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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 12:14 am Post subject: Spider Man: The breaking point.

I a while i plan on writeing a Spider man story. Dont know what universe im putting it in yet but i hope you guys like it.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 12:28 am Post subject:

No freaking way!!! I look forward to it, man!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 12:31 am Post subject:

Ive always wanted to do it and i finally think im good enough to do it.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 12:37 am Post subject:

You were always ready!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 12:44 am Post subject:

Thanks man.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 9:34 pm Post subject:

"With great power comes great resposibilty. He told me that. It feels like so long ago when i heard him say it. Ive always tried to live up to that. Helping people when ever and where ever i can.In doing so ive lost friends. Harry and Gwen. I miss the both. Ive been pushed to my limits. Even Nick fury thought i was going to snap. But i didnt. I kept going. But the rules have changed. Eddies back. And things couldnt get any worse. Norman broke out of prision. Two of my toughest enemys are coming after me. Me and what ever i have left. And for some reason i think that trask industrys is in dead center of this. Ive got to find a way to stop those two before they hurt some one. Before they break me."

-Spider-Man: Breaking Point.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 1:02 am Post subject:

"STAY BACK!!!!!!" Yelled the Shocker as he blasted a cop backwards. He smiled. The he saw a shadow fly past at an amazing speed. Some one landed behind him.
"Hermen, Hermen. Hermen. When are you going to learn?" Said Spider-man.
The shocker turned around quickly.
"THIS IS NONE OF YOUR CONCERN!!!" He yelled as he tried to blast Spidey. Spidey dodged.
"No. Not really. Not as much as your outfit concerns me. Seroulsy who dresses you? Your boyfriend?"
As the shocker went to blast him, Spidy covered his blasters with web fluid resulting in a malfunction the knocked Hermen out.
"And what kind of name is Hermen? Really i mean... Oh ya your out cold now. Forgot the routine." Said Spider man as he jumped away. He swung down a few streets then landed on a roof top looking down.
'Jeez. Lots of crime today. Course it is from idiots like the Ringer and Hermen but still. Lots of it.' Spider man said to himself. He walked over to a broken piece of mirror and pulled of his mask.
'Jeez. Look at me. No one would ever think i was spider man. I could pull of my mask in front of the whole school and they would think I was just pulling there leg. Of course half our school has the brains of Flash Tompson but thats besides the point. At least I have Mary and Aunt May. I doubt she'll ever get over the fact im spider man. Dropped a huge bomb shell on her that night. I want to talk to Mary so.."
A police car zoomed down the street below. Parker pulled his mask back on and lept after the car. It took five seconds to relize why the car was going so fast. A huge cloud of smoke was coming at him. But there were to many buildings around to see which building it was coming from. He swung around a huge skyscraper and relized that there was something terribly wrong. The smoke was coming from Tresklion. Base for the goverment group known as SHEILD. Parker landed n the harbor looking up at the pilliar of smoke.
"I am so to young to be doing this." he muttered to himself. Another explosion from the base. A news helicoptor flew past over head. Seconds later Spider Man was landing on the dock of the base. People ran every which way. Fire was every where. A dark figure landed in front of him. His green skin shown through the smoke.
"Hello Parker." The thing said.
"Hello Norman."
"Guess again." He said as he stepped into view.
"Your a hulking figure arint you Hulk."
The hulk smiled.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 1:41 am Post subject:

Wonder how this'll turn out...

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 1:46 pm Post subject:

I got alot of twists and turns set up for this one. Ive planned alot out for it.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 11:53 pm Post subject:

"So your attacking here? I thought you worked here? Whatd they do lay ya off!"
"You need to leave now Spider man. This isnt a place for you."
"Well im sorry but your hurting people so no. Besides what if im here to see my friend Nick huh?"
"Im hurting no one."
"Then the running screaming people and the hulk sized hole in the wall over there has nothin to do with you?"
"ENOUGH WITH YOU!" The Hulk yelled as he batted Spiderman away.
Spidey crashed into the wall. He fell to the ground and stood slowely.
'Well this is going to take awhile. And what does he mean hes not doing this? I gotta figure this out before any one......oy vey.'
Something else emerged through the wall. His helmet had been broken off but Peter would never forget his own face. The scoripin ;aunched himself at Peter.
"YOU DID THIS TO ME!!! IM HERE BEACUSE OF YOU!! YOULL PAY FOR THIS!!" He scremed as he swung his tail through the air. Peter dodged the attack and jumped back at him. He tackled him to the ground punched him in the face. He suddenly felt his spider sense go off. He ducked his head as the tail swipped again. As he did scorpian punched him off.
"DIESSSS" Scremed the scorpian as he began his barage. The attacks were like lighting. Peter lept back as the scorpian blasted poision at him.
"CALM DOWN!!" Peter yelled as he punched him back. The scorpian landed with a thud.
"You down now?" Peter asked breathing heavily.
"You. Yours the reason im here. YOULL DIES!!!!!" He yelled as he blasted something from his Tail at Peter. Peter jumped up as high as he could to dodge the attack. He was looking down at the blast when his sense went off again. He looked up just in time for the scorpin to knck him back down to the ground. Peter skided to a halt a few feet from where his Clone landed.
"You forced me here. They ran test. Did thing. Made me inhuman...."
Peter sat up and look at himself.The scorpins hands. He only had three fingers on each hand. The two fingers on each hadn were shaking. Not the hand but just the fingers. Suddenly with two pincers appeared where his fingers had been.Peter looked at the things eyes. Both eyes were splitting in two.He had fangs now.
"YOU DID THIS!!!!" He yelled as he sprinted at Peter. Peter jumped to his fet and took a swung at him. The thing batte his hand at him and sunk the pincers into Peter side.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 2:03 am Post subject:

Woo finnaly finished part two.
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Ultimates_rock25 · Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:33 am Post subject:

Nice. What universe is this is? Ultimate? Sounds like Ultimate (and that preview thing at the beginning was awesome)
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:01 pm Post subject:

Thanks and ya its ultimate.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:28 pm Post subject:

Peter hit the scorpin away. His side was a dark red. It felt warm. He fell to his knees in pain. He heard a loud noise and looked up. The scorpin was running at him. Peter rolled to the side narrowley avoiding at hit. He knew he couldnt avoid the next attack. Thats when a figure landed in front of him. He held a sheild on his arm.
"You ok?" He asked.
"Your....YOur Captian America right?" Peter asked.
"Yes. Just leave this to me." He said. He looked at the scorpin. " Wow. Enemys get ulgyier by the day huh?"
"HEY!" Peter yelled as Captian America raced forward. He threw a punch but it was ducked. The scorpin grabbed his arm, drawing blood.
"That the best you got?" Cap asked. Scoripns tail shot up and knocked Caps head back. He relsed Cap as he brought his tail around and smacked Cap away.

Peter slowely stood. He looked at his side. The bleeding wouldnt stop on its own. He held the wound closed and the shot web over it.
"God....Man i hope....Hope it holds." Peter said softly as he watched Captian america get smacked away.
"HEY UGLY!!!" Peter yelled to his clone." Wait a mintue.... DAMN CLONE!! AHHHH!!" Peter said as he ran at the Scorpin. The clone shot his tail towards Peter. Peter grabbed it under his left arm and held fast.
"Not so.. so hot with out this huh.."
"What do you mean?"
Peter smiled under his mask. He held teh tail tight and swung at it. His hand broke through it.
"Thats what i mean.." He threw the end of the tail back at him. The clone threw his head back and screamed. Peter took this chance to grab bot of its hands with webs.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!" It scremed.
"Finishing thsi fight.." Peter said. He now had control of both of the clones arm using the web. Holding onto the two strands he made a web ball in each hadn the stuck to the ends of the strand. Then he threw them into the walls to the left and right of him.
The scorpin tired to come forward but couldnt move. Peter jumped at him pummeled him. As the scorpin fell Peter stopped.
"Not exactly my.... my style of fight ing but i had to ennnnddd...."

Peter collasped.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 5:36 am Post subject:

Oooooh....
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Ultimates_rock25 · Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:36 am Post subject:

Wow.... Very good work. My only nitpick is.... how does Hulk know who Spidey is, and why is he all intelligent and not all 'HULK SMASH'? I apologise if thish as all been explianed already in Ultimates or something, but....
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 4:30 pm Post subject:

Hes not that smart but hes got some brains whens hes in it but. But im also using some of the info from there encounter in Ultimate Team up. Which is kind of dumb of me beacuse i dont know where the ultimate team up time line is at.
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Ultimates_rock25 · Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:12 am Post subject:

Oh.... Cool!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 5:34 pm Post subject:

I consider all the Team-Up issues to take place after the Double Trouble arc of USM, after the Tomorrow People arc of UXM (except for #1-- #1 takes place before UXM) and before any other series.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:51 pm Post subject:

ah that would make sense
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