards away. He held his hands as if he was holding a mug. Alice started to feel pressure around her neck.
"What the--?!" Alice gasped.
She was raised off the ground and brought closer to ther boy who was standing in the office. Alice continued to struggle, she could feel blood drip from the wound in her left shoulder where she was hit by the desk.
"Wh-who are you?" Alice managed to whimper out.
"You don't know me?" the boy asked. His grip became looser.
"No! No, I don't!" Alice cried out.
"Well, I know you." the boy revealed with a scary smile "I know all about you."
Alice was scared out of her mind, she didn't know what to do. "Who are you?" she asked again.
"I'm Damien, Alice!! Your brother..."
Alice stared at him 'That can't be.' she thought immediately.
"How?" Alice asked, falling to the floor after Damien let go of her.
"So the corporation messed you up this much? Or it might have been that doctor who thought every experiment was immoral."
'He... he seems to be talking to himself...' Alice thought.
"Alice, don't you realize your destiny? Don't you realize who you are? We, Alice, are the the children of Chaos."
"No, I'm not." Alice whimpered staring at him, "You're crazy..."
"I'm not, Alice. Tell me... where did you get your powers?" He asked.
"I don't know... Radioactive waste, cosmic waves... something?"
"Gene splicing. Gene splicing from other super powered beings: Chimera."
"Aggghhhh!!!" Alice screamed. Flashes passed through Alices head, flashbacks of experiments, needles, test, training...
"What are... you... doing... to me?" Alice wailed.
"I'm breaking your memory bonds in you mind. You must know the truth."
The flashes went faster in her mind, tears were running down her face. "Stop! Stop, please!!!" Alice begged.
"No, Alice. This is your destiny."
The flashes continued then stopped showing a mutated woman in a container tube, she opens her eyes.
"STOP IT!!!!" Alice yelled fiercely. Damien lost his connection. Alice was on her feet ignoring her own pain.
"Aw, s***!!" Damien yelled, shocked, "You've tapped into your chaos?!"
SMACK
Alice punched Damien so hard, he went flying across the room. She wnt after him again but he was ready this time. He dodged her first punch and blocked the next. He aimed an upper cut at her and made full contact. She went flying back.
"Sister, we mustn't fight. We are kin! We must work together to unleash Chaos, our master."
"**** YOU!!!" she screamed.
"Sister, don't make me hurt you." he said becoming enflamed by black fire, "I've been spliced with the power of a man with virtually unlimited power. You're coming with me one way or another. Your Chaos powers are also unlimited, but you can't control them, they control you."
They charged at each other. Alice in a blind fury, and Damien in a strange calm.
BOOOOOOOOOOMMM
Their fist made contact with each other. A sonic blast was created from the impact and crashed the windows around them. Alice was stunned, she couldn't move her body. Damien smiled.
SMACK
Damien punched her right in the gut.
Alice fell to her knees, overcome with pain. She couldn't ignore it any longer.
"Please, Alice... I don't want to hurt you any more. We're family! And we got to rule the world together..."
Alice was on her knees, hoping for another burst of energy. It never came.
"Alice," Damien said in a soothing voice, "Don't fight this. It's going to happen we will at last have our chance to fight the people that made us into abominations. Regular society will never accept us. All we have is each other."
Alice thought of Elise, John, and also Arrow and Cyclone.
"They'll accept us one day..." Alice muttered, keeping her head down.
"You stupid *****!!! You don't deserve the powers you were given!" Damien picked her up by the throat. "Sister, you'll learn to accept your destiny. You don't get a choice. The people of Chimera picked for us. Now they will witness the powers of chaos. We will show them what they have done to us and see our master reborn to this new age of Chaos."
"Go to hell..." Alice whispered.
"I've seen hell, sister, and so have you, with all of your memories bumping in to each other, you may not see it yet."
"Shut up. Please, leave me alone..."
"Eh?" Damien smirked, "Leave you alone? Why? Why does my sister wish me away?" He asked, offended.
"I have a life now." Alice explained, looking at Damien with tears in her eyes. "I'm not sure how I got it, but the past is the past."
"You're remembering..." Damien pointed out with a crooked smile. "I won't leave you. Our master wouldn't want that. She needs us Alice. You're weak, sister. At this point it's only logical to give up."
"Okay..."
"I knew you would see it my--"
Alice kicked him where it hurts the most: between his legs.
"AHHGGGHHH!!!!" Damien yelled in horrid pain. He let go of Alice, and grasped at his crouch. Alice began to run but her feet felt like they weighed a ton each.
"YOU'RE NOT GOING ANYWHERE!!!!!" Damien bellowed, "YOU WANT TO BE A HERO???!!! LET'S SEE IF YOU CAN FLY!!!!"
With that Alice began to rise in to the air.
"Wha-what are you doing?" Alice cried.
"FLY!!!!" He screamed.
Alice was thrusted with great force out of the window. Damien heard her fading scream, and pulled out his cell phone, "She's in the lobby." he declared, looking downward at Alice, who was spread eagle on a crushed car.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Big thanks to Kevin with his Ultimate Editing!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 1:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Bows* ALL HAIL INTERPOL!!!!!!

Kevin too! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

excellent!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 11:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good job Interpol! It met my expectations and then some!

GREAT job Interpol!
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PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 3:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*****PREVIEW*****

ULTIMATE INTERPOL PRODUCTIONS PRESENT... THE ULTIMATE OUTSIDERS


ISSUE #8: Crossfire

Its 3' O Clock in the morning and Arrow has stationed herself outside of a noisy nightclub. Drunken fools pour out of the exits. Three college’s girls walk unsteadily towards their car, at least one girl seemed to be coherent enough to be the designated driver.
'This is perfect game for a mugger' Arrow thought
She moved closer to them, the rest of the crowd seemed to be loud men with women. The girls took a turn down an alley. This seemed too familiar with her, in the last few months of her superhero career. Mugging, rape, and murder were fairly common to her. It was only her last mission was her first superhero brawl. She quietly crossed over the rooftops with superhuman agility, shadowing the girls. Arrow saw the girls go deeper into the alley; they must have parked in a lot that was surrounded by all sides. A gang of muggers make their move, it's almost complete darkness but to Arrow it's as clear as day. She readies her bow, and sets in an arrow, what Arrow really loved about a bow were its quiet deadliness. The muggers have the girls surrounded and Arrow licks her lips as she is about to unleash hell upon the gang. She feels a light hand touch her shoulder; Arrow loses her concentration and jumps at her intruder.
She lay on top of John with an Arrow jabbed close to his throat. She was breathing heavy.
"What... the... ****... are you doing" She gasped.
"Why don't you take another look before you strike?" John said firm.
Arrow took another look at the gang and girls, all the men from the gang were down on the floor.
"What the-?" She started to say. John got up and looked down upon the girls also.

“They work for the DragynWulf, they are systematically taking down gangs, so that he will be the Kingpin of Crime in this city,” John replied.
“Maybe we should let them,” Arrow said. John looked at her darkly.
“Were you going to kill these guys?”
“No” She looked a little ashamed.
“Good because someone is using arrows to pick off other gang members and it’s not you or the Ultimate Marvels archer-,”John stopped suddenly “here put these on,” John handed Arrow some ear plugs.

"They’re about to kill them.” John jumped off the roof landing tactically to lessen his footsteps. Arrow went along with him to a closer rooftop while putting on the ear plugs. The girls suddenly all looked fine and pulled what looked like sacrificial knives. John began to run fearing he would be too late. He jumped mid air calculating his plan of attack, the group of girls still had not noticed him. John noticed before he jumped that they were standing in front of a new mustang that would most likely have a new car alarm. He landed on the hood of the car and the lights began to flash and the horn began to ring. The girls could not see him, because the surprise attack had worked and blinded the girls and the noise prevented them from hearing where he came from but one of the girls pulled at a strange device and pointed it towards at the car.

Although it had no effect on John, he threw both his batons at the girls standing beside the one in the middle and immediately knocked them out. The girl in the middle became angry and screamed at John, although this screams was able to knock him back in the wall and cracked all the windows in the cars that were around them. Arrow was astounded by what the woman was capable of and released a knock out gas arrow near her and she was on the floor in the next second. Arrow then rushed to John side to see if he was okay.

“John… John” she kept repeating, trying to shake him awake. Slowly John regained consciences and got up.
“What the hell was that?” Arrow asked.
“Another one of DragynWulf experiments,” John Answered.
“What do you mean by another one?”
“About a week ago when we had our fight with DragynFox, I did some detective work trying to find out how he and Wild Bull might have been created I went to a X3 building which is actually a dummy corporation owned by DragynWulf. There, I was able to hack into a terminal and get a list of experiments that had been done by DragynWulf and it seems that there are a lot more people we are going to have to face from now one.” John explained.
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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not even going to lie. My jaw dropped when I say this. Its friggin amazing to have you back interpol.
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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 9:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks alot man, with the summer finally here maybe I'll be able to keep up this time around. Check out the preview a little more got added.
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