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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:34 pm Post subject:

No i just keep confusing myself with the panal thing
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:35 pm Post subject:

the numbers? there is no need for it huh? alright...

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:39 pm Post subject:

If you deleted the panal and number thing then it would work
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:56 pm Post subject:

Does this look better?

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:59 am Post subject:

Deja Vu (pt. 2)

:: Castle rises up and looks to his left

:: Then to his right

:: Castle places his hand on his forehead
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: There has to be a logical reason...

:: He wals to the limo to check if someone is still in the car
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: I f***in' saw that card once before...

:: The chauffeur Gustrav is gone
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: Nope... The little rat must've ran...

:: Punisher sits on the carseat
PUNSIHER MONLOGUE I must be losing is all... What a wierd--
SFX: EEOOEEOOEEOO

:: The ambulance siren makes Castle get up immediately
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: God****it!!

:: Frank races to the fire escape ladder
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: I can't ever catch a break can I?!

:: Castle climbs onto the ladder
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: God**** cops...

:: He opens his window and sticks his left foot first
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: ...Why can't they ever understand...?

:: He pulls a string
PUNISHER MONOLOGUE: I will always, always escape!

:: Punisher's entire loft is illuminated revealing Daredevil in the kitchen with his back turned to Frank
DAREDEVIL: Castle...? What the hell are you doing here?!

:: Punisher keeps his cool and picks up to drink his Miller from a table
PUNISHER: You don't even have to look at me? You're good Murdock... And this is where I'm currently living...

:: Daredevil turns around to face Castle
DAREDEVIL: Listen Castle... I don't want to hurt you...

:: Punisher squints his eyes and ignores DD completely

:: Castle looks past DD and notices a figure with a flashlight moving in the neighboring loft

:: DD steps closer
DAREDEVIL: Castle? You alright? Your heart. It's--

:: Frank steps closer to DD
PUNISHER: You-- uh... want to help me Murdock?

:: Frank places his hand on DD
DAREDEVIL: What're you--?
SFX: KLEESHH

:: Frank sprints past DD
PUNISHER: C'mon Murdock!

:: DD stops in his tracks

:: DD walks back to the kitchen

:: DD kneels down onto the aluminium floor

:: DD rubs his index and middle thumb onto Punisher's footprints

:: He smells the substance
DAREDEVIL MONOLOGUE: Blood... Dammit Castle! What've you been up to now?!

:: The bulb on the ceiling begins to swing above DD

:: DD rises up

:: Close up on DD's shocked face
DAREDEVIL: Aw, no...

:: The building explodes
SFX: BRA-KLAM

:: DD is blown through the wall

:: DD lands ontop of the limo where the paramedics are taking Fredo's corpse
PARAMEDIC: HOLY S***!!!

:: The scared paramedic falls onto the gravel floor in amazement
PARAMEDIC: Sid!! Hey Sid!!

:: The reader is then looking at a beat up and completely knocked out DD
DAREDEVIL: Castle...

TO BE CONTINUED...

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:05 pm Post subject:

Cool man keep it coming
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:49 pm Post subject:

Yeah I like it! Can't wait for more! Very Happy

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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 11:36 pm Post subject:

Does it make sense? I thought it did; but that's just me! Is this in anyway confusing?

And thanks guys! I appreciate the feedback!! Very Happy

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 3:29 am Post subject:

Deja Vu (pt. 3)

:: We are looking at the local hospital
CAPTION: Four Days For the New World...
CAPTION 2: New York Presbyterian Hospital; New York
NURSE: Fractured his left shoulder; his right wrist is dislocated multiple signs of bruises...

:: Inside we see an Asian female nurse and a British senior doctor holding a clipboard and reviewing their most recent patient; Daredevil who's on bed utterly covered in with tubes throughout his body
NURSE: ...If this doesn't prove Matt Murdock's The Man Without Fear; nothing will Dr. Brown... I always knew Murdock was Daredevil...
DR. BROWN: I... and you say he's blind? It's... remarkable!

:: We see Matt's life support screen
SFX: BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP
NURSE: Dr., look at this...
DR. BROWN: Is this his--?! Bloody hell!

:: We then see DD's face where his eyes are covered in bandages
NURSE: The patient is suffering from brain injury...
DAREDEVIL: ugh...

:: Dr. Brown and the nurse freeze

:: The clipboard falls onto the floor

:: DD rises up from the bed
DAREDEVIL: Wuh-where's Castle?

:: Dr. Brown and the nurse turn their faces toward each other
DAREDEVIL: I SAID WHERE IS FRANK CASTLE?!?!?

:: DD moves to the left of the bed to get off
DAREDEVIL: I KNOW YOU'RE HERE!! ANSWER ME!!

:: Dr. Brown steps closer towards
DR. BROWN: Matthew? I know you seem confused but--

:: DD turns his head towards the window
DR. BROWN: ...See; you've been in a coma for... how long Ashely?
ASHELY: For three days Dr. Brown...
DR. BROWN: Yes... you mustn't get up from your bed Matthew...

:: DD turns to face Dr. Brown and Ashely (nurse)
DAREDEVIL: Three days? I...

:: We see through DD's negative vision and see Punisher running
PUNISHER: C'mon Murdock!

:: Back to the present we see DD with his hand on his forehead
DAREDEVIL: But... Castle...

:: We see through DD's eyes again and see the smoke coming towards the reader
DAREDEVIL: Aw, no...

:: Back to present Dr. Brown walks toward Matt
DR. BROWN: Who is this Frank Castle? Was he in the same building as you?

:: DD looks back towards the window again as if expecting something
DAREDEVIL: Castle?

:: We then see a civilian racing down by the hospital on his rollerskates

:: A piece of a brick falls on his head
CIVILIAN: What the h--?

:: A huge chunk of rock then smashes the skater
SFX: BRU-KLUNK

:: Other civilians run away from the raining boulders

:: We then see the hospital annihilated from the inside out

:: Dr. Brown is flat on his back and astonished
DR. BROWN: Ashely?

:: We then see DD still in his green dress get up from the ground
DAREDEVIL: WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!

:: Standing beside DD is Frank
DAREDEVIL: INNOCENT PEOPLE GOT HURT!!!

:: Frank looks DD straight in the eyes
PUNISHER: It doesn't matter... We got bigger problems Murdock...

:: DD grabs Frank by the collar
DAREDEVIL: How the hell does it not matter?

:: Frank coughs and spits blood at DD
DAREDEVIL: Castle!! What the f--?!?!

:: Castle falls to the ground with both of his hands and knees on the floor
PUNISHER: They're... They're going to kill me Murdock...

:: Castle then knocks out flat onto the floor
DAREDEVIL: My God!! Castle!!

:: DD stands on his knees and places his hands on Castle's chest
DAREDEVIL: CASTLE!!!

TO BE CONTINUED...

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 8:24 pm Post subject:

Sweet.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:24 pm Post subject:

Thanks CowBoy!

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 2:25 am Post subject:

Deja Vu (pt. 4)

:: Matt picks Frank up

:: And places Frank on his left shoulder
DAREDEVIL: ARGH!!

:: He collapses to the floor with Frank
DAREDEVIL MONOLOGUE: My head... Unh!

:: He places his fingers on his temple
DAREDEVIL MONOLOGUE: I'm... I'm dying... Oh God... Please... ARGH!!

:: A green light appears a few feet away from the two of them
SFX: ERRRRRR

:: The light slowly expands

:: More

:: And more

:: A leg steps out from the portal

:: Out comes Frank
PUNISHER: Look at you...

:: He places his knee next to the other Frank
PUNISHER: Can't believe you're a week older than me, chump...

:: He lifts the other Frank up with both hands
PUNISHER: C'mon...

:: He throws him into the light
PUNISHER: Later, handsome...

:: He turns towards DD
PUNISHER: Dammit...

:: He picks him up

:: And throws him off the building
PUNISHER: Sorry Murdock...

:: Close up on Castle's face
PUNISHER: ...But I can't let you suffer any longer...
SFX: PU-CLACH

:: He walks away
LADY: OH MY GOD!!

:: Down the building people are crowding around DD's mangled body
MAN: H-- HE FELL OFF FROM THAT BUILDING!!!!
MAN 2: RUN!!!!

:: We see the The Sentry flying in the sky with his hand on his chin and the other on his hip
SENTRY: Then I go to the left ri--?

:: Close up on his ears
LADY: GO GET HELP-- SOMEBODY!! PLEASE!!!

:: Sentry bursts into superspeed
SENTRY: Oh well...

:: Sentry reaches his destination but cannot see through the crowd
SENTRY: What's--?

:: Close up on Robert's eyes

:: Castle out of no where is heading towards Robert in the sky with daggers in each hand
PUNISHER: Die Reynolds!!

:: Sentry grabs both of Punisher's wrists
SENTRY: Who are you?

:: Punisher places his feet on Sentry's chest
PUNISHER: I'm your worst nightmare, you scum!

:: Punisher pushes all his might on Sentry's chest
SENTRY: Do you know who you're messing with?!

:: Punisher smirks as the Sentry lets go of him
PUNISHER: Heh... you're one tough S.O.B....

:: Punisher smashes onto the cement

:: Close up on his face as blood pours from his mouth and his red eyes
LADY: OH MY GOD!!!!

:: The crowd looks up to the Sentry in horror
MAN: He-- He...

:: The man points to the Sentry
MAN: HE KILLED THEM BOTH!!!

:: Close up on the Sentry's face
SENTRY: What?

TO BE CONTINUED...

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 2:44 am Post subject:

Deja Vu (pt. 5)

:: Sentry flies downward to the cement
SENTRY: I didn't do anything!
MAN: SHUT THE F*** UP, YOU MURDERER!!!

:: Robert turns toward the man with his hands spread out and the man has his finger pointing to the sky
SENTRY: Sir, I was attacked by this man and then he let go.
MAN: I F***ING SAW YOU THROW HIM!!!

:: Robert turns toward DD's body

:: And back toward the man and has his finger pointed toward DD
SENTRY: But what about him?

:: The man looks over Sentry's shoulder

:: He then looks back at Sentry in anger and his finger right at Sentry's forehead
MAN: YOU THREW HIM AND THEN DECIDED TO PICK UP THAT OTHER MAN!!!

:: Sentry cannot believe the naive man

:: He clenches his fists and squats down to charge
SENTRY: I didn't do--

:: He releases all of his strength and flies away to the sky
SENTRY: --ANYTHING!!!!

:: The man disperses from the crowd

:: And walks away into an alley

:: By this time the ambulance arrives to the scene and quickly rush to place DD and Frank on seperate stretchers

:: The man reaches into his pocket

:: He places his cell phone to his ear
MAN: Hey... Hook line and sinker...

:: The man takes his glasses off
MAN: Sentry's been punished...

:: We are then shown inside the mind of Frank Castle through his vision where he runs off after hearing someone breaking in his neighboring loft
CAPTION: THEN...
PUNISHER: C'mon Murdock!

:: We see Castle jump off a ledge

:: And smash through the window
SFX: KLEEESH

:: He gets up
PUNISHER: Should've put more thought into that little "Work of Art"...

:: He sees a black shadow move to his left
PUNISHER: The hell was that?

:: He turns around

:: Daimon Hellstrom is leaning beside the corridor door on his right shoulder wearing a dark coat and a crucifix necklace with his arms crossed and his eyes glowing dark red
SON OF SATAN: You're Castle right? Burn in hell...

:: Frank crosses his arms to defend himself
PUNISHER: Aw crap!!

:: He shuts his eyes

:: Repeat

:: Repeat

:: He opens them

:: He is standing in a light green infinite room
PUNISHER: Is this--?

:: He places his hand on his sweaty forehead
PUNISHER: What the hell is going on? I--

:: He looks up to find Uatu standing right in front of him

:: Close up on Uatu's eyes
UATU: Prepare yourself Francis...

TO BE CONTINUED...

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 4:49 am Post subject:

Well?

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:17 pm Post subject:

Nice.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:24 pm Post subject:

WHOA! This sereies Rocks hard! Good Work Kevin! Razz

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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:59 pm Post subject:

Thanks guys!! Very Happy

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