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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 12:26 am Post subject:

Hardcore stuff! Shocked

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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 12:27 am Post subject:

I think you guys are going to like his first day at school.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 1:05 am Post subject:

“Why are you telling us this shit. This is point less. What does this have to do with how you got to hell. Are you plotting something? Are you just stalling for time? WHAT ARE YOU TELLING US THIS POINTLESS CRAP FOR!!!” Baldy said.

“Because this point less crap is my life and if you want to know how I got into hell you will have to be a good little baldy and listen up. This will help you understand the point of hell itself. Why if there is a true god he would send a man down there.”

“Oh..” He said quietly

“Shut you right up didn’t it baldy.” I said.

“FINISH THE STORY!!” Yelled Lydecker

“Fine fine.”

Me and Kate were walking to school. A car drove by blaring rap out of its speakers.

“I hate that.” I said
“Hate what?”
“That!” I said pointing to the car,
“You hate that car?”
“NO! The music like that! Blaring it all over the place. The only time you need music that loud is at a concert.”
“Yeah what if people like it that loud?”
“Then when they are deaf ill point a laugh.”
“Oh your just a modest citizen aren’t you? By the way how’s the nose?”
”Better. It looks better then it feels. And it looks halfway normal.”
“Mostly.” She said with a smile.

First three classes weren’t hard. Easy if you ask me but hey. What ever. Lunch rolled around and I had just got my lunch when to guys came up.

“Can I help you two?”
“You the new guy right?”
“Yes. What you guys going to try and pull a prank on me or something?”
”Nope. Its just that there’s this toll for eating in the cafeteria.”
“Oh really? Here let me get some money out.” I said as I reached in my pocket. They snickered. All I pulled out was the bird.
“Give us you money!”
“Guys do we really have to do this right now? Id just beat your asses in front of your school and probably spill my lunch here. And it just looks so damn good!”
“Give it to us NOW!”
“Give you what? My lunch? Or my money? Come on man be more specific!”
The kid on the left swung first. I caught his hand half way too me and smacked him across the face with my tray. As idiot number two swung I just kept swinging with my tray hand even though the tray was now rammed into number ones face. In a single sweep they were both on the ground with me standing over them triumphant. Heroes must feel like this all the time. Expect for when the vice principal throws you into principals office before you know what hit you. After missing two more of my classes for the screaming I received from my principal about the zero tolerance rule and how he’d give me a second chance because I’m new here I just walked out the door when the end of the day bell rang. I couldn’t find Kate in the mess of people but I knew that if she wanted to talk she knew where to find me. I walked through our already emptied school just to see it all. Have never seen a school this place amazed me like a child seeing Disney land. As I walked I thought about what it would be like to go there as well. That’s when I heard talking. I would have ignored it had it not been for the word “Bank Robbery” popping up several times in less then a minute. They were around the next corner. I laid against the wall and listened to the conversation.

“So next Thursday right? That’s the planed date right?” One said.

“Yes. That’s the day. We do it as the bank closes. Less people. Less security. Cops would never expect it.” Said the next

“Good. And transport? We got it right?” Said a third voice

“Yeah. All lined up.” Said the first.

“Thursday, Memorial Alliance bank. At closing time. Gentlemen. Prepare to get rich.” Said the third.

As they finished I was off and running. I had to get back to the ware house and relay this.

A dead sprint got me from the school to the ware house in ten minutes. As I ran my mind raced about what I had heard.

I ran through the door and quickly found my father. He listened intently to my story.
When I finished he spoke

“You will wait before you do anything. No need to try anything before they have weapons and supply’s. When they have that take them down and the cops will arrest them. Clear?”
All I could do was nod at this plan…
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Interpol · Ving Rhames Joined: 28 Jan 2007 Posts: 737 Location: Texas

Dude this is a really different out look on your character. These single character fics really give and interesting take on the character because just from reading UM you don't really get to know the character from a personal point a view. So like this one and a1's yall just make it so awesome to read these. Also I like how original you make the character and the relationship with the dad. Great Job and keep it up!!!

Maybe I should do an interpol one Very Happy

maybe...
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 11:15 pm Post subject:

...That's not a bad idea, dude.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 11:41 pm Post subject:

Nice ish, Cowboy! Great origin!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 12:47 am Post subject:

I think it would be cool if every one did their own little mini series but you know that cant always happen. If you plan on doing that man send me a pm ok interpol?

Oh and thanks guys!
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Comic-Geek-Tom · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 12:36 pm Post subject:

another awesome story here cowboy! GREAT!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 11:30 pm Post subject:

The next week flew by. I waited in every class, listening to every whisper-- every word that floated through each class. I only heard whispers come directly from the boys during lunch on Tuesdays. Thursday mornings my father said no words to me. When I went to leave, he bowed to me. No words needed for what this day held for me. I hadn’t spoken to Kate at all expect for that Tuesday. That day I had finally asked her on a date for Saturday night but received no response. Just a kiss on the cheek before she walked away.

This day was different. It seemed to drag on like a snail dragging glue. Each class a different scenario went through my mind as what might happen when I approached them. One ended with my death as rain poured down my dead body. This one had the most affect on me due to the fact that at lunch the rain started. My last two classes dragged on even slower then the first three. I thought I would die from old age before I fought the self proclaimed “Bank Robbers”. As my mind said this, the final bell rang and classes were let out into the pouring rain-- game time.

I wandered the halls for half an hour before finding them, around a corner just like last time. I overheard their excited speech about the plans ahead. I heard a click that sounded like a pistol cocking. So I turned the corner.

“Hello. Nice day for a bank robbery, huh?” I pointed out calmly.

“'Bout time you got here. Been waiting all day! Oh, and before you ask, the name's Jimmy.” Said Jimmy. All three of them looked like normal students. But I got the feeling like there wasn’t something right here.

“What do you mean?”
“We’ve been waiting for you. See our da’s know that ‘ou have freaky AME POWERS!!!” Yelled the middle one with the heavy accent.

Jimmy spoke up again, “Still don’t get it, huh? See we aren’t the bank robbers. Our Dads' are. They knew you’d try and stop 'em 'cuz you the goody-goody-two-shoes type. So he told us to lure you here, then beat the snot outta ya. Get it now?”

“Thanks for the plan, folks. See now if you try anything I'll put you to the ground with ease and then do the same to your fathers. I’ve got powers, you idiots!”

Jimmy laughed as both his arms feel to the floor. Not off but reached down to it.
“Mine’s kinda weird. See I can make my arms grow in any shape or direction. Even increase the muscle size. I just can only do it in my arms though.” He said as he raised his right arm at me. Before I could move, it flew forward and crushed me into the wall.

“You now, Graham.” Called Jimmy.

“See I ‘an control the density of any 'ting really. I can make it way twenty tons before I throw it at you. And I can revert it back, too.”

Jimmy’s arm reverted back leaving me breath less against the wall. Graham picked up a pencil, then threw it. I dodged but the force of the object knocked me to the ground. It crashed into a set of lockers, imploding them on impact.

“What about him?” I said pointing to the last man.

“If you beat both of us and actually get to him...” He paused, “...you’ll find out. I don’t think you’ll like it though.” Jimmy alerted as he smiled.
Instantly, his arms grew to the size of small cars as he leapt at me. He brought them together over his head before bringing them down at me. I jumped back within inches of the main attack. The shock wave and rubble still sent me flying. I rolled across the floor cutting me up and knocking me senseless. Graham walked up holding a pen cap.

“Bye, little boy blue.” He waved with his left hand as he dropped it with his right.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 11:51 pm Post subject:

ALRIGHT! These need to come back. So if no one else will, I WILL! BECAUSE I LOVE THESE FRIGGIN STORIES!!!!!!!! So igiving not one BUT TWO!!!! COUNT EM TWO!!!! Parts to my origin. Be warned. THis is some trippy shit.

I rolled out of the way as it hit. The ground cracked and frayed all down the hall.
“Who you calling little boy blue?” I asked as I wiped from my forehead.
“You of ‘ourse! You and your ‘ittle blue dress shirt and blue pants. Plu’ you and you shirt with 'omething called, what is it? ...Pantera. Must be a bunch ah queers, ya ask me...”
“Don’t call Pantera queers.” I muttered as I ran forward.
I swung once and he used dual arms to block. He threw an uppercut, but missed as I moved back. I dropped low and spun kicked, taking his legs out. He rolled up quickly and was attacking before I could stand. His attack pushed me back. They weren’t meant to hit or to be blocked. They were to move me back. I knew there wasn’t much room before I backed into a wall, so I improvised. I stepped back and snapped my finger at him. In doing this, I shot a micro fireball at him. Strong enough to hurt, but not enough to burn. He stumbled back as I moved in. I planted my left foot and launched myself in one motion, spinning once in the air to bring my right foot down on his head. He was out, landing to the ground as I moved to Johnny.
He threw his right at me. I dodged and caught it under my left. My right went under it and I yanked it, pulling him at me. I caught his head with my right hand and fired him back.
“Too easy...” I mocked them, panting.
I caught a glimmer in one of the corner mirrors of Graham, lifting a trash can above his head. I turned as he threw it. I didn’t know if I could dodge. I knew I couldn’t block. I remembered an old saying: “The best defense is a good offense.”
I raised both hands and blasted as much fire and heat as I could summon onto the can. It liquified half way to me, nearly making contact with me.
I then used a fast ball fire ball to put him back to the floor.
I slowly walked back to the hall where the last one stood. He still stood in the same spot. Hadn’t moved an inch. Couldn’t tell if he even blinked.
“So... you are?” I asked, walking slowly to him.
Nothing.
“Do you have powers?”
Still nothing.
“Do you want me dead?”
A smile, crooked as hell. It caught me off guard me at first. Then even more so as I realized he had rows of pointed teeth. He moved at me faster then anything I had every seen before. I tried just to fall backwards but before I could even rock unto my heels, he was upon me. He grabbed me by my shoulders and held me. His mouth opened extremely wide as I heard his jaw bones snape. I moved my head but he got my neck. His teeth sunk in deep like razors. If he kept squeezing this hard, my collar bone would break. I moved fast and grabbed his bottom jaw with my hand. There was no way to pry him loose. So I fried his head. He let go and stumbled back batting at his head. The flames were out in seconds. But he still was stunned. I checked my shoulder with what time I had. The teeth went in an inch maybe two. There was no way to bandage it here-- not with this time.
I started coughing. The pain was sharp and intense. I moved for the door, hoping for some sort on an escape. A chance to live to fight another day. I headed for a near by door and reached it with ease. But as I pushed it open, I was thrown out of it-- out into the rain. I rolled across the soccer field a little ways before I stood up. That thing was still standing at the door-- waiting to see my next move. If I tried to run, he’d get me for sure. I smirked as I realized the only way out of this. I placed my right hand across my left palm. Then I engulfed into flames. I burned it close in less then a second. I screamed for a minute. When I looked to the doors, the thing was still there. And now I had two arms to use again. I started to run at it as it started to walk at me. As I ran my hands caught fire. His mouth opened wider as he ran faster.
“COME ON!!!” I yelled as I sprinted.
That boy howled as he gained more speed.
I jumped at the last second. He knew I would and grabbed my leg. I hoped he would. I landed on my back but pulled he to me. I caught him with my legs and held him back for just one second. The one second I needed. I placed my hands on his chest and fired. He left my hold and disappeared in a hellfire. I stood slowly as I surveyed all around me. He laid twenty yards to my right. He coughed and moaned telling me he was alive. I would have checked on him but I had to get to the bank. I ran around the school, clutching my arm. My mind was in a state of shock about what just happened.
I’m not the only person with powers? I’ve already been found out? How did they do so much damage to me? They were trained how
As I reached the front of the school, a car screeched to a halt in front of me. The door open and revealed Kate.
“I thought you stopped the bank robbers!” She yelled.
“How did you know?”
“Your dad.”
“Oh... Wait... what do you mean?”
“There’s a bank robbery happening right now!”
“Yeah, I fought their sons. You need to drive me there now.” I commanded as I climbed in the car.
“So... you a super hero now?”
“Umm... Well, I could be I guess...”
“You don’t have a name. Every hero needs a name.”
I started to think. Then I looked down to my Pantera shirt. CowBoysFromHell was written across it.
“CowBoy From Hell...”
“WHAT!?”
“I have flame powers like hell... And I’m kind of a cowboy due to the fact that I’m alone. I’m good at fighting. Where as a cowboy I'd be good at shooting.”
“That'll never stick, but okay. Now you need a mask.”
“No. Now I need a coat. I’m freezing here. I’m soaked.”
Kate reached in back and pulled out two things. A bandana and a trench coat.
“There... Coat and mask in one fell swoop.” She kid as she looked at my shirt. She spied the red stain. “Are you bleeding?”
“Doesn’t matter... Drive.” I advised as I put on the coat.
She mimicked me and then stopped.
“Were here. Go get 'em.”
I climbed out and walked slowly to the bank doors. They had been broken in the doors. Police hadn’t arrived yet which made things easier. I looked inside and spotted the three men. One was getting the cash while the other two kept guard.
The cash grabber ran farther back in the bank when I took my chance. I bolted through the door and blasted both men with a small fire ball dropping them with a thud. This was actually going to happen. I was going to become a hero. That’s when two very bad things happened.
The crowd of people that had been quite while the crooks took cash now cheered as they saw me drop two guards. The second was the police sirens went off just outside. The last man quickly came around the corner, gun in hand. He pointed it right at me.
“You! You’re the flame boy! But if you’re here then… WHERE'S MY SON??!!” He yelled as he shook the gun at me.
“Lying at the school out cold. He’s not hurt. So just put the gun down. It's over, man. If you don’t, you won't walk out of this bank to see your son again.”
“Why you gonna kill me? HA! That’s a laugh. All I have to do is pull the trigger and then I’m home free.”
I gulped. “Wrong. There’s cops outside with lots more on the way. You shoot me and you go to jail for life. Then you may die any way for resisting arrest.”
“Wrong. What are they going to do? They’re nothing compared to me.”
“What? Are you trying to be a super villain right now? You’re a bank robber. And now you got some kind of God complex? What the hell, man?”
As he lowered his eyes, his gun dropped slightly. I took this and went for it. I blasted fire at him. It would have been a direct hit expcept for a variable: his son. He came in through the door and leapt to his father. To my surprise it was the animal boy. I had expected his son to be Jimmy. The blast hit him past his father where he crashed to the floor not moving.
He's dead. I thought. I just killed a person-- a kid... For no reason... I… I killed…
“NO!” His father screamed as he looked back and forth from his son to me.
I heard a noise behind me. It looked over shoulder to see Kate.
“SPENCER, WATCH OUT FOR THAT WOLF KID!! Oh, shit...” She muttered as she covered her face with her hands.
As I screamed for Kate to run when I heard a bang. I saw her drop to the floor. I stood in shock for a second. All I could think of was how Kate had been shot and that I was next. But then she stood up. Nothing was wrong with her. For an instant, I figured the father had blown his brains out but that was before I saw the look on Kate’s face: it was pure horror.
I knew what it was before I looked on. I had looked over my shoulder to tell her to run but, now I was completely facing her, without ever moving.
There was a hole in my chest. My shirt was covered in blood. I still didn’t feel the pain, all I felt was rage. I turned around to see the man in shock that I was still standing.
“YOU!!” I bellowed in a voice so cold that hell itself would have frozen over at its sound.
I raised my right hook and watched the flames dance across the room from my hand to him. He glowed red as the sun for one second before hitting the ground-- he was dead. The fire had ripped the oxygen from his lung, suffocating him in seconds as he burnt to death-- as he died. I fell to my knees, with rage gone like my fire, I now felt the pain. Tears poured from my eyes as blood trickled from my mouth. I started to fall forward when Kate caught me and pulled me back.
“Oh my God… Spencer... You’re going to be fine, okay? You are... I know you! This is nothing. You're going to be fine.”
My breath came in quick gasps as I spoke. “Kate… Tell my dad I love him. He needs to run and hide… They’re going to see this and come after him for this...”
“Spencer don’t talk like that. You’ll be fine. You can tell him yourself.”
“If I’m going to be fine, then why are you crying so much?” I said as I smiled. I coughed roughly. She smiled as she kissed me. I smiled again as I gazed upon her face. Her face was the last thing I ever saw.
As they closed my eyes, I opened them once more.

This place was different. To my left was a hellish place. The ground was charred black with red crevase. The place to my right was a road surrounded by clouds that looked as though they were the ground. There was a gate in front of me. It was different, like both sides of this place. The right side was solid and straight with gold on it. The left had twisted design with dark shades. The man that murdered me was walking down the road to my right. As I reached out with my hand I tried to yell, but nothing came out. My hand started to disappear as it passed a certain point, but when I pulled it back, it was fine.
Something in my head said I needed to walk forth and place my hand in the center of the gate. And I did...
As I placed my hand on it, I wondered where I was. I heard a strange voice say something in what sounded like Latin and then the left side of the gate swung open. As it did, the rest of the gate moved away out of my reach. Some force pushed me through this gate and I stumbled onto the black charred ground.
“Welcome to hell.” Introduced a voice behind me.

I sat up straight before I even woke up.
“That was a strange dream. I lived out an entire other life…” I whispered, rubbing the sleep from my eyes.
I looked to the clock on the night stand that lye next to my bed: 5:30 A.M.
Beat my alarm by five minutes. I stood slowly, but tumbled to the floor. My right leg had been gone for nearly three years now and yet I still tried to get up and walk to the bathroom every morning. It was beginning to be a pain.
I slowly climbed back up my bed and reached for the metal rods known as crutches. I stood and with one step, cleared my entire room and was out into the hall. This may sound like an impressive feat, but in reality, my room was about seven feet and stood at a might 6’1 a crutch step takes you quite far.
Then I did my morning routine: shower, brush teeth and get ready for school. Then came the leg; yup, it cost as much as a car and breaks twice a much and not some POS car you find on the side of the road. I’m talking a brand new SUV is how much these freaking things cost. I stuff it on a make sure its working right before I start walking on it. It works well but when it starts to go, it’s a real pain in the arse.
As I wait for my ride, I plop on my sofa and turn on the tube. The news pops up about a teenager in London shot down stopping a bank robbery. I leaned closer listen to the exact thing I had witnessed in my dream.
My jaw dropped, “Okay... That is messed up.” I muttered.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 11:52 pm Post subject:

ok so yeah. Hoped you liked it.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:15 am Post subject:

I suggest you keep it... Man, this brings me back.
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Comic-Geek-Tom · Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:35 pm Post subject:

excellent.

yeah we need more fan-fics, i just can't seem to find the time nowadays
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:40 am Post subject:

Well im going to start doing more as summer and no school gets closer so YEAH!! Laughing

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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:44 am Post subject:

Awesome job, man. Very well written, and I enjoyed it.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:46 am Post subject:

Give some props to the amazing Editor!!!! Very Happy

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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:48 am Post subject:

Good job, Mr. editor!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:49 am Post subject:

Huzzah!

Dude, I doubt I would be editing badass fics like this if it wasn't for you!
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