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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This was great man, like I said before, you and your cliffhangers Laughing
Can't wait for the next issue dude. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks!
Hey, he does! Laughing
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 3:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Atlantean you might like the next issue.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

YAY
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

UltimateCowBoy Productions presents........



Issue 9








Rob and UltimateKevin stood on the roof of Cowboy's home.
"Bobby and Karen... It's... it's so unreal." Rob placed his hand on his forehead.
"I've only known you guys for a short time and yet..." Kevin looked downwards.
"Guys!" A1 ran up stairs, "CowBoy just woke up and wants to know what the hell happened."
UltimateKevin bowed his head as they walked down to see CowBoy lying down on his couch.
"Kevin, what... what happened?" CowBoy asked still hesitating to say words.
"An explosion. DW... He killed...." But UltimateKevin could not finish. He didn't have the heart to tell him.
CowBoy squinted his eyes and gritted his teeth, "And how long ago was this?"
"Two weeks..."
CowBoy glanced at Rob and A1 to see if what he had heard was indeed true. Both heroes had a sorrow look to them.
CowBoy stared back to his sheets and eventually got up and walked past A1 and Rob. He reached to the door and stopped... and he walked out of the room.
Kevin followed.
"Where you going?" Kevin asked.
"Where the hell do you think? To kill DragonWulf."
"But it's not as easy as before! He now controls the city. You wouldn't get near him for crap." Kevin warned as he put his hand on CowBoy's shoulder.
"Yeah, well..." CowBoy burst into flames, "It's my fault they're dead anyways. I was still in pain but I kept my mouth shut and we went anyway. I'm..." He clenched his fist, "... I'm going to avenge them. You can stay in my house if you want." And with that CowBoy left.
Kevin knew he couldn't advise him to do otherwise so he walked back in.


Rob rapidly tapped on the computer's keyboards. He had hacked the security camera that was placed down the street where the rest of the team had "died", "What the hell...?" He leaned forward the screen: it showed 4 people sprinting out of the back of the building just before it had exploded, "Kevin, A1!!!" Rob yelled at the top of his lungs as he ran out of the house.
"What?" A1 asked.
"Follow me..."
They ran all the way to the building without so much as a small conversation. They ran behind the tower to find a giant hole in the ground. As they went to jump down they were stopped in mid-air.
"What's going on?!" Kevin screamed.
"Look..." Rob gestured his head to two people that had jumped down.
"Well, if it isn't the men in tights. IMAtlantean," The man in the white mask said, "And this is Max." He moved both arms to the other man next to him.
He had long red hair and a mad-looking face. He nodded.
"You guys are the Ultimate Marvels, aren't ya?" Max asked them.
"Yeah... Can you, uh, drop us down, please?" A1 politely wished.
"Oh, yeah. Sorry..." Atlantean's eyes turned pitch-black and the team was lowered back to the earth, "We were both looking for you. We wanted to join your little team you guys got going on. With DragynWulf corrupting our city; we thought we could do some 'community work'."
"Well, what're your powers?" Rob quizzed them both.
"See, I can manpulate gravity and Max... Well, for the sake of simplicity; Max is kinda like a god." Atlantean patted his friend on the back.
"Well, I guess you guys have the requirements... But listen: we're following a lead. Now, we weren't expecting new members at all. But... we could use some extra help... Care to join us?" Rob asked.
Atlantean and Max both nodded and with that they all jumped down the hole.


They walked for hours without talking. They had no idea where the tunnel went but they continued to follow. Just as they were about to turn back Rob had noticed some ice...


A few fire balls took out the guards that were defending DragonWulf's newly intsalled throne room. CowBoy kicked open the doors, " YOU'RE TIME'S UP, DRAGYNWULF!!!!! YOU KILLED MY FRIENDS SO NOW YOU'LL DIE!!!!!"
DragynWulf stepped out into the light and smiled.
CowBoy charged towards him and Dragyn did the same....
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Y'know what I just noticed? I put "community work" instead of "community service"! Laughing
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

CRAP I FORGOT THE TITLE!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow! Great job! May I point out though, that you forgot the title? No biggie! You can fix it! What a couple of issues! Great job guys!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok. All better.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh yeah!! I forgot also! Laughing Thanks for the heads up, A1!
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

NICE!!!, man head to head
COWBOY VS. DRAGYNWULF
LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!!!!!
This is going to be good!!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 2:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's the best fight I've ever scripted!!
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

havent been on in a while while (wild week last week- 4 baseball games, 2 year aniversary w/ gf, Frazzel Snazzel, renasiance fair project, junior prom, shore after prom) but im caught up and its great
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 10:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

UltimateCowBoy Productions Presents.........


The giant Double Sized action Packed Issue 10





CowBoy combusted into flames as he delivered Dragyn a blow to his left cheek. Dragyn fell back in pain,"GAAAHHH!!!"
But CowBoy refused to stop releasing punches.
"Enough!!" Dragyn palmed CowBoy in the chest and he got up.
"No!!" CowBoy immediately flamed on and did not touch the floor. He smoked Dragyn with a couple fire balls. He finished his assault with a mighty uppercut to Dragyn's chin that sent him up to the roof and back down to the floor due to gravity's cruel law.
CowBoy smiled as he saw DragynWulf laying with blood seeping through his mouth. CowBoy turned around to leave and was suddenly tackled by Dragyn.
"AGH!!!" He screamed as he crashed onto the floor with the immense weight of DragynWulf.
"Poor, poor CowBoy... You thought it was over?" Dragyn chuckled as he elbowed CowBoy on the back of his head, "I will crush every single bone in your body!!"
CowBoy gritted his teeth and snarled as he exploded into fire, "NNNOOOO!!!!" He bellowed as he blew Dragyn away, "I won't let you win, DragynWulf!!!"
Dragyn popped a few veins and his eyes grew bloody red again, "BOY!!!! YOU SHALL SUFFER DIRE CONSEQUENCES!!!!!" He screamed loudly.
CowBoy scoffed and lifted his right hand and gestured him to come forward.
Dragyn did not take this lightly as he rushed towards him. CowBoy quickly released his anger soley on his right arm and Dragyn, noticing this, dodged to his right and sank his teeth onto CowBoy's shoulder.
"AAAAUUUUGGGHHH!!!!!!!!" CowBoy screamed in pain.
Dragyn let go and let him fall to the floor. He grabbed onto his head and raised up, "Foolish boy..." Dragyn walked towards him.



Rob, A1, UltimateKevin, Atlantean, and Max sprinted to where they heard voices. The voices grew and grew and they managed to catch up to Bobby, Emo-Girl, KARAN, and Kazekun who were showing their backs to them.
"Guys!!" A1 yelled.
They walked closer to Bobby's group and noticed that they were in their offensive position against four other opposing men. Out of the four, only Interpol was the only one the team could identify.
"'Bout time you guys showed up..." Bobby commented.
"So... what're your names again?" Emo asked the four men.
"Does it really matter?" Interpol responded.
"I'd like to know a guy's name before I whup their ass..."
"I am The Darknight." The man in a black full body medieval armor with a crimson sheath carefully placed on his hip answered.
The figure next to him stepped forward. He had goggles on him and other miscellaneous technical weapons, "I'm Nightvision."
Next to his right was giganticly tall male with black gloves and a switchknife in his left hand, "Name's Jordan Mitchell, kiddies." He glanced at A1 and lifted his head towards him.
Leaning on Jordan was Interpol who had his arms crossed the whole time, "And together we're DragynWulf's little bodyguards."
"I thought we took off your neckchain, Interpol!" Bobby barked at him.
"You didn't think it mattered if I had the damn chain or not, did you?"
Bobby sighed, "Aw, well... So we're going to stand here all day or what?"
Interpol without hesitation fired three arrows towards him but Bobby froze them before contact.
Rob suddenly jumped and, with his blade, slashed Darknight in the middle of his chest. He landed squatting, "You a sword-wielder too, huh? this oughta be fun." Both warriors clashed with their own swords.
"What took ya so long?" Emo-Girl asked Kevin as she smacked Nightvision.
"Oh, you know..." Before hitting the floor, UltimateKevin hit Nightvision's left ribs with some bricks, "Traffic and all..." Kevin smirked as Nightvision landed on the floor.
Atlantean picked up Interpol and just kept him floating motionless while Bobby freezed him in an ice cell, "Good job, uh... I didn't catch your name..."
"IMAtlantean at your service." He answered as he shook hands with his leader.
A1 punched Jordan right in his face, "Listen, man. I don't want to fight you. Just give up." He suggested.
"Yeah, whatever, asshole..." He jabbed A1 back.
"I'm a WHAT??!!" A1 ignored the hit and clenched his fists.
"An asshole?"
"And why would you go and say something like that?" A1 kept his cool and asked the big man.
"Because... Y-Y-YOU JUST ARE, OK???!!!" At this point he was afraid of the hero who was half his size.
"Well! I dont take that lightly..." A1 sprinted forward and windmill kicked him. As Jordan falls back A1 drowned him with his steak sauce...
Rob and Darknight were going at it one on one with their blades. When one attacked; they would switch from the edge of the blade to the face of the sword to defend himself. Their attacks were as fast as lightning-- and it felt like getting struck, too. Rob ducked an attack and spin kicks his legs out from underneath him. As he fell Rob reached forward and grabbed ahold of Darknight's chain around his neck. He ripped it off returning the confused warrior back to normal.
Emo-Girl and Max double-teammed Nightvision. Emo-Girl smacked the techy hard. Max jumped forward and his eyes turned black. As a result: pillars of flames erupted around Nightvision, "AUGH!!!" He screamed in pain.
"MAX, BACK IT DOWN!!!!" Atlantean commanded.
Max let the fire go and the chain fell off from Nightvision.
A1 was beating on Jordan, "YOU ATTACK MY FRIENDS AND CALL ME AN ASSHOLE!!! YOU'RE GONNA PAY!!!!" A1 yelled with a successful punch.
Jordan smiled as he pulled his knife. He jumped behind A1 and placed it near his throat, "STOP OR HE DIES!!!" He yelled at the team with a sick smile.
Before anyone could say anything the smile faded away. An arrow stuck out of Jordan's shoulder. Jordan quickly let go of A1 and ran off. Everyone turned to see Interpol.
"Dammit, what the hell?! The last two people I've shot at haven't died??" He told himself with a surprosed frown, "My aim's off..."




CowBoy sprinted and jumped at Dragyn. He threw a punch so hard that when it landed, his tech glove shatter on his hand. When it broke away it revealed extenseive tatooing. DragynWulf recognized them immediately.
"You're with that clan? But there dead!!"
"By your hands!! So you'll die for both of my clans."
CowBoy punched him in the shoulder. The skin on his shoulder broke open.
"How?!" Dw questioned through his clenched teeth.
"These aren't to protect me, you know; they limit the power I can bring exert."
And with that CowBoy smashed the other one across Dragyn's right cheek...



"Thanks, guys..." Bobby thanked out of breath.
"How did you guys get out?" Rob asked.
"We had Nicole punch through the wall. Sorry, we couldn't get you guys. Oh! But we found a new place for our team. We had to wait for the best time possible to come back to get you guys."
"Well as long as you guys are OK..." A1 stated.
"Oh and these guys are Altlantean and Max. They're the newest recruits for The Ultimate Marvels... They can join, right?" Kevin asked.
"Fine, Only because you all kicked ass..." Bobby replied.
"Can I, too?" Interpol interrupted he said after he smashed the chain.
"Well, why not? Sure..." Bobby answered.
"What do we do with DW's lackies?" Kevin asked.
"Let them send the message to DragynWulf; there's a revolution coming."
"Where's CowBoy?" Asked Emo-Girl.
"Shhhhit... Um... He thought you were dead... See, we were outside the tower trying to break back in. The door wouldn't budge expect for heat. So CowBoy went to melt it but ihs side had broken open and he passed out from blood loss seconds before the explosion. He blamed your deaths on him and went to kill off Dragyn." A1 explained.
"Aw, no..." Bobby and Emo-Girl exclaimed at the same time...



Dragyn swung his tail around catching CowBoy in his ribs. CowBoy screamed as he heard his ribs crack.
"Dra-DragynWulf..." He said between spits of blood, "You're about to find out why I'm called 'CowBoy from Hell'."
"Oh, really? And what do you have in mind?"
"I want you to walk --walk with me in Hell!" He said as he exploded. The entire room burst into flames. CowBoy was covered in them. He rushed forward and backhanded Dragyn across the room.
As he flew CowBoy burned him with flames. The second Dragyn had landed onto the ground, CowBoy was upon him. Strikinging him into the ground.
Suddenly the sprinklers came on causing CowBoy to turn his head. As he did Dragyn kicked him across the room.
CowBoy landed and the sprinklers had put out the room and him. Dragyn jumped and landed next to him.
He crushed CowBoy's face into the ground, "GAAAAHH!!!!" He screamed.


Bobby turned on a TV in the spot they were staying at. It flicked on to the news, "We are live at the home of DragynWulf. Twenty minutes ago, a fight broke out in the building. Five minutes ago, the throne room of the building burst into flames and was put out by the sprinkler system mintues later. We can see DragynWulf fighting a man but we cannot make out the description. Wait... The police are making us leave. We have been told to leave or we could die...."
None of them said anything. They just hoped and prayed.



DragynWulf pummeled at CowBoy. CowBoy threw a punch with his left arm and Dragyn grabbed it and ripped his shoulder out of socket. He grabbed ahold of CowBoy and smashed him into a wall. CowBoy stuck in it. Dragyn rammed one of his fingers into CowBoy's guts ripping through the skin. CowBoy fell to his knees clutching onto his side and fell to the floor. Dragyn picked him up by his head and noticed a shattered window.
"I hope you can fly, boy!!" He lifted up his leg and threw CowBoy with all of his weight out of the window. He laughed maniacly as he realized that his throne room was ten stories tall.




The camera caught CowBoy falling. The team all leaned towards the TV screen. Atlantean tried his best to slow CowBoy's fall from where he was but he had no clue know how far away they were from CowBoy.
The camera turned back to the reporter, "The police have ordered everyone to evacuate the city. Please get out while you still can."
Everyone turned around horrified. Interpol was missing...



CowBoy laid on the floor in disbelief. He was bleeding everywhere and could not stop gasping for air. He feared he was about to die. He tilted his head to the right and noticed a man appeared in front of him. He held a bow...
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Oh, my gosh... I just caught like 4 mistakes on my account... Laughing
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 11:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Beautiful guys! That mitchell vs me part rocked!


And The DW vs Cowboy was possibly the best fight scene I've ever read! Nothing but praise to you guys! Keep it up! I love it! Every second of it!
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One word: WOW
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Thanks, guys!!
I feel so embarassed right now... Embarassed
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UltimateKevin! wrote:
Thanks, guys!!
I feel so embarassed right now... Embarassed



Don't! It's easy to overlook a few minor errors! Fantastic job as always!
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 11:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I laughed so hard when I put ""Dammit, what the hell?! The last two people I've shot at haven't died??" He told himself with a surprosed frown" and also ""These aren't to protect me, you know; they limit the power I can bring exert."" Laughing
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