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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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| I just noticed that we forgot about Kazekun and KARAN!! They didn't fight anybody!! |
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Interpol Ving Rhames

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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:47 am Post subject: |
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Woah, Man this is...
AWESOME
Really man this was great. The bar just shot up the roof. hehe |
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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:51 am Post subject: |
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| Thanks, man!!! |
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CowBoy From Hell Site Admin

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Glad you guys liked it. _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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rob-spidey-11 I'm a core member!

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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:07 am Post subject: |
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| Good Chapter |
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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:15 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks, Rob!! |
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CowBoy From Hell Site Admin

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UltimateCowBoy productions Presents.............
Issue 11
CowBoy opened his eyelid. His vision was incredibly hazy and blurry. He saw a faint figure next to him. He turned to his hand and noticed it was twitching uncontrolably. He slowly closed his eyes again.
Hours passed and he opened his eyelids. This time his vision was a little more focused than before. He whispered a moaning sound and slowly sat up.
This whole time he was on a couch and Interpol was sitting on a chair next to him; glaring.
"How... how longwassi out...?" CowBoy's throat was in vast pain.
"A week. You healed up pretty fast." Interpol answered him.
He could barely hear him. His ears were still shot from when he was falling, "Yeah... That's... that's the tech..." He chuckled. His pain was slowly going away.
"Stand up."
"What?" He met Interpol's eyes.
"I said: stand up."
CowBoy squinted his eyes just enough so he could see Interpol, "Why?"
"Because. You were the first person that didn't die from my shots. I was just going to finish you that day on the street, but I figured that wasn't fair."
"So... What're the rules, then?" CowBoy got up from the bed with a cockey smile. He stepped on the floor and noticed that he could barely stand. He placed his hand on the couch so he wouldn't fall.
"No powers, I won't use my bow. Deal?"
"Yeah, alright; deal."
Back then.
"Where's Kazekun and KARAN?" Asked Rob.
"Well, we knew these guys were coming so we wanted to catch them off guard. They stayed behind to set up the new base and get supplies." Bobby answered.
"Oh... Wait, where's the new place?"
"Oh, you'll see."
"It's great. We can all have our own room and there's a huge room that we can put a TV and games."
"Video games?" UltimateKevin and A1 asked at the same time.
"Maybe..." Emo-Girl replied as she stepped she tripped and fell on a rock.
"Ow!!" She looked towards the small pebble, "That rock just went all ghetto on me!" She wailed while pointing towards it.
Everyone suddenly burst out laughing; they couldn't help it.
Now.
Interpol threw the first punch. CowBoy smacked the attack aside and tried to hit but was kicked back. Interpol let loose, this time CowBoy ducked and cracked Interpol in the ribs. Interpol brought his elbow down on CowBoy's head. CowBoy spun around and swiped Interpol's legs out. As he fell Interpol impacted CowBoy's knee joint, causing him kneel backwards. They both fell to the floor. They looked at each other catching their breaths and jumped up.
"Nice... moves." CowBoy commented, panting.
"You... too. I guess you can live." He reached his hand to shake CowBoy's, "Someone with your skill should be able to survive a shot like that. Let's go find your team."
"Oh... A1 and Kevin and Rob must be in hell."
"Don't forget Bobby, Nicole, KARAN and Kazekun."
"WHAT??!!"
Bobby pushed open the door revealing the giant complex. There were a fleet of circling stairs and over a dozen doors. The main room they were in was immense.
"Looks like we're going to be here. Welcome to the new home of the Ultimate Marvels." Bobby's words echoed four times.
"Wow!!" UltimateKevin exclaimed.
"No way!" Rob widened his eyes in surprisement.
"Fantastic." Atlantean stared blankly.
"Whoa..." Max was unsure if this was a dream or not.
"WOOOO-HOOOOO!!!!!" A1 yelled and it took a minute for the echoes to stop.
"Hi, guys." Kazekun greeted the team as he typed quickly on keyboards connected to a gigantic screen.
"Hello." KARAN's entire body was linked to cables. His eyes kept changing colors as if vibrating.
"Hey, you an android?" Atlantean was fascinated by KARAN's anatomy.
"Yes. I assume you are a--"
Atlantean quickly placed his hand on KARAN's mouth, "Don't say it, please!" He removed his hand.
"May I ask why?" KARAN asked.
"I don't want anybody to know... Please don't tell..."
"You have my word. What is your name?"
"IMAtlantean. You?"
"KARAN_D3." They both shook hands.
"How did you ever find this place?" A1 asked Bobby as they were packing things up.
"Well, before that explosion that took place (thanks to DragynWulf), Kazekun immediately healed us all and we jumped through the glass windows just in time and ran across rooftops."
"Really?"
"Then we searched for a good hiding place. KARAN scanned the city and we found this."
"Cool."
"I think this place was once called "Forumland" or something..."
"Max-- right? I'm Emo-Girl. Thanks for the backup earlier." She lifted her hand to greet Max.
"Anytime." Max made a faint smile as he shook her hand.
"You and Atlantean friends or something?" Emo asked him.
"Yeah, he and I go way back..." Max answered.
"It's good to know we have another guy who can control fire."
"Who else has pyrokinesis here?"
"Oh, this guy called Cow--" Suddenly the entire place was illuminated in varianting lights and metal doors locked hold shut allowing nobody to enter.
"What is it, KARAN?!" Kazekun screamed.
"It seems... No, it is mearly--"
The lights faded away and the doors rised up, "--CowBoy and Interpol."
They both walked in with arms around each other's shoulders.
"CowBoy!!!" Emo-Girl flew to him and was followed by everyone else.
"You're all right!!" She lowered herself down grabbed ahold of him, lifting him off the floor.
"Agh!!" He grunted, "Emo, you're... You're hurting me!!"
"Oh, I'm so sorry!!" She let go of him.
"Thanks... I missed you too." He reached to hug her back.
"You are so lucky to be alive, man. It's not even funny!" Rob told him.
"Messing with Dragyn like that! It's a miracle you're still standing!" A1 commented.
CowBoy immediately noticed his surroundings, "Nice digs!"
"Wait... why're you so messed up, Interpol?" Bobby asked him.
"Oh... nothing..." He looked towards CowBoy and smiled.
"And I assure you, this is our permanent home; officially." Bobby told everyone.
"Good, 'cuz I'm not gonna move ever again!! This place is awesome!!" UltimateKevin yelled across.
Bobby smiled as he walked towards the rest of the team knowing that whatever happens; The Ultimate Marvels would be there.
Placed in the middle of the HQ was a golden plaque that read:
The Ultimate Marvels' official HQ
1] Bobby
2] Emo-Girl
3] A1
4] CowBoy from Hell
5] UltimateKevin
6] Rob
7] KARAN_D3
8] Max452x5
9] Atlantean
10] Interpol _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:10 am Post subject: |
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That ending makes me feel all good inside... 
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CowBoy From Hell Site Admin

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:13 am Post subject: |
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Kinda does dont it. _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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CowBoy From Hell Site Admin

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:14 am Post subject: |
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HOLY CRAP!!!! 2000 POSTS!!!!!!! _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:18 am Post subject: |
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Congrats, man!!!
HOLY CRAP!!! I have 2,400 posts!!! |
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A1 Steak Sauce No-Prize Holder

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:11 am Post subject: |
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Wait that's not it, is it? There's more, right? The series isn't done is it? _________________ "THE ULTIMATE MARVEL TRIVIA GAME! C'mon it's Fun!"
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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:19 am Post subject: |
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| Oh, we're far from over, A1! Far, far from over!! |
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A1 Steak Sauce No-Prize Holder

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:20 am Post subject: |
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THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn was I worried! *Whew* GREAT ISH GUYS! Another masterpiece! _________________ "THE ULTIMATE MARVEL TRIVIA GAME! C'mon it's Fun!"
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CowBoy From Hell Site Admin

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:24 am Post subject: |
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Typeing the next ish right now. _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:25 am Post subject: |
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| Thanks, man! It's worth doing all this work just to see you guys appreciate it more than CowBoy and I! |
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CowBoy From Hell Site Admin

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:28 am Post subject: |
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I agree with you kevin. _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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UltimateKevin! Chuck Norris

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:35 am Post subject: |
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It's undoubtly true, man...  |
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Interpol Ving Rhames

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 11:36 pm Post subject: |
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Good issue guys, great work as always. It's nice seeing the full established team. Great ending to a great arc. thanks for making my character so cool.  |
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CowBoy From Hell Site Admin

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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:03 am Post subject: |
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No problem. Besdies we didnt add much from the orignal you to make him cool. _________________ CowBoy From HEll
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