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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:52 pm Post subject:

Yeah, sometimes you just have to trim the fat off! Then again; it would've been amazing to see him take out a lot of guys! Did you ever see Equilibrium?? Christian Bale's character kills like 200 guys out in total!!

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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:56 pm Post subject:

Never even heard of it.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:58 pm Post subject:

Neither have I!!!!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:58 pm Post subject:

It's a badass movie, man!! Mindblowing action!! And plus!! Christian Bale plays the main character!!

A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:01 pm Post subject:

I'll check it out then! Christian Bale played the best Batman/Bruce Wayne ever! He was also great in The Prestige! He is now one of my top 5 favorite actors!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:04 pm Post subject:

Yeah, he's up there with Edward Norton and Matt Damon!

A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:10 pm Post subject:

And Hugh Jackman! I likey Hugh Jackman!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:15 pm Post subject:

"Hugh Jackman plays Wolverine!" Ah, Scrubs... Laughing

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:16 pm Post subject:

Top five actors.

5) Ed norton.
4)Matt Damon
3)Christen Bale
2)Hugh Jackman
1)Sean Connery!@
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:25 pm Post subject:

My current favorites!

5) Mark Wahlberg
4) Matt Damon
3) Christian Bale
2) Edward Norton
1) Jack Nicholson!!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:53 pm Post subject:

Jack kept running until he found a control roome. He looked at all the monitors. On showed Ben,Cherry, and Carmen outside a cell. Rick was in the cell. He checked the map. They we two floors below him. He sprinted out the door an dow the stairs. He pushed the door open into the floor and imeedilty saw them.
"GUYS!"
" Holy crap its Jack." They all said.
"Rick. Why are you in a cell?"
Suddenly a group of men appeard behind Jack.
"LOOK OUT JACK! THEY ARE THE EXCUTIONERS!"
Jack ducked but was kicked in the back of the heqad and sent forward.
Jack landed on his back and one of the men stepped on his chest. He kicked the man of and he crashed into the other men. Jack punched the roof and part of it fell down blocking the path.
Jack turned around and Ben, Carmen, And Cherry were gone.
"Rick why are you in there."
"Im being excuted."
"WHAT! WHY!"
"Beacuse i attacked soilders that were grabbing you."
Jack punched the door.
"You cant break it."
Suddenly Jack heard a strange noise.
"Whats that?'" Jack asked.
"There going to do it with radition. That is the particle sheild slideing back. Cover your eyes. Love you bro........"
The air around Rick grew to warm to fast. What Jack witnessed then he will never forget till the day he dies...............
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:54 pm Post subject:

Kickass, man!!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:22 pm Post subject:

I felt like giving you guys a hint for later on in the story.

The chapter where Jack dies is the most important chapter in the entire story.

Pm if you think you know what it is.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 10:02 pm Post subject:

Jack stood and raced towards where his friends went. It was just a stright hallway towarda a door. As he ran towards it he saw a fire axe. He grabbed it. He pulled open the door to find a flight of stairs. He went up them quickly. They lead to a door. He linsted. A sound that sounded like Ben talking. Expect it sounded like he was begging. Jack kicked open the door and killed the gaurd on the other side. Ben was on his knee. Tears running down his cheeks. Cherry and Carmen stood motionless.
"WHO THE HELL ARE YOU? AND WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY FIENDS!"
"Me? Im Mark Ross. And i didnt do anything to them. All we did is make a bet."
"A forced bet." Said Benm quitly.
"A Bet? For what?"
"Them. And your life of course."
"What do you mean them?"
"Oh. If you lose they become my slaves. Well much lower then slaves. If i feel like it i'll just kill them instead of using the as slaves."
"Youre sick. You dont even know them or me so why the hell are you doing this?"
"Beacuse New Yorks gone beacuse of you. Plus Trevor Sheen wants you dead so ya."
Jack had heard that name before. Then he remeber that the old lady had given him something. He had never opened it to see what it was.
"So i just have to fight you. Ok. But i need a weapon. I mean you got two sword and a hammer on you."
"Well that the other thing. If you can drw blodd from me onto your blade and stab that machine over there then you will get your smaurai sword. Other wise you have this." Mark saids as he tossed him a sword.
"A spartan sword huh. Well this will be over quickly."
Mark smiled as he pulled out two medival broad swords. Jack just stared at them.
"These two blades are as strong as adamantium but weigh less then a pound." Time to die." Mark says with a smile. He sprints at Jack.Jack blocks both blades with his one. He knocks mark back and swings for his throat.Mark barley dodges. He swings down with one and Jack blocks it. HE swings the other at Jacks legs. Jack jumps over the blade and kicks Mark back. As Mark swings again Jack smacks a sword outta his left hand.
"Youre better than i expected boy."
"For some reasonm i get that all the time."
"Well you wont live long enough to hear it again. NOW"
Suddenly a man comes outta the door to the roof and Charges at Cherry with a knife.Jack sprints at the man and guts him.Suddenly he feels a slash across his back.
"Dont turn your back to your opponet."
"Dont cheat."
Jack slashed Mark back and the battle began again. Mark smacked Jack across the face with the side of his sword.Jack responded by cutting of his right pinky finger. He drpooed his sword and Jack kicked it away.
"Done yet?"
"Are you kidding me. Now i get to use my hammer."
Mark pulled a 5 foot hammer off him back. The head was adamantium. He swung it sideways and it connected with the balde of Jacks sword. The blade shattered and sent chunks everywhere.
"I like my hammer. Dont you?"
Jack did a back flip. When he landed Mark swung. This time conecting with Jacks left arm.
"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!" Jack screamed falling to his knees.
Mark moved for the kill.
"Wait. One thing before you kill me."
"What?"
"Were you the one that sentenced my brother to death?"
"I was the one who pushed the button."
Jack kicked marks legs out from underneath him.
As Jack stood a heavy rain began to pour from the sky. The wind pushed them around like drunk sailor. The rain felt like rocks as it hit them.
"Well Jack your going to die on a day with terrible weather arint you?" Mark said as he stood. The last hit from Marks Hammer had knockeed Jaccks shoulder outta socket. as Mark readied for his second attack Jack popped it back in.
"Im going to knock it ot again." He said.
Jack jumped and kicked Mark to the ground. Jack knelt of Marks chest and beat on him. Beating his head into the floor. Breaking his nose in several places Marks yelled out in pain. He swung his hammer at Jacks head. Jack raised his left arm and the hammer hit it. His arm snapped right in two.
Jack clenched his teeth as a second hit knocked him off Mark.
"Youll die painfully for that." Mark said as he held The hammer high above his head. Jack looked to his left and saw a chunk of his broken sword. He grabbed it and rammed it into Marks gut drawing blood. Mark stumbked back. Jack got up and ran to the machine that held his sword. As he rammed the chunck of broken bloody steel into the slot he heard Mark scream in terror. Jack sword came out of a little holt and he drew the blade leaving the sheth in the slot.
"Looks like the odds are a little bit more even now." Jack said. He turned around and Mark was about to swing. His hammer was held high and was about to be brought down on Jacks head. Jack swung his sword and caught the hammer right where the Head meets the handle. He decapitated the hammer. Mark fell back as Jack stood. He pointed his sword at Marks throat.
"I should slit your throat." Jack said.
"The wont you?"
"I never said i wouldnt."
"Well you the good guy so..." Mark truned and walked away. Jack threw his sword at Mark. It went right through the back of his right leg.
"Om my god....." Marks said in shock.
As Jack walked towards him he saw Ben grab a pipe and run towards Mark.
"YOU SON OF A!!!" Ben screamed as he smacked Mark across the head.
Ben stood there panting. Looking at waht he had done. He looked at Jack.
"He deserved it."
"Ya. He did."
"Jack. Your bro wanted us to take you to Japan. To meet a man. He said that that man would train you."
"Huh? Fine. But only beacuse he asked me to. But i dont think.."
"If you say it im going toclub you with this." Ben said holding the pipe up.
"Where do we go?"
"Maine......;.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 10:09 pm Post subject:

Hmmm... I'm not sure what the hell's going on but damn! you write awesome action!!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 7:20 pm Post subject:

What part dont you get?
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 9:33 pm Post subject:

How they keep mentioning Trevor Sheen and how this dude Mark Ross came to be... Oh! Nice additional story!!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 9:35 pm Post subject:

Ya. HE will be big later.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 7:05 pm Post subject:

Ok. B eacuse of how long i intend this story to be i need to break it up. So im going to end part one here. Then in a little whil i will begin part two.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 9:05 pm Post subject:

Alright!! I can't wait!!

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