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I am writing a story about him. I hope you like it beacuse i am going to do my best on it.
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I get the feeling I'll like it a lot
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Hunh. I look forward to this!
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| Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:22 pm Post subject: |
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What time period should i do it in. Past, present of both?
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present with flash backs!
I love flash-backs
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| Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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I can do it that way or have him dream and his dreams are the flash backs.
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He raced down the street after him. The man with the red skull. He ran up two flights of stairs and the onto actual floor. Steve knew he couldnt risk letting this man escape. The man raced down a row of cubicles and back into a stair well. Steve raced after him. The man was a flight of stairs ahead of him. Thet reached the roof and busted through the door. Steve whipped his sheild at the man hitting him in the middle of the back. Steve thought he was stunned as he rushed forward to grab him but he was stopped by a kick to the face. He began to pummel the man. Hittin him over and over until they reached the edge off the building. He stopped and looked at the defeated man.
"Why do you fight soilder?" The man asked.
" For my countrys belifes."
"The ones now or the orginal ones?"
"The orginal."
"Do you know who i am?"
"I know your a crimnal."
The man stood and pulled off his red mask. Steve stared in disbelif. For he stared at the face of his own father.
"Good bye son." The man said as he stepped off the building.
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| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 11:56 pm Post subject: |
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WHAT??!!??!!?!
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Likey huh? 
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Hell yeah!! 
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| Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:39 am Post subject: |
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Sweet. This story is going to push Cap to his limits and then some.
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I liked the first part!
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hoo daymmmm
this is crazy...I told you I would like it
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I gota find time to write more. Tomorrow i will post a lot more of both storys.
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"FURY! YOU TOLD ME MY FATHER WAS DEAD!" Steve yelled
"He did."
" I JUST FOUGHT HIM!"
"Suuurrreee. This some kinda 1940s joke?"
"No. The man i was chasing beacuse you said he was terroists pulled of his mask and he was my father."
"Cap you father would be like 90."
"I should be like 60."
"Good point."
Suddenly all the alarms went off.
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It's good to see Fury here... By the way; is this 616 or 1610?
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:27 pm Post subject: |
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Ultimate all the way.
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Oh!! I thought it was 616!
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Nope.
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I wanted to post more but i gotta go to my concert now BYE!!!!!!!!!!!
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