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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:03 am Post subject:

That's why I call him the Brian Michael Bendis of fanfics! Laughing

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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:23 am Post subject:

lol hopefully takin on more stories wont take away from the stories like i think it does for bendis

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:25 am Post subject:

Naw, CowBoy can take it! If anything he's getting better and better at scripting!
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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:28 am Post subject:

seems like it hes progresed alot since holywars

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:33 am Post subject:

He really has!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:57 pm Post subject:

Thanks guys. I can type fast so i dont think i will be a problem. But thanks again for all the complaments. I'll try my best not to let ya guys down.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:24 pm Post subject:

Cowboy I have read the first 2 pages of this story and I have to say I'm pretty dissapointed...

In myself for not reading this incredible story sooner! I'm gonna read the rest now!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:25 pm Post subject:

Always a comedian aint ya A1.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:27 pm Post subject:

You betcha! Wink

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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:29 pm Post subject:

Jeez!!! You almost fooled me there A1!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 12:20 am Post subject:

"NO FREAKIN WAY!!!!!! I DONT EVEN KNOW MY FATER AND YOU EXPECT ME TO BELIVE YOU ARE MY BROTHER!!!!" Jack yells.
The man pulls out a picture of there mother.
"My names Rick. Im three years older than ya."
"Well craizer things have happened in the past few weeks I guess."
"You two good enough to run?"
"Ya" They both replied.
"Good. We gotta get outta here now." Rick said as he handed Jack his sword. As soon as he tied it to his belt Rick took off down a passage.
"No Shirt?" Jack said as he began running. Cherry was close behind.
"Jack. I need to tell you this. If she is in danger you have to leave her. Her life is not important. Your is." He said in a low tone.
Jack glared at him.
"Just leave her if she is in danger. Got it?"
Jack looked forward and kept running.
He could hear screams and what sounded like explosions.
The roof came apart just behind Jack and Rick and three men jumped down. Cherry screamed. Jack and Rick stopped. Rick grabbed Jacks arm.
"Dont do it." Rick said.
"I've known you for like 20 min. Betwenn you and her you can go ^@$* your self." He said as he pulled his arm away and drew his sword. He stuck the first man through the back. The second attacked and Jack was forced to block holding both blade in place. The third came and was about to strike. Jack couldnt let go of the blcok or he would be killed. If he didnnt he would be killed. He thought it was over.Suddenly the third man fell. And broken two by four stuck outta his back. Cherry stood behind him. A fouth man jumped down and laned behind Cherry. He swung down and Cherry jumped forward. His blade slightly caught her in the righ shoulder. Jack faced his opponet anbd punched him in the jaw. THe man fell back and Jack thrust his blade in the man head. He pulled it out and threw it into the fourth mans chest. Cherry got up.
"Oh my god! Your hurt." He said.
"Im fine." She said as they both looked up. What they saw was what could destroy any one soul. But they knew what it musta been like before they even saw it. New york was painted red. With blood.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 6:56 am Post subject:

Again: WHAT??!!?!?!?!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 3:27 pm Post subject:

As willy wonka would say "Shocking!" Right?
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 4:18 pm Post subject:

"What the hell is going on up there!?" Jack yelled to his brother
"A War. You see your more inportant then you think. See this war is over you.Every 1000 years two chosen ones are born. One is you. No one knows who the other is. So for now both side fight to claim you. One side wants you to win. The other will kill you in order to make sure the other dont get you. This is why i was sent to get you. To make sure you stay alive." Rick said.
"Listen to me beacuse i am only going to say this once. I am going up there to end this before anyone else gets hurt. My life dosent matter as long as more people are still alive. Lifes of the many outway the life of one. Cherry. Please. I care for you and dont want you to get hurt. Hide or run. Please be careful." ANd with that he jumped through the hole into the city. People were being killed beacuse they were running away.
"SICK SONS OF BI^@*@!!!!" He said as he ran forward and took out two. One tried to get him from behind and Jack dropped to his knees and spun around. His blade hit just above the guys knees. He stood as another came at him. He thrust his sword into his gut. ANother came from behind. He pulled the sword out and thrust it behind him stabbing the man in the chest. He pulled his sword out and sprinted down the street where a group of people were surronded and about to be murdered.

Ben had made a full recovery. He had healed extremly fast. Him and Carmen were walking home from school that fatefull day. Carmen was trying to get over the fact the Jack was dead. Ben didnt want to belive it but he knew it was true. The both walked down the street when and man walked up to them. He held a sword. He handed it to Ben.
"You have been chosen. It is your choice of whos side you join." The man said. Then he turned and walked away. Ben just stared at the sword. As soon as the man left there eye sight screams sounded all around. They turned to see thousands of men with sword and bladed weapons attacking any one they could see. He grabbed Carmen hand and Just started running......

Jack cut the first in half. The next swung an axe.Jack grabbed his face and began digging his thumb in the mans eye. A man charged from the oppsite side and Jack pushed his blade through the bottom of the mans chin. The other man fell as Jack thumb went through. He punchs a man in the gut and plungs his sword through his back. A man slash him across the back as Jack takes a chunk of him. He vaults over one mans slash him as he does. In air he throws his sword straight down sticking into a man head. He lands as one man tries to stab him. He dodges to the left and pulls the sword away. He throws it into the last man. He walks over and pulls his sword free.
"Get outta town. These men will kill you if they see you. Hide in alleys ways." He says as he walks away.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 4:39 pm Post subject:

Whoever appeals to the law against his fellow man is either a fool or a coward. Whoever cannot take care of himself without that law is both. For a wounded man shall say to his assailant, " If I Die, you are forgiven,if I live, I WILL KILL YOU." Such is the Rule of Honor.

These are the words that Jack will live by in late issues.
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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 5:24 pm Post subject:

lol very intense very violent i like it

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:05 pm Post subject:

Thanks.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:44 pm Post subject:

As Jack walks down the street he suddenly gets a vision of the future.
He sees him self as an old man. Long white hair. His sword is rusted. He walks down the middle of new york. The town is ruined. BUrning and destroyed. He stops and walks up to one of the buildings. He pulls a small journal and holds it againts the wall as he writes. The only thing he sees him write is this.

Whoever appeals to the law against his fellow man is either a fool or a coward. Whoever cannot take care of himself without that law is both. For a wounded man shall say to his assailant, " If I Die, you are forgiven,if I live, I WILL KILL YOU." Such is the Rule of Honor.

Jack falls to his knees and breaths heavily. He wants time to think about what he has just seen but a group of men running towards him makes him stand and fight.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:46 pm Post subject:

Wow, man!!! This is outstanding!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:48 pm Post subject:

Thanks. I made up a bunch of ideas as we were writeing The Ultimate Marvels.
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