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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 4:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That DragynWulf sure does get around... Rolling Eyes Laughing
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

very very very good
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 7:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AWSOME JOB MAN!!!!
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good work, keep it up!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's awesome!! Keep up the kick-your face in work
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 11:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

New Issue will release soon!!!!
The end of the First Arc!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

UltimateInterpol Produtions Present... The Ultimate Outsiders

Issue #6: Outsiders Dissassembled


Thunder clapped loudly from above, DragynFox was pissed, even Wild Bull began to retreat.
"Forget this! I know what happens when he gets like that..." He said to himself running away.
John rapidly thought of what to do.
DragynFox rose into the air, controling the sky it self, "YOU'LL ALL DIE NOW!!!" He declared.
He charged down towards Arrow, who was too scared to even move. Luckily, her brother was able to get her out of harms way.
BOOOMMM
DragynFox's punch caused a slight earthquake, damaging a few building in the process. He rose up and started to laugh hysterically.
Elise began to move in, preparing a strong energy blast. DragynFox was ready, unleashing a lightning bolt upon her. "Ugh!" Her aura was able to protect her from most of the bolt's energy.
"Ahahaha... I'm ready for all of you now," Fox sneered.
KA-KRASH
A car impacted DragynFox from behind, Alice was on the offensive once again. She delivered Fox three punches, John had taught her earlier.
VZAAPPPPPPP
An energy blast hit him from behind while Elise was already up from her last hit.
Phhhhut... Phhhut... Phhut
Three arrows made contact, hitting DragynFox's shoulder. DragynFox was looking at his wounds from each of the hits, he looked weakened. He then laughed at the tired Outsiders.
"You all are so weak. When will you get it through your thick skulls that you will not win this? Just give up." He suggested to them.
"Never." John answered back to his opponent.
"Hmm... You... You're the weakest and most pathetic of them all." He snickered at John.
"Fine, let us see..." He kept his cool, "Outsiders! Stand down! And you two..." He glanced at Arrow and Cyclone, "Stand down."
"What?" Arrow asked.
"Sorry, no offense but I want a chance at this guy alone." John said in his sternly tone.
"Be our guest..." Cyclone assured him.
John moved into a defensive position and brought out one of his batons.
"Ahahahahaha!!! Stop this! Stop!!! Ahu-hu-huh... Are you serious? All of you combined couldn't take me!! Hahahaha... What makes you think you can stop me by your self?" DragynFox sneered.
"Don't be worried about me." John replied.
John dodged Fox's incoming attacks.
Okay no need to be fancy. Just got to help him aim... John dodged, ...an attack... in... the... right...spot!
BOOMMM
DragynFox took out a huge chunk of the building.
Thank god these buildings are abandoned... John thought to himself as DragynFox was already chasing him again

The Ultimate Outsiders watched the battle carefully.
"Five bucks on the Lizard" Danny wagered.
"Shut up" Jessica scolded him.
"Hi, I'm Alice by the way!" She said putting out her hand towards Jessica.
"I'm Arrow, and this is my brother, Cyclo--"
"Are those your real names?" Alice asked, cutting her off.
"That's what you can call us..." Jessica told her trying to sound polite.
"You can call me Danny." Danny answered, shaking Elise's hand.
"Danny!" Jessica yelled, "We agreed to keep secret identies!"
"Sorry, sis. I forgot." He sarcastically shrugged.
BOOMMMM
Another building was struck.
"Who's that?" Jessica asked motioning towards the guy fighting DragynFox.
"Oh, that's John..." Alice answered.

"Stop jumping around, you little monkey!!!" DragynFox yelled at John, who was getting slower as he got more tired. DragynFox seemed to be getting slower also.
POWWW
John got hit straight in the gut.
"Ha! I told you I have a hyper sense."
John fell to his knees, he could barely hear DragynFox's remarks. He felt like he got hit by a cannonball.
"Hm-hm..." John began to laugh. DragynFox looked at him as if he was crazy.
"You little bastard... You're about to die. The last thing you should be doing is begging me for a quick death!" DragynFox commanded, bothered by his chuckles.
John continued to snicker, "Ahaha!" DragynFox picked him up by the collar, "Die, scuumm--"
John threw a couple of thermal charges in his mouth then kicked his chest to get away from him.
BOOMMM
DragynFox's mouth erupted with an expulosion, smoke covered his entire head. When it cleared a very angry DragynFox head was still attached, "You PUNK!!! YOU'LL PAY FOR THAT!!!" he screamed.
John brought up a detonator a clicked it.
BOOMMM
An explosion blew up behind DragynFox. He turned to look, only to see a building about to collapse on him, one that he made unstable during the fight, one that John was able to get close enough and plant explosives on.
"Oh, shhh--" was all DragynFox able to get out.
CRASSHHH
The avalanche of scattered rocks fell on him.

"Wow, that was pretty cool, did you kill him?" Cyclone questioned, impressed.
"Danny!" Arrow snapped.
"What happened to 'code names'?" He responded without skipping a beat.
"Shut up..."
"No, he's not dead. It'll take a lot more to take him down." John answered.
"So what do we do?" Cyclone asked.
"We let the cops finish this." John said.
"Whoa, what?" Arrow asked. "They won't be able to contain him. Plus, we all know his 'Master', will get him off with nothing more then a slap on the wrist."
"We can't do nothing about that now. Don't worry he'll be getting a lot worse then a slap on the wrist." John assured Arrow.
"How do you know?" Alice asked.
"We all know that DragynWulf hates those who fail to follow his every order. Not only did we stop him from his mission, we made a fool of his disciple." John explained to her.
Everyone nodded at his logic.
"C'mon. Let's go. I need to talk to you both about something," John announced to Elise and Alice, "You both can come also... Arrow and... Cyclone, right?" John asked with some faint unassurance.
"Sure. But what's this all about?" Arrow asked.
"Yeah, what is this all about?" Elise added.
"Look, I want us all to stop crime fighting for awhile..." John declared.
"What!?" The group awed in unison.
"Let's meet at the first Ultimate Marvel's Base in half an hour, we'll talk there."
"Why don't we talk about it now?" Jessica asked.
"The cops are coming and we know what they all think about vigilantes." John answered. "Let's just scatter for now. Ya'll know the place?" John asked Arrow and Cyclone.
"Yeah, but we might not come." Arrow answered.
"Whatever, careful with your costumes." John suggested, leaving the group.
"It was nice meeting you... um, Arrow and Danny." Alice said walking in another direction.
"So long!" Elise waved, flying to the roof tops.
Jessica and Danny were left there alone.
"We should go, sis." Danny told her.
"I'm not sure yet, bro." Jessica replied.
This surprised Danny. He was wondering why she didn't just say no. That's usually the way she was...

30 minutes later...
Outside the old Ultimate Marvels HQ...


Elise and Alice were already there conversating about what John had told them.
"What do you think he might mean by 'stop fighting crime'?" Alice asked Elise.
"I don't know, but ever since I started living with you, he's been acting distant with us. I can't even find him during lunch at school or anything." Elise answered.
"God, I hope we don't get in trouble. It has to already be close to midnight." Alice widened her eyes.
"Don't worry so much. Since we've been bunking, your mom seems a lot happier that we gone and broke the rules." Elise said back.
Alice just sighed.
"Am I interupting, ladies?" A voice was heard two feet away from them.
"What the--? Where did you come from?" Alice jumped back, startled.
"What? Am I too fast for you?" Danny laughed as he walked to her.
"Are we late?" Jessica asked the two girls.
"No, actually you beat John." Elise told her.
"Actually, I've been here the whole time." A voice said from the shadows of an alley they were next to.
"Gosh, why does everyone keep popping up everywhere?" Alice remarked while placing her hand on near her heart.
"Sorry." John muttered.
"What's this all about, John?" Elise asked.
"Well, we're all young superheroes and I want to ask everyone if they would like to stay this way. I mean, we're all in our late teens. We have a lot to look forward to. Some of us don't even have any powers, but I want to help and I hope I've proven myself somewhat tonight that I'm capable of being in this game. I want everyone to stop fighting crime for a three days and think about this. Some of you want to keep your ability a secret, I promise that it will be kept that way. Just call this number when you all think you are ready. If not... Well, the Ultimate Outsiders are finished."
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You and your amazing cliffhangers, interpol!! Razz
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks man!!! Whew I've got alot of work to do!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Typing it up?
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah man, I've got something big planned for the next issues. It's funny I should call it Ultimate Origins.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm... Go for it! Laughing
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 11:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kicki ass man
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i like it alot alot alot
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 1:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow! That issue was really good! You've dreamed up a great team Interpol!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ULTIMATE OUTSIDERS SEASON 2
Coming soon!

Be prepared as I am back (sorry I dissappeared like that but the summer can do that to you sometimes). I'll be back guys in the mean time keep writing that good stuff!!!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interpol's back!! Sound the bells! The Master of Suspense is back!!! Wooooo!!!! Mr. Green
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HELL YEAHHHHHH!!!!!!! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 5:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks alot guys!!! Kevin I hope you'll be ready by friday, because I have an issue coming in.
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Totally, man!
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