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Sweet issue man. And Kevin. I think that 12 ends the first arc. Well 12 is like a little thing between two Arcs. _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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this is an excellent fan-fic, it actually seems like a professional story, congratulations & you have a great talent for writing interpol _________________ Proud Member of the Ulimate Marvels
Thanks so much for the compliments guys, they really mean alot
Issue four should be out very soon _________________ Interpol Proud Member of the Ultimate Marvels
UltimateInterpol Produtions Present... The Ultimate Outsiders
Issue #4: Speed and Precision
"Hey, haven't you heard? We're The Outsiders.” John said. He smiled again, Death already, huh? He thought. The light became more full. Sorry Alice, sorry Elise. I only wanted to help people... John felt arms wrap around his shoulders behind him, Mom...?
No, it was Alice, then Elise was in front hugging him. Her red aura could still be seen through the blinding light.
Then it was over...
Two weeks later...
"Cyclone, are you in position yet?" A girl about 18 years old asked on top of a building. She was talking to her headset. Night was upon her, covering for her.
"I've been here for five minutes, Sis." The boy answered presumibly Cyclone.
"Hey, it's Arrow while were in the field, little Bro." The girl said calling herself Arrow.
"Whatever..." Cyclone said annoyed. "Why are we even doing this small time busting crooks who have ties up to DragynWulf? Why don't we aim for the head?"
"The Ultimate Marvels have that covered. We'd probably get in their way." Arrow said looking through her scope on her bow.
"Did you hear about the guy that attacked them with that 'Bug' thing?" Cycloned mentioned.
"Yeah, I can't believe some guy out there is giving us Archers a bad name. What was his name?" Arrow asked.
"I don't know Interpool or something..."
"Anyways, let's just get on the mission at hand."
"Same as last time?"
"Yes, you directly fight them and I give you cover."
Two men busted out of the convenience store across the street where Arrow took position. "Next time you don't pay your protection money, DragynWulf will come himself and torch your place!" The main crook lied, calling inside the store.
"Ready?" Cyclone lazily asked with a sigh.
"Ready." Arrow repeated.
A gust a wind was felt around the two crooks, "Whoa! What the hell was that?" One of them nervously asked.
"Hey!" A 16 year old kid yelled at them. "Give that owner his money back or I'll call the cops!" He threatened.
"Little punk..." One of the crooks muttered as he reached for his firearm, but found nothing. "Whuh... Where's my gat?" He questioned.
"What... these?" Cyclone pulled out two twin sidearms. "Bang, bang." He whispered, pointing the guns at them.
Two arrows were shot at the crooks. Both made direct hits on their chest. They were stun arrows, arrows that were modified with a blunt, sticky tip, that sent 300 kV into the target.
Both of the crooks were down in an instant.
"Another job well done." Cyclone said, giving the thumbs up to his sister. She was pointing an arrow towards him. "Hey, what are you doing?" She released an arrow. A man behind Cyclone fell, another thug, probably the driver.
"Now, were done." Arrow smiled. "I'm calling the cops now."
The next morning...
The Home of the two heroes from last night, Cyclone and Arrow.
"<Yawwnnnnnnn> Geez Jessica, we've been doing this pretty often. Maybe we could take a break?" The boy known as Cyclone asked his sister.
"I've been wanting someone to notice us, Danny. I heard of this team that was being put together a couple weeks ago..."
"Yeah, the Ultimate Marvels."
"No, not them. There's a younger team, but then again it was only a rumor..." She was practicing on her dart board, never missing the bulleye.
"So, what are we doing tonight?" Danny asked.
"We're going back out there. We know their schedule and they'll keep following it."
"They might bring extra muscle now, don't you think?"
"Yeah, I know." Jessica said hitting the bulls eye again.
"Hmm... Ever tried missing?" Danny asked.
"If I miss someone could die..." Jessica answered.
"Whatever..." Danny rolled his eyes.
That night...
The 'next place'...
Both heroes await the trouble to come on the roof of a building across the street of the next target.
"They're a little late, don't you think?" Danny noted to his sister.
"Yeah, we'll just wait a little longer before. We call it a night," Jessica said. Right as she said that two people came walking down the street, they both covered their faces. One was about ten feet tall, and maybe six feet wide. He was wearing a hoodie that amazingly covered him. The other person, was normal sized and very well covered.
"Who are they?" Danny asked.
"Sir, why did you want to come? There's no reason for you to be here. Also, Master could get mad that you're out." The big one whispered.
"I'm here to find a challenge and I don't care what he thinks." The smaller guy answered.
"So, what are we going to do?" Danny asked.
"I don't know... Those guys seem like real trouble. Especially the big guy. Maybe we should just call the cops right now and cover for them." Jessica answered.
"That's a coward's way out. What if those guys seriously hurt one of the cops?"
"Cyclone, we have to take precautions. We're just teenagers!"
"Yeah, super-human teenagers! C'mon, we can take care of them. If we just back down at every single challage, we'll never be as good as the Ultimate Marvels."
With that Cyclone took off at a great speed towards the enemies, leaving Arrow stunned at her brothers words. He's right... Arrow thought. She started to take aim and noticed her brother was already in trouble.
"Who in the hell might you be?" The big guy asked. "Are you the one causing our Master so much grief?" The enormous man said holding Cyclone up in just one of his palms, crushing him.
"I'm just the post man," Cyclone gasped. "I got a special delivery for an A. Hole" He snickered.
"There's no 'A. Hole' here."
"What are you talking about? I'm looking right at one."
Phhhhut
"ARRGGGHHHHH!!!!" The big guy yelled being hit by a sharp arrow in the shoulder. Cyclone was now able to get out.
Phhhhut
Another arrow was released, a stunner arrow. It hit the big guy, but it had no effect on him. By then he was able to take out the arrow. Not even noticing the blood pouring out on his hoodie. Right then he threw away his jacket and revealed himself.
"I'm the Wild Bull and I AM UNSTOPPABLE!!!" He yelled. Both Cyclone and Arrow marveled at the sight of Wild Bull. He was increbibly built.
"RARRRAAAAGGGHHHH!!!!!" He charged at Cyclone with surprising speed, but the speedster was still able to move easily out of the way. Wild Bull continued until he smashed the building across the street, where Arrow was standing. She was oblivious to how much power Wild Bull had in him.
BOOOMMMM
Wild Bull hit the building with an incredible force, Arrow was set off balance and fell off the building.
"OH, SHH--!!!!" She screamed while falling. Cyclone rushed over to her, but from the fall he wasn't able to tell if it mattered or not if she would survive the landing. Suddenly she began to glow red and her fall speed was decreasing. What's going on...? she thought as she landed, Cyclone was standing right next to her. They then saw who had saved Arrow. Three people were down the street, one guy in the middle, and two girls on each of his sides.
"Mind if we join the party?" The blonde girl asked, with a hint of a british accent.
"Sure..." Arrow said stunned. She couldn't believe their luck.
The guy from their group ran at the Wild Bull, he threw a tiny sphere at the giant and a flash shined from it blinded Wild Bull. He then took his chance to hit the giant with his staff, he didn't feel it. Wild Bull was frailing his arms erraticly, trying to fend off his attackers while he tried to regain his sight.
BAMMM
One of the girls punched Wild Bull, the hit was so hard he was knocked off his feet and fell to the floor.
BAMMM
The girl that punched Wild Bull was hit from behind with just about equal force of her hit. She was hit by the smaller guy that was with Wild Bull. His cloak fell off revealing his face, everyone was shocked.
"You, stupid children, now you'll feel the wraith of DRAGYNFOX!!!" _________________ Interpol Proud Member of the Ultimate Marvels
WHOOO new issue DONE... be out hopefully tomarrow. Sorry I've been out for awhile, my internets been acting up. _________________ Interpol Proud Member of the Ultimate Marvels
UltimateInterpol Productions Present... The Ultimate Outsiders
Issue #5: Fierce like a Fox
"DragynFox?" John asked.
DragynFox charged at John. He was the next closest target. Fox swung a punch at him, but John was easily able to dodge it. DragynFox did resemble DragynWulf in most ways except a little smaller and he could be seen as a dragon fox. Fox continued his charge at John, he simply waited for an opening. And there it is... John thought as he swung his Iron Knuckle at DragynFox.
"Bastard, you dare strike me?" DragynFox snarled fuming. John was surprised that his punch had such a pathetic effect.
"Crap..." John said.
BAMMM
John was knocked back into a wall. The costume he was wearing was all black, with a special kevlar polymer that took most of the punch's power away, otherwise it'd probably of killed him. DragynFox continued his attack on John, but he was already up and ready for more. Fox charged but was hit by an energy blast in his side. The blast came from Elise who was charging up and in the air. Her second blast was interuppted by Wild Bull. He grabbed her leg and swung her around and threw her at Arrow.
"Owww... Sorry about that." Elise apologized getting off of the Archer.
"Um... It's okay. Who are you guys?" Arrow asked.
"We're the Ultimate Outsiders." she answered with a smile.
"'Ultimate' Outsiders?"
"Hey, there's the 'Ultimate' Marvels. There's no reason we can't be." Elise said charging up her aura.
Two Weeks Ago...
Then it was over...
John was finally able to see again, the blinding light caused him temporary blindness. Everything was over, and Deathlok had dissappeared. Elise and Alice were still clutching on to him with there eyes closed. Then John finally realized that Elise had passed out, her aura had also faded away.
John finally spoke, "Alice are you alright?"
"Huh?" She pushed herself away from John, "Uh, y-yeah. D-Did we win?"
"Yeah, I think so..." John said holding up Elise. He was finally able to carry her in his arms.
"Oh man, Mr. Drew!!!" John said suddenly. They both turned to see Gaius Drew where they left him. They ran to him uncertain of what may have happened to him.
"Mr. Drew?" Alice asked.
"Hello, Outsiders?" He laughed, weakly.
"How did you survive?" Alice asked.
"Protective barrier... That cursed bite actually came in handy." He said showing his finger, it was covered in the black inkish liquid. There was a symbol on the ground showing a mystic marking.
"How's Elise? She didn't push herself too hard did she?" Gaius asked.
"She passed out, shielding us from the blast. I think she's only sleeping." John answered.
"J-John, I have something to ask you again. There's a vial in the mansion that can cure me of the curse. Can you find it for me? It's marked Haloclear."
"Um, there's a dragon on your house." Alice informed him.
"Don't worry about that. He's no longer under control by Darius. He'll find his way back to the Mystic Realm. Go, please, hurry." Gaius said sounding near death.
John and Alice looked at each other then Alice took off running. John gently laid Elise down near her father and tried to catch up to Alice.
BOOMMMM
Fafnir started to get up as the two heroes got closer. Fafnir looked at them both then moved it's tail, and pointed it at the heroes, a vial hanged by the tip, amazingly marked Haloclear.
"Uh, thanks." Alice said scared out of her mind. Then Fafnir took off into the sky, leaving both heroes to chase back after Gaius Drew. Alice slowly poured the vial down Gaius throat.
"Ahhh, thank you." He whispered.
"You're welcome." Alice said.
The rain continued to pour, but was more calm. Elise's head rested on top of Alice's lap. She stirred a few times but was still to weak to get up, Gaius on the other hand got up by himself.
"Ah, I feel as good as new. Here. Let me take a look at my daughter." He said coming over to where she was laying down.
"Hmm..." He sighed. "John, I need your help again."
"Uh, yes sir." John agreed, sitting down beside Gaius. Gaius then took both of Johns hands and made a small incision in both with a knife he had stored away in his coat, blood started to pour from both.
"What are you doing, sir?" John asked as Gaius took both of his hands and layed them on both of Elise's wrist.
"You see these stones on her bracelets and choker?" Gaius explained. John nodded, already having an idea of what they were.
"They're called Blood Gems, they are the source of her power. I'm a defender of the Human Realm from the perils of the Mystic Realm. So of course I have many enemies. I gave these to Elise to defend herself. The one drawback to them is they need to be feed with some type of blood." Gaius said. A few minutes pass and Elise finnally wakes up.
"GET OFF OF ME, YA CREEP!!!" She yelled at John.
"I wasn't doing anything." John responded back to her.
"Yeah right, creep..."
John sighed and looked at Gaius who was just smiling.
"Daddy!!! How could you do that to our house?!" Elise continued her yelling.
John was now smiling.
Time passed as the young heroes explained to Gaius exactly what happened with Deathlok. He was greatly impressed with how the heroes took care of themselves.
"Well, I must take my leave now." Gaius said.
"WHAT?!?!?!?!" Elise yelled. "What about the house?" she asked.
"Oh, about that... I'm sure one of your friends would be happy to oblige you in a temporary residence." Gaius answered.
"DAD, I don't know them that well..."
"So, you'll get to know each other better." Gaius said smiling. "You still know the account number right?"
"Yes, sir."
"Oh, and John... I have something to give to you in the future. Well, honey I'm sorry our time is cut short again. I have a mission right now but I'll be back for you soon." Elise and Gaius embraced each other.
"Love you." Elise said.
"I love you too, honey." Then Gaius was gone in a flash.
"So which one of you two are going to take me in?" Elise asked. John and Alice looked at each other with a worried look on their face.
Now...
DragynFox just received a face full of boot by John.
"You bastard. I'll show you things my master has shown me." Saying that Fox once again charged at John. Fox threw a punch but John was able to dodge, what John didn't see was the counter. Fox attacked with his tail, tripping John. The clouds became violent, and lightning struck where John was a second ago.
"Wha--? Oh, I see. You have a speedster with you also." DragynFox smirked. "There you are!" He exclaimed, grabbing out in the air. Suddenly his arms were around Cyclone who was choking for air.
"H-how did you do that?" Cyclone asked.
"My Hyper Sense, it can speed up my eyes to slow down what's going around me, namely you." Fox said with a smile.
Phhhhut
Three arrows made contact with DragynFox's shoulder.
"Let go of my brother!" Arrow called to DragynFox.
"Sure." He said hurling Cyclone at her sister, "AHAHAHAHAHA... you all are pathetic weak--"
BAMMM
Alice knocked DragynFox off his feet.
"How dare you hit me from behind!! JERK!!!" Alice yelled at him.
"Bi***!!" DragynFox yelled to her lying on the ground.
"WHAT WAS THAT?!?!" She continued to yell, punching Fox in a fit of rage raising the ground around them. John, Elise, Jessica and Danny were all staring at the ass-whupping taking place before them. Even Wild Bull ceased to fight and couldn't stop staring.
"GET OFF OF ME!!!!" DragynFox pushed her off and hit her straight in the face. She was sent back but was caught by Elise.
"NO MORE GAMES!!! YOU ALL DIE TONIGHT!!!" DragynFox screamed.
That sounds familiar... John thought.
To Be Continued... _________________ Interpol Proud Member of the Ultimate Marvels
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