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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 2:38 am    Post subject: UltimateCowBoy Productions Present... The CowBoy From Hell Reply with quote

A man sat at a desk. He was a small man, starting to go bald. His office was dark and gloomy and only his table lamp was on. He finally decided to move and pressed the on switch connected to a small speaker on his desk, "Bring in prisoner 53666." He commanded with authority.
"Yessir, right away, sir." Came a monotonous voice from the speaker.
A second later a man was pushed through the door by two guards. He had a bag over his head.
"Remove the bag." The man at the desk ordered.
One man did as he commanded. The prisoner had a long horn coming from the front of his head. The tip went up and curved out. Two horns came from the back of his head and went down and out across his back. He had a small black goatee and long black hair that was messed up. He looked as though he hadn't shaved in weeks. He opened his mouth to speak revealing fangs.
"Do not speak!" The tiny man barked at him.
The prisoner looked away.
"What is your name?" The man asked with less of an angry tone.
"I thought I wasn't allowed to speak, shorty?" The prisoner questioned his authority.
"You may speak when you are spoken to. Now what is your name?" He repeated.
There was a silence between both of them until the prisoner broke out laughing at him, "Heheheheheh... What make you think I would tell you?" He continued to chortle.
"Because if you don't I'm sending you back. Now what is your name?" He repeated again.
He stopped laughing and glared at the man, "Why don't you tell me?"
"Fine. Your name is CowBoy From Hell." He answered as he typed on his computer.
"And don't you forget it, bitch." CowBoy muttered under his breath.
The man behind the desk caught this and snarled. He then signaled one of the guards with his eyes. Suddenly, one of the guards struck CowBoy with a tazer behind the head.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 2:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great add to the line!!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 4:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOW! Awesome job Cowboy! AMAZING! Finally Cowboy's origin revealed!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 5:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

And i plan for it to be HUGE! Its gonna tie in a lot thanks to the Help of our great editor Ultimate Kevin.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

it looks really good, i'll be sure to check on it
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

“So are we done with back talk yet?” The bald man asked as he stared at the man on the floor. His head was smoking from the blast of electricity he had just received.
“Depends... are you going to have 'dumb and dumber' keep shocking me every time I burn you, Frodo?” CowBoy replied with a chuckle.
The man pulled a cattle prod from his desk and shoved it into CowBoy's chest. “AHH!!!” CowBoy screamed in agony.
“Now are ya done?” The bald man asked again.
“For... For now.” CowBoy lowered his head and breathed in slowly.
“Good. Now... tell me how you got there in the first place.”
“Got where? I’ve been to a lot of places, man.”
“Tell me how you got to hell!” The man screeched
“Well, don’t all sinners go there?” CowBoy lifted his head as he answered with a cockey smile.
The bald man raised the cattle prod to strike when the speaker on his desk beeped. He halted.
“Yes?” The bald man asked as he switched it on.
“Bad news, sir.” Said a nervously toned voice.
“What is it?”
“It's Manticore north, sir.”
“The training facility? What happened?”
“It's... it's been destroyed.”
The man eyes widened. He paused and gulped.
“Sir?”
“BY WHO??!!” The bald man yelled suddenly.
“By unit 452.”
“HOW DID HE GET OUT??!!”
“He didn’t. Apparently, he was a mutant of some sort. He went physco. Took out the building from with in his cell. There were no survivors except for Lydecker.”
“Dammit.” The man whispered.
The entire time he had been talking CowBoy had been slipping out of his chains. As his hand slipped free he reached back and grabbed both guards by their shins. He pulled forward, bringing them down and throwing them at the bald man. As they flew at the bald man, CowBoy blasted them both with fireballs. Baldy saw it coming. He jumped between the two men and tackled CowBoy. He held the cattle prod to his head.
CowBoy passed out…


He awoke in a cell. His arms were above his head. He was chained to the ceiling by his wrists, which were tied together. Two men stood in front of him. One of them was the evil bald man with his cattle prod. The other was the man CowBoy hated most. This man a tortured him for months at a time. He had taken away his family. And most importantly. This man had killed him. His name was Lydecker.
“Hey, ladies.” CowBoy greeted calmly.
“Think you can take me, eh? See what happens when you think?” Taunted baldy.
“See what happens when you brush to hard?” CowBoy replied.
Baldy pulled something that wasn’t a cattle prod. It was was a baseball bat. He swung it into CowBoy's ribs.
“Ahh… You… you call that…a hit? Come on, Lydecker. Show the guy how to hit some one.” CowBoy felt blood pouring out of his mouth.
Lydecker stepped forward and punched CowBoy across the face knocking out a tooth.
“See?” CowBoy asked, gushing out blood. “You could learn something from Lydecker there, baldy!” CowBoy said with a blood filled smile.
“Tell how you got to hell NOW!!” Lydecker yelled.
“Ask nicely.” CowBoy laughed.
Baldy hit him across the face with the baseball bat.
“Or don’t... Your call.” CowBoy squinted.
“Tell us now.” Baldy emphasized.
“Fine. It all started when I was born…”



“Honey… It’s a boy-- a beautiful baby boy.” Jim said to his wife.
“Oh… Name him Spencer.” Mary replied.
“Ok.”
Suddenly Spencer started to scream and cry.
“Oh, dear God.” Jim murmured as he put his hand on Spencer’s head. “He’s burning up.”
The doctor took him. They started poking and prodding all over him. Suddenly, the baby started to glow red. Objects in the room began to catch fire.

Three blocks away at the police station.
“Dan?” Steve asked.
“Ya-huh?” Dan replied.
“Your sister's giving birth right now, right?”
“Ya.” He said motioning towards the hospital. “Her room's 5th floor, 2nd room.” He said pointing at her room. “I’m betting the babies in here arms right now.”
BOOOOOMMMMM
The room disappeared in an explosion…
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Badass.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks kev. Cool
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sweet stuff. Liking it so far.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks man.
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“My father told me that we then left the country for him to raise me. He said people didnt like me. So i blindly listened and took the pills he gave me. The next nine years of my life, I was heavily doped up so I wouldn’t hurt anyone. During my tenth Frazzel Snazzel, we got a call from the prime Minster of our country.”

“JIM!!!” He yelled.
“What, Dylan?!” Jim yelled back.
“You have to bring your boy back.”
“Why!?”
“Because if you don’t, this man will blow up our country next.”
“A lotta good you guys did. You wanted to murder my son. You all still think I murdered my wife on purpose don’t you!?”
“Jim, that’s not the point. It’s the needs of many that out weigh the needs of your one son.” He explained calmly.
“I don’t care. He’s my son. The rest of you can burn in hell for all I care.”
Suddenly the phone cut out then back on and a new man was talking.
“Do you really care so little about your country, that you can’t hand over your mutant child?”
“He’s my son-- mutant or not.”
“Then watch the northern sky.” The phone cut out. Jim ran to the window and looked at the horizon. He could see the mushroom cloud. It was a speck on the horizon but he could see it. He strode across the room towards me.
“I’m going to train you. If you ever lose me, you’ll need this training.”
All I did was nod, agreeing.
Over the next five years that’s all we did. We stayed in an old warehouse. All day we ate, slept and trained. By the end, I could control the flames like they were my own arms. It wasn’t just flame control. I learned boxing and martial arts. I did fifty laps a day around the warehouse. Then one day something weird happened. My father went for food and never came back
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 8:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great! Really kickass fanfic here, CowBoy!
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I sat in the warehouse for hours waiting. Cold sweat ran down my face. Thousands of thoughts and possibilities of what had happened to him ran through my mind. Until that day I never knew how big that ware house was. Finally after waiting for 12 hours straight. Never moving from the spot that I last saw him, I fell asleep. My dream were nightmares of what was happening to him. Then I was shaken awake. My father stood over me. Blood ran down his face from a gash above his eyes.
“Dad!?” I almost yelled. I quickly sat up.
“Are you ok, My son?”
“Yes. But are you?”
“I’m fine.” He held up his left hand. A grocery bag was in it. “ Hungry?” He said with a smile. I nodded. Then I noticed his other hand. It held a gun.
“Dad why do you have a gun?”
Jim looked down.
“You have your powers to protect your self son. I need this. This is like my power.”
He let me see the gun.
“It’s a .45 magnum. Revolver style. “
The gun was beautiful. My father took it back and placed it in a small holster that was strapped to his belt. After that he carried that gun with him every where. Although I never saw him use it. When I turned 15 I found an old book of his. It was about my home. About the clan I was born into. There were tribal tattoos for each member of a clan. I found the one that was rightfully mine. I took the book to him.
“FATHER!”
“Why are you yelling boy?”
“I need these. I need to be a part of our clan. Put these on my arm.” I pointed to the ones.
It looked like fire but in a tribal form.
“You do know these will be there forever and that it goes all the way up your arm right son?”
“I know. But do it anyways.”
He nodded and walked to his bag. He pulled a needle and ink.
“This is going to hurt. A lot.”
I nodded. He jammed the needle into my arm and began. I clenched my teeth and just took it. Four hours later he was done. It looked great.
I smiled then fell asleep.
When I woke up my father was asleep. I decided I wanted to explore our town. I had never seen outside of the ware house. I needed to if I wanted to stay from going insane. I grabbed a couple of what I thought to be dollars and walked to the small desk we had. I wrote a small note and stepped out the door……
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The city we were in was huge. As I stepped out I knew what city it was from when my father had taught me what a child would learn when they went to school. It was London. I could see Big Ben. It was beautiful. The entire city was beautiful. As I walked down the street cars honked and children yelled from a near by play ground. People walked every which way going to where ever they needed to be. The day was beautiful. The sun was up and the was a slight gust. I was worried about people just staring at me. I didn’t know why. I looked like a normal person. Luckily no one was staring at me. I walked into a small restaurant and had a small breakfast. Just eggs and ham. But it was delicious! Afterward I walked around town some more. The headed along one street for about an hour. After that time I noticed that there was almost no one else walking down this far. Then I found out why. This must be that bad part of town. A group of men were chasing a girl down the street. She turned and pulled something that looked like canister from her pocket. As one man neared she pressed the top of it. Strange red dust flew from it and hit the man in the eyes. He screamed and fell to his knees clutching his eyes. The girl took off again. I started after the group that was right behind her. As I ran I thought about how to stop them. If I used my powers I might kill them. Also I would have to leave this wonderful city. I decided I would take them hand to hand. The girl and the group that was chasing her were about a block ahead of me. As I ran towards them the man that had been shot with dust started to stand. I jumped and kicked him into a wall. He didn’t get back up. I started after the group again. I saw the last man of the group run around a corner. There was no way I could catch them on foot. I had to use my powers. I brought both my hands together and raised them above my head. They started to glow as fire surrounded them. I threw them at the ground as I released the fire. It sent me flying forward at an incredible speed. I landed next to the alley. Turning the corner I saw that it was a dead end. The men had her cornered.
“You made a mistake running darling. Now we’re going to have you hurt cha.” One man said in his heavy British accent.
“Take another step and I melt your face with this!” She said as she held up the canister.
“Do that and will kill ya instead of stealing.”
Her face went pale.
I stuck my finger in my mouth and whistled loudly. The group turned around.
“Hey ladies.” I said with a wink. ”How you doing?”
“FILTHY AMERICAN DOG!” One yelled.
“Hey lighten up man. Besides. Who says I’m American? I’m part Irish you know lady!”
“YOUR DEAD IS WHAT YOU ARE!!” You yelled as he threw a brick at my head. I dodged to the left and it crashed into the street.
“Hey now! You could really hurt some one with that. Didn’t your mother teach you that?”
The man sprinted at me. I spun around in a 360 aim towards his head with my foot. The heel of my shoe caught his nose and he went head over heals.
“Wow. I cant believe he didn’t see that one comin. I mean it was such a slow attack.” I said with a shrug. The group rushed me. I threw a punch the landed in the firsts face knocking him down. Blood from his broken nose lay on my knuckles. I jumped through the crowed of men so that there was no chance that they would be able to grab her. I smiled and waved them over as the turned towards me. They started to run at me and I raced towards them. I jumped up and planted a foot in each ones chest knocking them back. I back flipped off them. As I did I saw a tin trash can lid laying on the ground. As I landed I grabbed it and threw it Frisbee style. It hit another one knocking him off his feet. The last of the men threw a punch at me. I Blocked with my left and punched with my right. I punched him in the throat and he collapsed in a heap of him self. I turned around to see the girl holding the canister at me.
“Please don’t.” I said calmly.
“Why not!?” She said. He accent was there but not that heavy.
“Because I’m not here to hurt you. Just them.” I said as I pointed my thumb over my should at them men on the ground. He face went pale again.
“BEHIND YOU!” She yelled.
I turned to see him. The man that had been shot with dust and kicked into wall. He had gotten back up. He had gotten a knife. He swung it horizontally across. I raised my arms to block. At the last second I realized it was a bad Idea. The blade cut across both of my arms. Ripping open my day old tattoo wounds, I screamed. He lunged again. I smacked the blade back but it cut open my arm again. Two gashes on my tattooed right arm and one on my left. This was not going well. He lunged again and I ducked it. He brought it down and I side stepped. I stood back up and punched him across the face. He fell back but lunged again. I leaned to my left dodging it. As the blade went by I knew this attack wasn’t for me. It was from her. I wrapped my left arm around his wrist. As I did I punched his elbow. A loud pop filled the air as his elbow popped out of place. The man screamed and I punched him across the face. He fell to the ground unconscious. Warm blood ran down both my arms. I turned around.
“You aright. The bastard didn’t get you did he?”
“Nope. Looks like he got you pretty good though.”
“Only a flesh wound.”
“Come on. I know where we can get you some bandages.”
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We ran down the trashed back alleys for a few block until we reached a big house. She walked to the front door and opened it.
“YOU LIVE HERE?” I said in shock.
“What!? AM I THAT UGLY!”
“NONONONONO!” I said as I frantically waved my arms back and fourth. “I simply meant that whoever owns this house has a decent chunk of change. And well your not dressed all gussied up like most rich people.”
“Well I don’t feel like dressing like that. If I wanted to do that I would but I just don’t see the point of looking like that when I’m walking through town.”
“Yeah I know what you mean.”
She was giving me a funny look.
“What?” I asked.
”Are you just going to stand out there bleeding all day or what?” She asked
“Oh YEAH! I said as I walked in side.
“Try not to bleed on anything.” She said as she closed the door behind me.
She showed me to the bath room where I cleaned my wounds. She handed me a bandage which I placed over the cut on my left arm.
“Uh oh.” She said.
“What?”
“All I have is an ACE bandage. Not exactly the best thing for cuts. Plus its quite long.”
“Oh. If your willing to part with it ill use it.”
She smiled and handed it over. I wrapped it around my arm a few times then went through my hand for a better hold before going out back to my arm. After it was all done I didn’t have a wrist. It was the same size from elbow to my hand.
“Can I ask your name?” I asked
“Its Kate. Or Katie. “
“Which do you prefer?”
“Doesn’t matter to me.”
“Ok then Kate.”
“What’s yours?”
“uhh Spencer.” I replied
“Okay Uhh Spencer nice to meet you.” She said with a smile laugh.
“Great a comedian.” I said as I rolled my eyes.
“Are you hungry? We have a huge kitchen down stair and I swear I’ve never seen my pantry empty. And I’ve never bough groceries before so I don’t know where it comes from.”
“Yeah I could eat. I’ve been living off cans of ravioli and spaghetti and meat balls.”
“Follow me then.” She said as she walked down stairs.
We walked into the kitchen and she grabbed a can to show me.
“Here’s lunch!” She said as she held out a can of spaghettos.
“Great. Well better then nothing.” I said as I took the can.
Out side a car slammed its breaks .
“Any one live here that needs to slam the breaks?”
“No…Its them. That gang. There going to come at us with every thing they’ve got because of what you did.”
“Sorry?”
“Don’t be. I might have been dead if not for you.”
“Okay. Can you handle your self?”
She nodded.
“Good. Ill cover the front door.” I said as I headed off.
I stood to the side of the door. When they came through it would force them to go into the main room. The door would block the other path to the kitchen. It was my job to block the main path to it. I waited. It felt like hours were going by. I started to let my guard down. I figured it was just some guy squealing his tires to show off some girl.
Kate appeared in the door way of the kitchen.
“Nothing then?”
“I don’t see anything Kate. If there was anyone they would have came in by now.”
The door handle turned. I leapt back to my spot. Kate did the same. The door opened just enough to let a gun barrel in. I stiffened. I passed by me like it was combing the area. After it got far enough the gun barrel disappeared. Then the door flew open. I waited as two men walked in. They never even checked next to the door. I round house kicked them across them. They landed with a thud. As soon as they hit the men outside opened fire. I fell to the ground trying not to get hit. The gun fire stopped moments later. Noise from outside. It was people talking.

“Did we get him?”
“How the hell should I know! Go check!”

I stood slowly and waited. They knew I was there. One of the guys punched through the bullet ridden wall right into my back I stumbled forward as the second guy came at me. I ducked his punch and tackled him to the floor. As I did the gun fired and the bullet grazed my right shoulder. I punched him in the face breaking his nose. The other man ran at me and tried to kick me. I leaned right and caught it under my left arm. I looked up to see a shocked expression go across his face. I swung my forearm down on top of his knee cap. With a loud pop he fell to the ground screaming. I stood as a man entered the door way. He fired his gun. I didn’t even know I did it but I created a small fire shield six inches in front of my chest. It stopped the bullet.
“Wow. Didn’t know I could do that. “ I said looking down where the bullet would have been. The guy looked terrified. I smiled as I ran at him. I jumped at him and kicked him in the face. We landed on the porch. More men were running towards the house. I kicked out one of the porches fence post and grabbed it in my hand. The first swung as I smacked him across the face with the post. I fell to my knees as the second man swung for my head. I jabbed the post in his gut and as he bent I cracked him across the face with the post. As he fell back I threw the post at the next man hitting him square in the forehead. A trail of blood followed him down. I stood expecting to face the next guy when I noticed no one else was out there. I saw the last of a group running around the house.
“Kate!” I said as I ran back through the house. One man was kicking the back door open as I kicked it back. I threw my shoulder into it and held it steady. At least five men lay on the kitchen floor with cuts across the body. Kate stood there with a knife.
“Your handy work?” I asked as the door started to shake.
“Not really handy work. Morley knife work.” She said nodding.
The door stopped shaking as we heard a loud crash come from up stair.
“SHIT! THEY BROKE IN THROUGH MY BEDROOM WINDOW! Spencer go! Take them! Ill hold here.”
I nodded as ran for the stairs.
I sprinted up the stair two at a time. I could smell smoke. They hadn’t crashed in, they had blown it open. As I reached for the door I flung open knocking me back. I rolled back as three men came at me. I back handed one across the face sending him over the stair railing. I flinched back as one of them tried to stab me. The second man swung past the first with a base ball bat. I couldn’t dodge. It hit me across the face knocking me down the stairs. As I started to fall I instantly felt warm blood run down my face. Seconds later I was at the bottom. My side hit along with my left wrist. I looked to the top of the stairs as the man readied himself to throw the knife. I rolled to the side as he did. I dodged it but my side screamed with pain. As I struggled to sit up the second man ran down the stairs. As he reached me he swung the bat. I couldn’t dodge. I had to catch it. My hand shot forward like a cobra. I caught the bat over my head. The man looked terrified as I did. I pulled down on the bat and he didn’t let go. SO I pulled again to bring him face to face with me.
“What are you going to prove?” I asked angrily.
“You and you little biti..”
“DON’T! Call her that.”
“You… both have to die for what’s you done.”
“No. You have to leave. NOW.”
His eye shifted to the bat. MY hand began to glow red. Soon so did the metal baseball bat. It slowly melted in two. He didn’t move. So I tilted down my head and rammed it into his throat. He fell back coughing badly. The other man had pulled the knife from the ground and had began to run at me. I ignored the pain in my side and rocked back onto my neck. I kicked straight up and connected with his chin sending him back to the ground. I fell backward on my gut and nearly screamed when my side hit the ground. I stood slowly. My head was busted open and bleeding. I had at least one broken rib. Every time I breathed in too deep reassured me of that fact. My wrist hurt but I could still move it. My body was had to move. I walked slowly to the kitchen.
Kate stood there.
“You look like bloody hell!” She said as she ran over to me.
“Baseball bat.” Was all I said.
“There still a lot out there. I cant believe I’m saying this but I’m scared.”
Something inside me clicked. I had to use it.
“Kate. I need to show you something and you cant be afraid. Okay?”
“Yes.” She said as she nodded.
She stepped back. I raised my hand palm up so she could see. Slowly I made a small fire figure and made it dance. Then I blasted it against the wall. I looked at Kate. Her eyes were wide.
“I can make and control fire. I don’t know how I can but I can. I can stop these guys with it.”
She didn’t blink.
“Do it. That’s the only way were going to live.”
I nodded. Suddenly a voce came up over a loud speaker.
‘Hi you don’t know me but I’ve been sent here to kill you. No hard feelings. But yeah that basically it. On yeah its in the girls bedroom up stairs but you cant stop it because it explodes…now.”

BOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!
The ceiling was coming down on top of us. I pushed Kate to the ground and raised my hands above my head. It was going to hit any second now. I blasted all the fire I could bring up. The room was extremely hot.
“KATE GET OUT! NOW! I CANT HOLD IT FOREVER GET THE HELLOUT NOW!” I screamed as loud as I could.
She must have heard because she clawed to the remains of the door and out of the house.


‘ You don’t have to hold it forever. Just long enough to burn through. ‘

There was a voice in my head.

‘ Just use your full power. Focus. Unleash hell.’

I didn’t know what it meant.

'Picture every thing. Your life. Your Hatred. Your Countries death’

I felt my hair catch fire. No. It didn’t catch fire. It was fire. I could see it as I looked at the ceiling.

‘Release Your Anger. Release Your Love. Focus it. Focus it up’

My arms melted away… melted into the fires. My entire body was glowing like the flames.

RELEASE IT NOW! DO IT NOW OR DIE!

I obeyed. My body melted with the flames I shot melting the room as I went through. I was floating above the house looking down at there car. My arm felt like it was going to explode if I didn’t let the fire out. So I did. There car disappeared. They fled quickly after that. The flames slowly left my body as I floated to the ground. I landed on my knees in the debris. Kate stood there. Staring at me. I looked up as she looked away. Then I passed out.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 6:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uber!
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I woke up in pain. I couldn’t remember all of what had happened but I knew it hurt. My mind was racing and I started to see images in my minds eye of some thing I went through. I remember being knocked down the stairs and such but I could clearly picture what had happened to end the fight. I figured that because of the pain I was in that it had been a hell of an ending. I couldn’t sit up but I recognized the roof of the warehouse easily.
“Anyone here?” I asked loudly.
“Yup” Replied Kate’s voice. She was to my right somewhere.
“How did I get back here. No offense but I don’t think you could have dragged me all the way here. Plus I don’t know how you could have known where here was.”
“You dad found your “Note”. Then he saw some of the action on the news.”
“Ah.” I said.
Kate appeared to my right. She had tears in her eyes.
“Hi?” I said.
She smacked me across the face.
“OW! What was that for!?” I asked as I tried to raise my hand to my face.
“Why didn’t you just tell me that you were like all power full!”
“Because you would have shot me with that stuff if I had shown my powers before we had met one another a little bit. You know you would have.”
“Yeah….I probably would have. But now…now my house is gone…”
“Damn….Now I remember what happened. Wow powers went all nuts o on me.”
“Nuts o?” Kate asked.
“Yeah I physically became fire.”
“Okay now your just scaring me.” She said with a shudder.
Suddenly I was hit across the face from the right.
“WHAT THE HELL….” I started to say as I turned and saw my father.
“HOW COULD YOU DO THAT! YOU COULD HAVE KILLED THAT GIRL! YOU COULD HAVE DIED! YOU NEARLY SCARED ME TO DEATH!!!”
”What would be the point of just using my powers for myself? What would I accomplish?”
“You’d stay alive.”
“Dad…..Everyone dies some day.”
He didn’t say anything. He just sat there looking at me. Then,
“I’m doing you a favor.”
“What kind of favor?” I asked
“Well I can teach you any more because all that’s left that I know you wouldn’t even come close to understanding. So your going to school. I’ve set up a fake Id. Your first name is Logan.”
“My middle name is now my first name? How original dad.” I said as I rolled my eyes.
“I could have put it as jack ass McGee. Be happy with it.” He handed me some papers. “This is your life. All that’s happened in it. Family. Friends. Second grade teachers from the US. All of it. Memorize it. You start school in two days.” And with that he left us there with shocked looks on our faces.



Yeah kinda short but sweet
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

GREAT ENDING!!!
GOOD JOB ON THAT STORY!
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It was the day before I was going to school. I felt like a little kid. Well I think I felt like one but the again I never wanted to go to school when I was 5. My dad walked up.
“You really took all those guys?” He asked
“Yeah why?”
“I’ve never been able to fight like that. I must have taught you well. Or they all sucked ass.”
“Yeah probably the second one.”
“Still lets fight.” He said
“What!? You’re my DAD!” I yelled. Next thing I know I’m the floor.
“Fight.” He said as he tilted his head.
I smiled as I kicked his legs out. I rolled back and onto my feet as he came at me. I dodged the right hook but the left jab caught me in the gut. I batted it away even though he had already hit. He kicked at me but I blocked it. I used both arms to do it leaving my self open for him to break my nose. Blood gushed.
“WHAT THE HELL MAN!”
”You don’t think I’m going to go easy on you do you?” He said as he tried another left hook. I blocked it and proceeded to knock his jaw loose.
“Damn good hit boy.” He said as he stumbled back. I turned and round house kicked him back even farther. He stepped forward rapped his knuckles against the back of my head. As I rubbed my head he kicked my feet out. I caught myself just before I broke my nose. So close. Would have been hard to explain a broken nose on my first day. Then I realized id have to explain a broken rib as my dad kicked me hard in the side. I rolled across the floor.
“DAMNIT DAD YOU REALLY BROKE MY NOSE!” I yelled as he swung again. I ducked and hit him in the ribs. He stumbled back and I swung again knocking him further back. He swung again but, went wide. I grabbed his wrist and pulled him at me. My punch connected knocking him to the ground. He tried to sweep my legs out but I jumped up and landed on his left ankle breaking it. He didn’t even say a word of pain.
“Good. I lose. “ He said calmly
“Umm Dad? I heard that crack. Your ankles broke.”
“I’m aware of it but I was waiting for you to leave to clean yourself up before I started in with my many colorful words.”
”Going to need any help getting up or setting it?”
“Nope. Please leave.”
I nodded as I left.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 12:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hot damn!
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