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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 11:01 pm Post subject:

WHen he opened his eyes Ben and Carmen were standing over him.
"Do i still have my mask on?" He asked
"Ya. We are the only thing keeping you alive right now." Ben said.
Three men stood over them pointing guns down. Carmen reached down and kissed him on the lips. SHe pulled back and looked at a stunned Jack.
"What was that all about?" Ben asked
Before either could answer the men pulled the all to there feet. They pushed Jack against a wall and raised there guns. Carmen screamed! As the main guy fire Ben stepped in front on the bullet. It hit him in the middle of the chest. Jack caught him before he fell.
"Ben......Ben.....No......Not you too......please......please god dont take him away from me......PLEASE!" He laid Ben on the floor and stood up. In a dark voice he said.
"Do you really think you are going to live now?"
"Thats it! Time to die!" One screamed. He fired at Jacks Chest. Jack opened his palm a second later revealing the bullet in his plam. He rushed forward puching the first man across the gym and charging the second.......
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 11:07 pm Post subject:

So much for the love triangle... Laughing

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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 8:50 pm Post subject:

There could still be a love triangle.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 9:54 pm Post subject:

So Ben's alive...?
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:03 pm Post subject:

Well i cant post more tonight but tomorrow i will finish the part at the school.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:17 pm Post subject:

As he punched him across the face you heard a loud crack. Three men jumped him from behind and he threw his elbows and head back. The fell seconds later. Two more charged from both sides. He grabbed on and droped him on his head. He turned to the other. He held a gun in his hand. He was pointing it a Jack.
"Better take me out in one shot......you wont get another off."
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 12:08 am Post subject:

Nice.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:34 pm Post subject:

The man was shakeing badly.
"Put the gun down or end up like your friends over there." Jack says.
"MMMM..........Moovve and i'll shoot....." The man said. Jack put his hands in his pockets. He felt around until he found it. It was a snap and pop. Snap and pops would easily distract him. He pulled it out of his pockets and held is between his fingers so the man couldnt see it. He knew Carmen was behind him so he held it in his palm so she could she. He waited for it.......she screamed at the top of her lungs. The man slightly leaned to see who was screaming. As he did Jack thrw the snap and pop in front of him. It landed with a loud crack that made the man flinch and somewhat lose his balance. Jack took his chance. He raced forward grabbing the gun. He kicked the man back as he pulled the gun away. He looked at the unconcis man. He had seen him before but couldnt remeber where. But there was no time for that. The last man. The one who shot Ben was running up the stairs towards the roof. Jack sprinted towards the stairs. He picked up his sword along the way. He reached the roof seconds after the shooter. The shooter turned and faced him.
"Why did you do this?" Jack asked
"Money. I needed Money."
"You shot a kid and held many others hostage for MONEY!"
"Ya."
"You shot a 16 year old boy......you shot one of my BEST FRIENDS!"
"THE BULLET WAS MEANT FOR YOU!"
Jack ran forward and plunged his blade throught the mand stomach. He then shoved the man off the blade. The man hit the ground.
"I cant fell my legs........." He said as he laid there.
"I split your spine in two. Death is too good for you."
"Its not to good for YOU!" HE yelled as he held up a small device. " TIME TO BLOW THIS SCHOOL SKY HIGH!" HE yelled as he pressed the button. Nothing happened. "Crap.......Marc put it on delay. 10 mintues.......TILL YOU DIE!"
Jack heard that as he ran back to the gym. He picked up Ben and him and all the other students raced outside. Jack smiled as he saw his acomplishment. Every one was safe. Thats when he heard a women say. "Where is my daughter Cherry?" The question was directed at him. He turned at looked at the women as he relized what he had forgot. Cherry was still locked in the office..............
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:38 pm Post subject:

Oh, yeah! I almost forgot about Cherry! Laughing

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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:55 pm Post subject:

Yup. Everyone forgets about Cherry.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 12:03 am Post subject:

As Jack raced back inside a cop stoped him. He handed Jack a radio and told he to MOVE. Jack raced inside. he got down the first hall when a explosion went off in front of Jack. He flew back into a locker. He looked donw to see he was cut badly but he would be fine. Suddenly a voice came through the radio.
"Kid. Was that an explosion?"
"Ya."
"Shit. That means the explosives are unstable and could go off at any time."
"Crap."
"Exactly. You need to get the girl and get out."
"Im not coming back out the front."
"Whatever just get her out!"
Jack ran towards the office once more. The school was on fire now and he began to wonder if Cherry could survive the heat. This thought made him run faster. He finally saw the office. But as he did he heard another explosion from behind him. HE turned to see the roof start crumbling down. He turned and ran faster! Sprinting until he couldnt feel his feet he knew he wouldnt make it. So he jumped. Straight forward. He landed and rolled to the pricpals officde and kicked open the door. Cherry lay there hardly breathing. Jack grabbed her as he jumped through the window. As he jumped he felt something sharp run across his back. He landed and began to roll down the hill. As he did he blacked out..........
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 12:11 am Post subject:

Very descriptive...
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 4:56 pm Post subject:

Is that good or bad?
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 5:38 pm Post subject:

It means you describe this things very well CowBoy! Keep up the good work, man!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:25 pm Post subject:

Thanks.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:15 pm Post subject:

He woke up in a dark place he didnt recognize. There was one light turned on at the other side of the room but the light didnt reach him. There was a bed to his left. On it lay Cherry. Jack tried to stand but as he did Cherry got up and hugged him.
"Thank you Jack. But you shouldnt stand."
"Oh ya. That slash. WAIT! How do you know my name?"
"Your mask fell off when your friend rescued us."
" Friend?"
"Ya. He found us at the bottom of the hill. He took us here and told me he knew who you were."
"And where is here?"
"I dont know. We walked through the sewers for awhile."
"Why didnt you go to your mom?"
"Beacuse i was worried about you......"
"oh........." He said as he looked down. He looked up without movinh his head to see her blushing. She quickly walked to the other side of the room.
"Ummm. How long have we been here?"
"Bout a day and a half."
"Ok." Jack said as he completly stood up.
"How can you even stand? You had a huge gash across your back and noy meation all the burn marks."
Jack stepped into to the light and she saw him. Not a mark on him. (Well there was actually a scar across his back but ya.)
"Are you a muntant? I wont freak out if you are or anything."
"Truthfully? I dont even know.There was this guy that wanted me to come with him to see if i was a muntant but then something happened with Norman ozborn."
"I heard about that on the news. I cant belive you beat him too."
The both began to blush and looked away. THen Jack remembered Carmen kissing him. Luckily he didnt have to think about these two girl for long beacuse someone came in. Jack instantly reconignzed him. It was the man that blew up his house and attacked him. Jack grabbed his sword from next to the bed and charged. The man saw this coming. He raised his left arm and put his hand down. Jack heard a click as the man did that. Instantly a short crossbow bolt shot out and stuck in Jack left shoulder sending him flying against the back wall. He laid there in pain as the man walked up.
"You want answers right? About your powers and where that sword came from. Right?"
"Ya."
"Im the one who can answer them."
"Who are you?"
"Simple." THe man said as he pulled down his mask. "Im your brother."
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 4:14 am Post subject:

Hot damn!!
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joemama5052 · Ving Rhames Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 868

whoa baby!

sibiling rivalry much?
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:06 pm Post subject:

Mabey.........
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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 2:58 am Post subject:

good stuff cowboy you got alot on ur hands now samurai, cap and the ultimate marvl story

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