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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:49 pm Post subject:

Look forward to it!

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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:52 pm Post subject:

Gimme about another mintue.........
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:59 pm Post subject:

Jack ran like he had never before. Leaping over cars and trucks. He runs into an old lady.
"Something Wicked this way comes!" She says to him.
"WHAT!?" He replied. Then he heard it. Engines. Jet engines. He picked up the old lady and started sprinting again. He knew he couldnt out run the bombs with her on his shoulder.
"Drop me."
"What?" asked Jack.
"Im old. Im slowing ya down."
"But...."
"No buts."
As he landed to put her down a armed man attacked Jack. His blade caught the lady.
Even though she had wanted to die and this might have been a lot less painfull Jack went nuts. He pulled his sword and slashed the man across the chest. The man raised his sword to Jack but Jack cut his hand off. Jack spun around and dropped to hi knees. He thrust his blade back into the mans gut. He stood as the man fell.
He stood over the man.
"Kill me...." the man begged.
"Death will come in a short time." Jack said as he walked and knelt down by the lady.
"I want you to have this." She said handing him a small pouch."No time to look at it now but you can keep it. But if you find a man named Trevor Sheen. Give it to him."
"Ok." Jack said as tears rolled down his cheeks.
"They attack. Red eyes. Fast. Unpredictable. Monsters......." she said. Jack thought that was just memories. He stood and ran as he heard the bombers nearing. Ever step he took he heard the draw closer. Then he heard the first bomb hit. He knew he wouldnt get outta there. He had to take a chance. He lept onto a small building. Then on to a higher. He ran across the roof tops. The sound of bombs were deafiing. He reached the last building before the buildings started getting small again. He could see the outside of the city. He heard a jet fly over him. He jumped.

BBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!

Jack felt the force hit him. He went flying forward. As he flew the fire reached around him until all he could see was fire. He closed his eyes as the flames burned his skin."AAAAAHHHHHHHH" He opened his eye. He was outta the fire. He landed and looked back. New york looked like hell. He fell to his knees in pain and just watched his city burn..................,.....

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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:02 pm Post subject:

DAMN!!!!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:09 pm Post subject:

Good enough to get a DAMN! huh? Sweet.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:12 pm Post subject:

It feels so tense, man!!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:21 pm Post subject:

Cool. Thats what i was going for. Didnt know if it wasnt gonna work.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 9:39 pm Post subject:

He never planned to move again. He didnt want to. For while he watched the city burn. He heard screams. Thousands of them. People neer made it outta tghe city. He just wiched he would die right so he wouldnt have to hear them. It was 6 hours after the bombs fell that the last scream faded away. Thats also when he decide to move. For the army that attacked the city. The ones that should have died by the bombs. Marched outta the city. He raced towards them. There was a look out on a tall hill. His scream got the entire army looking at him. But stood there no longer. Jack stood there.
"You all look at me now. A lot of you most likely know who i am. Im your so called CHOSEN ONE. You attacked that city over me. That city now burn. Thousands died. There screams will be logged into my brain forever. Now. I dont like to kill. But ever scince i got this damn blade. Ive had too. Many times. But now. I want to kill. All of you. I sat there for hours listening to the screams that were caused by you.
Youre going to suffer at my hands. Witness this. The pissed off chosen one. As my last act as this acurssed thig i will end you. Most if not all." HE said as he looked at the thousnds below. He reached down and pulled the sword off the fallen enemy below him.
"300 spartans took on the persian empire. ONe man will take all of you. As long as you dont run away." Jack said. And with a faint smile he lept forward.
He landed in a giant circle they made around him. He tossed one of the swords in the air and put his hand up. He smiled and up the bring it on hand gesture. The first man charged up as he caught the sword slashing him across the face. All sides charged. He stood ready to defend. Blades swung from all side as he ducked. He knelt and spun slashing shin after shin bone. First row fell. He thrust one sword into and man while parrying anthors man attack. He jumped back over him,slashing him in mid air and stabbing two more as he landed. He stood blocking attacks from all sides and attacking too. Man fell after each swing. Some were able to land a hit. Others didnt get to raise there weapons. He flipped both blades up side down. He sprinted forward. Running in a straight line. A trail of bodys followed. It went on. Every man to dumb to turn and run. Jack stopped and turned aroun to see what he had done so far. Only 10 were left standing. They were the generals.
"How.......how is this possible....." One said.
"I will let you live if you walk away. But answer me this. How long was this fight?"
Jack asked.
"2 hours...." One said. And with that they turned and fled.
Jack. sat on the ground in a daze........
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:32 pm Post subject:

He had been walking for days. No sign of any people though. He couldnt remeber the last time he had eaten. He walked along a road that had a very steep incline. This worried him beacuse it went from perfectly flat to this incline. It took him three hours but he finally reached the top. What was up there shocked him. A town. With suivors. Instanly he spotted Cherrys red hair. He almost cried. Thats when he saw Carmen,Ben,and Rick. They were yelling somethin at him. They had worried looks in there eyes. Thats when he heard it. Helicoptors. He turned expecting to see one of the two armys. But it wasent one of them. It was the us. They opened fire as Jack bolted. Bullets coming from all sides Jack ran towards the town. He had counted 5 coptors before he ran. Thats whne he hard an evne scarier sound. The sound of a missle launching. It hit to his right but he just kept running. People ran in every direction as the bullets fired. He felt one hit his right shoulder blade. He ran around a corner as another missle hit. He ran down the street and another coptor cut in front of him. One behind fired a missle so Jack jumped up and grabbed the coptor as it flew up. A man pulled open the door and shot Jack in the back of the hand. Jack screamed in pain. He fell off and landed on a roof. He stood and pulled the extra sword from that scout he killed before he killed na army. He ran over to a cloths line hanging between two buildings and pulled it down. He tied one end to his sword and held the other. A coptor flew past him. He threw the sword and it stuck into the tail of the coptor. The coptor saw what he had done a flew forward quickly pulling Jack off the roof. Another coptor was coming towards them. Jack jumped off. As he fell he felt a sharp pain in his side. He hit the ground hard. One of the coptors proppellers had taken a chunk outta him. He passed out as Troops surronded him......................................
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 1:20 am Post subject:

HOT DAMN, WHAT A RIDE!!!!!! Very Happy

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:17 pm Post subject:

Never tried a chase scene. I worked out ok though?
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:33 pm Post subject:

It had mind-blowing action!!!!! Keep it up!!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:41 pm Post subject:

Sweet.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 8:56 pm Post subject:

I read a little of this during class while I could! I'm almost caught up! I'm to the part where he watched New York burn! I still have to read the car chase yet! All I can say is great work man! Keep it up!
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:05 pm Post subject:

Seeing I had a little bit of time here before trivi and all, I just finished reading the last part! AND GUESS WHAT?

I'M FINALLY CAUGHT UP!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!!

By the way great job Cowboy! This series not only has great action, but sweet writing too!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:13 pm Post subject:

Thanks man.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:35 pm Post subject:

Jack looked up. He was in a room with 7 men. They had there backs to him. He looked at his side. It was healed. His arms were behind him. He looked back to see 8 pairs of hand cuffs starting at his wrists and going all the way up to his bicep. One man turned and faced him.
"Now we got enough info to excute you for crimes against the country."
"Well theres one problem. You bombed the place. I was just trying to save people."
The man pulled his pistol and began to raise it. Jackl pulled as hard as he could. The cuffs chains broke andf he punched the first man back. He smashed the chair against two of them and split kicked two more. Jack kicked through the door. More then three dozen men stood outside. Jack raised his fists. The man smiled. Jack raised his hand and signaled for the to come on. He sprinted forward as they did. Expect he lept over top of them.
"sorry. But im not in the mood. Bye." And with that he sprinted down the hall..........
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:38 pm Post subject:

I was not expecting that!!

A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:43 pm Post subject:

Neither was I! I thought he was gonna tear them up! Another good one Cowboy!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:48 pm Post subject:

I kinow. I was thinkin about it but then i thought "Well with the next fight he is going to be in it just wouldnt be fair if he had to beat all these people. I mean come on. One guy can omly take so much."
I fear i might have said too much.
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