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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:03 am Post subject: Dark Hunter

Hey you guys all know it by now im sure put i'll repost and for now on post everything on marvel and here!

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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:04 am Post subject: Crashed Meeting[pt 1 of 4]

Preparation

We find our heros outside the woods at the dead end of a street. Fred is holding a high-tech device and is watching it intensely while John is standing next to him leaning on his sword. There is a street light not to far from them keeping the area lit, but barely. John’s impatience gets the best of him and he says,

"Fred, we know they’re here lets just go. Your wasting MY time." Fred responds, "John be smart here, it would be nice to know how many we’re up against."

"They are NOBODIES we could just go in and take the whole lot, lets go!" John tells Fred. Fred’s hand held device beeps and he says,

"Ok there are 13 of them all class one, beside one who is a class two." John yells,

"I Told you NOBODIES!" He turns and starts towards the woods. Fred hesitates for a second shaking his head and under his breathe says "when will he learn." Fred then begins to walk in after John.

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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:05 am Post subject: Crashed Meeting [pt 2 of 4]

The Meeting

Arguing is taking place inside the woods that John and Fred were standing out side of not to long ago. There is a group of thirteen vampires all arguing amongst themselves.
“I’M DOIN’ THIS ALONE THIS IS RIDICULOUS!!” One of them says to a nerdy looking one.
“No, No this will work we need to ban together! Hector! Please!” The vampire says back.
Hector steps up on a fallen tree and begins to speak to the twelve others,
“Settle down, settle down fools. If we stay as one we are powerful, divided we are weak. For hundreds of years humans have believed us to be fairy tales, as real as the tooth fairy. We have gotten no respect from these pathetic creatures, but yet they fear us when they do not even believe. We can show them tonight, If we can bite and transform this whole neighborhood into our kind. If we work together we can span out and feed off everyone and build and army! Most of their law enforcement lives right here in this section of the city. We could have these humans in panic, when their own law enforcement is attacking them by the night!”
When hector began talking the group silenced quickly and as he continued his speech many shook their heads in agreement and cheers. In the back of the group in bushes are our heros crouched and talking quietly.
“Well he is obviously the leader,” Fred says to John.
“No $#!t. I want him for myself. I’ll go for him first.” John is about to stand but Fred grabs him and pulls him back down.
“Listen to me: 1. You might not wanna underestimate these people, and 2. Focusing on one is a bad idea lets make our way through the crowd. I have a feeling he will watch in arro-“ Fred begins but John interrupts saying,
“ you can do that, I’ll get him” John stands and begins to walk. With a “great” Fred also gets up and walk out. Hector who was continuing his speech stopped in surprise and stares at John and Fred and says,
“Well look it’s the John Knight and his side kick, I thought you were out of town.”
“Side Kick?” Fred says in surprise. Then John says,
“Nope we’re in town and yeah this is my side kick”

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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:06 am Post subject: Crashed Meeting[pt 3 of 4]

Battle Royal

“Side Kick” Fred says in surprise. Then John says,
“Nope we’re in town and yeah this is my side kick” At the end of this he shuffle kicks the closest vampire. The vamp flies and lands a few feet away and John laughs as the group surrounds himself and Fred.
“You are clearly out numbered,” Hector says and laughs. “You have no chance.”
Fred laughs and he and John conjure their shadow swords. John says,
“We are YOUR worst nightmare” at the site of the swords hectors face drops and all he can muster is a “kill them”. The Vampires fangs showing begin attacking Fred and John. The vampires have their on mystical swords and draw them and the battle heats up. As Fred blocks and counters one of them destroying the vampire he says,
“ Now im your side kick? I’m the one who found you!” He laughs and John says back laughing, “It’s funny how things work out when you’re a prophecy with a cool name.”
“Always gotta be joking” Fred says rolling his eyes. “Keeps me loose” John responds as he destroys another. One swings for Fred’s head he tucks and stabbing him in the heart says,
“You are a piece of work.” Fred and John defeat and destroy ten of the thirteen vampires and stop to find hector the nerdy vampire and the one who was talking to him in the beginning standing watching them destroy the others.
“Impressive the stories are true, you fight valiantly and you (pointing at Fred), must be Fred. It is time to die friend.” Hector says. Fred laughs and says to him, “Friend? I don’t lower myself to anything as ugly as you.” Hector laughs and draws his own sword as do the other two vampires.
“Hectors mine!” John tells Fred. “No let me then join me when your done with the other two.” Fred tells him. But John is focused and wants Hector for him self he tells his mentor “No”
Fred tells him “suit yourself” and the other two attack Fred and John. John Kicks one down and Fred begins fighting the other. He spins kicks the one he is fighting in the face then continues spinning and kicks the other as well and they both attack him. John Charges Hector and the two begin in a vicious onslaught of attacks and defenses.
“Your good for a class 2" John says to Hector. Hector laughs
“Class 2? Your not as good as the stories say your friend may be, but im no class 2"
“What? you where on our scanner,” John says as they continue fighting. The battle kicks it up yet another notch and Hector begins to get the upper hand. Fred Destroys the other two with a swift combination and they disintegrate. Hector kicks John in the chest and he fall to the ground. Fred turns after destroying the other and says,
“What are you doing on the Ground?” John tells him wiping his mouth,
“He is no class 2 maybe 4 or even 5!”

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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:09 am Post subject: Crashed Meeting[pt 4 of 4]

The Final Showdown

“What are you doing on the Ground?” John tells him wiping his mouth,
“He is no class 2 maybe 4 or even 5!”
“I told you not to underestimate he knows how to fool us somehow. This is gonna end now.” Fred says and pulls out his chain revealing a crucifix.
“Your lord has no power over me, my lord will strengthen me!” Hector tells Fred.
“We are sent by God to destroy your kind we cannot fail,” Fred assures Hector. John stands up and pulls out his crucifix. Hector with his eyes closed concentrating says,
“My lord, strengthen me.” with that he fiercely attack John and Fred. They Block and attack for a while until he throws a punch at John and he falls. Fred and Hector go blow for blow evenly matched until John rejoins the fight. Hector makes a mistake and trys to end Fred with a powerful over head slash and he is blocked easily by Fred, and John kicks him in his knee. As he crouches over John again kicks him in the face lifting him from his feet, and hector lands on his back losing his sword in the process. Fred and John together point their swords to his heart and lift to deal the final blow. But before it is cast all light is diminished and they hear a demonic laugh and step back.
“You Feel that” Fred asks John. “Yea we should-“ John is cut off by the demonic voice that says,
“John and Fred you have much bigger problems then hector, SATAN IS COMING!!”
What little light there was returns to the area and John and Fred look around calmly and make their swords disappear.

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I'll have the Continuation up tomorrow!

rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 1:22 am Post subject:

so have all you guys read it now? Any comments

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:03 pm Post subject:

I like it
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 11:53 pm Post subject:

Wow!!

rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:23 pm Post subject:

I'll Try and get guy to post his stories here

rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:27 pm Post subject:

Here's John Knight

rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:28 pm Post subject:

Here's Fred

rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 2:13 am Post subject:

I would finsih the other part but i need to check with guy and it doesnt conflict with his overall view of the entire DH story since its his whole idea and all i like to keep it within what he wants

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