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CowBoy From Hell

This was the secnond story i ever made and i want to post it on here. I hope you guys like it. I will post part of it tonight at about 7 or so. Around then.
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joemama5052 · Ving Rhames Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 868

is iy 7 yet?
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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 8:46 pm Post subject:

any word on samurai?

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:21 pm Post subject:

I trying to think of how to post it. Like just liek normal or sonething different. But i still dont know.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:35 pm Post subject:

He ran through the building as the man shot at him. Poys shattered all around him and a bullet grazed his arm. Quickly he made his way to the basement. He knew he must save the sword. He pulled it from its cover as the man cronered him. He quickly he pulled theh blade and choped of his arm. The man didny have time to fall as he pushed past. He knew he had to save the sword.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 1:13 am Post subject:

Jack Summers walke ddown the street. He had to get home. The streets were dark and looked dangerous. He had a butterfly knife in his pocket just in case anything happened. He didnt think anything would but he need to be careful. He didnt think anyone would come towards him. He was about 5'7 but he had a good amount of muscle. He looked a lot older then he was. People thought he was 18 when he was only 15. Thats when he heard a noise. Then he saw a man running towards him. The man stoped next to him to catch his breath. He grasped his shoulder and began to talk very quickly.
"You need to help me!"
"Whats wrong?" Jack asked.
"They are going to kill me. I know that they will but you need to take this." He holds out a long cyclinder.
"What is it?"
"JUST TAKE IT!" The man scramed. Then he heard that sound again. He stared at the mans face. It grew pale. Then he fell to the ground. Jack saw why. A bullet hole was in his back. Jack held the cylinder and turned to run to find a rather large man behind him.
"Give it to me."
Jack stepped away as the man pulled a gun. Jack was ready. He threw the cylinder at his head. The man ducked and and was momentarley knocked off balance. Jack to this chance. He pulled the knife from his pocket and flipped out the blade like he had done many times before. He swiped the blade across the man chest. The man didnt even feel it as he pistol wipped Jack across the face. Jack thew the knife into the man shoulder stoping him for a second.But the man raised the gun and fired two shots. The first hit him in the shoulder. The second slide up his face start at his check up to the fore head grazing the skin as he fell back from the first shot. Jack was running on pure adernaline now. He pushed past the man toward the what he hoped was a weapon. The Cylinder. He picked it up and grabbed what was inside. He pulled out a sword. He swung it at his attacker but in mid swing relized the sheth was on. The man grabbed it out of mid air and held tight.As the man held Jack pulled the blade out. The man got a shockied look on his face. He raised the gun. Jack swung as he saw him raise it. SLASH! The man arm now ended at the middle of his fore arm. The man turned and ran leaving a trail of blood as he did. Jack began to pass out onto the ground as he heard an ambulance siren.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 1:47 am Post subject:

This has a few langauge issies in it. Ya Know like bad words.

He woke up in a hospital with his mother standing over him.
"Omy god ! Your ok!" She cried on top of him.
He had been out for two days. He hjad healed at a surprising rate. His arm just need to be bandaged every day and he face had healed but it left a long scar. Two days later he got to go back to school. As he walked into school the first thing he saw was his friend Carmen. She immadelty ran over and hugged him tight.
"Kinda squeezing the open wound there Carmen."
"Oh im sorry..." She said stepping back.
"Its ok." He walked past her.
She quickly walked up next to him.
"Ben's most likely looking for you." She told him.
"Ok. Lets hurry." He said scarcastlicy
'Carmen starts laughing.Jack smile and then dissapers around a corner before she sees.
"Jack thats....how does he do that.....?" Carmen aske her self as she walked toward her locker.
Jack walked to his first calss. A coulple mintues later the rest of the class filled in but thet teacher was late. Of cousre last to arrive but before the teacher was the Steve and his gang of jerk friends.When the spotted Jack they just had to see how he was doing. Jack always took what ever they could dish out and sit there camly. steve was rough today though. He picked Jack out of his chair to talk to him.
"LADIES AND GENTELMEN WELOCME BACK THE FIRST PERSON WHO WANTED TO KILL THEMSELVES BUT WAS TO BIG OF A WUSS TO PUT THE GUN IN HIS MOUTH! ITS JACK!"
Some students started to laugh.
"Dont joke about sucicide Steve."
"I cna joke about what ever i want. If i recall you dad tried and sceeced didnt he?"
"Yup. But i recall that your mom slept with your pool boy who didnt use protection thus creationg you." Jack said keeping a stright face the entire time.
As the class laughed Steve got a mad look on his face.
"Think your funny Summers?" Steve said as he pushed his finger into Jacks Shoulder.Jack winced in pain.
"DIdnt your dad kill himself beacuse you were born?" Steve said with a twisted smile. Jack couldnt take it any more. He used his left arm to knock away Steves hand as his right Punched him across the face. He spun around and kicked Steve in the rib cage knocking him into a desk. Steve fell to the floor crying. His goons got ready to pounc as the teacher walked in and started yelling. Moments Later Jack was sitting in the princpals office listing to the zero tolerance policy and beeing told he was suspended for two weeks. To Be countinued.....................
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 1:52 am Post subject:

Tell what you guys think! Ya know when ever someone get on and takes the time to read this.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 10:13 pm Post subject:

He had been home for an hour when he fell asleep.In his dreams he only saw one thing. That sword. Over and over again. He woke up and went to his mom.
"Did they find anything where they found me?"
"No.Why?"
"Just wondering. Is it all right if i go for a walk?"
"Ok.Just dont be gone for to long. I dont want you to get hurt again."
It took a little while but he made his way to where he got shot. The first thing he saw was his dried blood on the pavement. He checked around for the sword. It was like it vanished into thin air. No sign of it anywhere. As he started to walk away a small sparkel caught his eye. Its was under a dumpster. The sheth was back on to.
He thought he must have been crazy as he lifted the blade. A surge of energy raced throught him. His eyes rolled back in his head and he saw an image of his houe. He saw ther door kicked open and a man that looked like the one that tried to kill him. There were three more men dressed excatly like him to. His house was trashed. The men stood over his mother. They had beaten her. The man pulled a gun shot her and then they all left. He then saw a clock. It said 3:30. He came out of the trance and looked at his watch. It read 3:20. He had ten mintues to save his mothers life........
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 11:27 pm Post subject:

He got home with five mintues to spare. His front door was kicked in. He entered slowely. His mother kept a gun in the closet and he wanted to get it. He still had the sword but he didnt know how to use it. H elooked to his left and saw a man with his back to him. As he turned back towards the gun he was hit in th back of the head and knocked out.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:02 am Post subject:

This is awesome!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:47 pm Post subject:

Thanks. I dint think anyone would read it.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:01 am Post subject:

He woke up as one of the men was dragging him towards the master bedroom. They were three inches from the closet. He pulled his butterfly knife and slahed the mans aclees tenden in the back of your heel. The man fell the the ground and wouldnt get off of it. Jack drew the gun from the closet and blew his head off. He stood there in horror as he relized what he had done. Thats when he heard his mother scream.
He ran into the master bed room as the one arme man shot her. Three more men were in there as well. He shot five times. Three hit right on target killing the three men that he had not seen before. The other two hit the one armed man in both knee caps blowing ther both away. He ran to his mother to find her barely alive.
"Mom!" He said through tears.
"Jack......Jack I lov......I love y......you...." She said as she died in his arms. He looked up to see the sword sitting aganist the wall. He pulled out the blade and lifted it above his head. He brought it down on the one armed mans head. He then slowely walked towards the door. As he looked outside he was terrified. There stood a dozen me with guns pointed at him.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:02 am Post subject:

Wow! Can he take them all down?
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:18 am Post subject:

Thats what you will find out later. Bye though man. See ya later
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joemama5052 · Ving Rhames Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 868

WHOA!

This is amazing and so different...but a wicked god different!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:18 pm Post subject:

Thanks Joemama.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 11:39 pm Post subject:

"Are you guys with the with the one that killed my mother?" Jack asked
"Yes."
"Then i will KILL YOU TO!"
Thats when he noticed two me at his sides. Before they could grab his arms he he slashed his sword sidewas through the air cutting open both there throats. The last ten men fromed two single file lines in front of him. On to his left and one to his right. Both lines open fire as Jack races forward. He know he gets hit at least three times before he kills the first man but he dosent feel it. He jumps in between both groups and they kept fireing. Three more men were killed in frendily fire. Jack leaps into the air and strikes down two more. As he land he get shot once more in the back. He turn and throw his sword into the man that shot him. The las to come at him with knives. He grabs both there arm and make them stab eachother. He stand stareing at what he did before he passed out.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:24 am Post subject:

Gosh!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:58 am Post subject:

He wakes up in a hospital. A women doctor stand over him
" Where am I?"
"Your at the new york state prision."
"WHAT! WHY!" Jack yells as he tries to sit up. A wave of pain shoot across him.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!" He screams as he falls back.
"You murdered your mother and like 16 men. You know why your here."
"NO! THEY KILLED MY MOTHER AND TRIED TO KILL ME! I STOPPED THEM!"
"Your sick."
He laid there in that bed for a day and a half before they put him in a cell.It was small but at least it only had room for one person.He slept until breakfest the next day.He quickly got hos food and sat down at a table. He was half way through his food when he heard a voice behind him.
"MOVE OVER!"
"Why?"
"Beacuse it my table."
"Dont see your name on it."
He sensed the man about to strike him so he dodged and punched him in the gut. As he did a guard grabbed him away and drug him to a cell. He tossed him inside.
"Your here for many years. Please dont fight."
Then he walked away leaving Jack with that one thought. Him there for years.
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