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Man they are going to intertwin so much throughout this.
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Chapter 1
James had been running for day. His hands and fingers were frost bitten from the below zero temperatures of the Northern Canadian wilderness. He hadn’t seen food or shelter in over five days and was starting to lose hope. His healing factor could only keep him going for so long and he feared that he was pushing his limit. He had started this journey at a dead run but now he was barely moving at a slow crawl. The wind kicked snow up all around him, blurring his vision. He knew he was getting close by the large number of smells that were around. All human scents. He wondered forward for a few more hours before he knew it was the end. He collapsed and was ready to die. As he looked up one last time he spotted what he was looking for. The building. A burst of energy ran through him and he got up and staggered to the building. He fell through the door and waited five minutes as his hands healed and eternal body temp regulated. He stood and walked up to the front desk where the Nurse had been eyeballing him since he fell through the door.
“Hi. How may I help you?” She asked in a pleasant tone.
“I’m here to see my uncle.” James replied.
“And his name is?” She asked as she turned to her computer to the right.
“Charles Xavier.” He said.
The nurse looked shocked.
“How…How do you know him again?”
“I don’t know him. He’s my uncle though. That’s why I need to talk to him. Its about our family.”
“Okay. But you cant stay in there very long.” The nurse said as she picked up a key and walked down the green hall. James counted each step he took and how many rooms there were along the way. The nurse stopped at room 619.
“He’s in here.” She said. She opened the door and let James in. “Charles your Nephew is here to see you.”
Charles sat on the far side of the room in a straight jacket. James knew he was about to say that his brother Cain had died at age 22 and had died a lonely single man. James knew he couldn’t let this happen.
‘CHARLES! I KNOW YOU CAN HEAR ME! PLAY ALONG OR YOU WILL DIE!’
Charles had opened his mouth as James had screamed the message in his head.
“Thank you Jeannie.” He said in a pleasant tone as well.
“Ill be back in five minutes.” She replied as she walked away.
‘What do you want boy. WHO ARE YOU!’
‘I am James Howlett. I’ve been running through the Canadian wilderness for three years now and I found something that I need your help with. See no one would believe me if I showed them what I’m about to show you but, you can read my mind so you’ll know its true. If you believe me ill break you out and then you can help me. Deal?’
‘Deal. No show me.’ Said Charles with out ever moving his mouth.
James removed the item from his back pocket and Charles’s jaw dropped.
Bruce Wayne switched on the one object he had that wasn’t garbage. His police scanner.
“….Youths Kyle Rayner and John Stewart have gone missing. 24 hours have gone by and…” Bruce thumbed the scanner to the next station. “Bank Robbery in progress at 21st and union. I repeat bank robbery in progress..” That was all Bruce needed to hear. He needed to get his suit. He put on his ragged black T-Shirt and pulled the tattered gray vest with the symbol on it over top his head. He put on his pair of fingerless gloves and pulled his biker boots on over his black pants. He had made a set of fore arms guards with three small spikes that curved back that allowed for blocking and to cling to a building when needed. Last but not least he placed his custom made helmet on his head. The horns stood up six inches past his head. The rose from the back of the helmet like bat ears. At last the Batman was born again. He sprinted down an ally to his left and jumped into the street as a large truck drove by. He grabbed the edge and held on as it went. The truck went to 22nd street and turned away from 21st. Batman leapt off it and into a side ally. He rolled as he landed to avoid any damage to himself. He stood quickly and raced down the back alleys all the way to the bank. The robbers had broken through the back door, Batman would just follow their foot steps and catch them from behind. He snuck past the apparent guard that was watching the back. He Snuck up behind and knocked his lights out. But his gun went off. And he heard the other come running.
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| Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 8:28 pm Post subject: |
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Great job man! Can't wait for part 2!!!!!
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| Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 1:11 am Post subject: |
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Thanks guys!
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Chapter 2
Bruce reacted before he knew what was happening. He pulled one of the spikes free from his forearm and threw it at the enemies coming around the corner. It knocked the gun from his hand and Batman kicked him back. The second man opened fire before he even saw Batman and shredded the far wall, before a punch to the face brought him down. The third tried to pistol whip Batman but Bat’s was able to catch his arm and dislocate his shoulder. With all four men down and the police kicking down the door Bruce decided it was time to leave. He ran through the back ally and up a fire escape. He hoped from building to building for twenty minutes straight before reaching home. He found his abandoned and half demolished home in Gothom east. He went inside and removed his helmet. He’d lost one batarang tonight in the fight. He had to try and make another but needed parts. Just as his mind began to wander a voice came from behind. Bruce readied for attack as he turned around.
‘Oliver Queen was a 15 year old stuck in a 20 year olds body and was actually 43. His ideas were younger then him and he hardly took anything serious. At age 20 he went from a stuck up rich guy to one of the FBI’s most wanted. See after he gave away every penny he had to his name he decided that that wasn’t enough. So like his favorite story he started stealing from the rich and giving to the poor. He robbed company’s blind from the inside and then gave it to every charity he could find. Last month he stole 8.5 million from Stark industries. Company Owner Tony Stark replied with this message. “Believe me Oliver Queen or as you call yourself “Green Arrow” you will be brought to Justice. Just you wait my friend.”’
Oliver switched off the TV.
“Ha! Id like to see you try my friend. I’ve never been caught in the 20 years I’ve been doing this. Just because you new in this world doesn’t mean you can catch me.” Queen Spoke to himself as he picked up his bow and quiver. He pushed open the door to his small one room apartment and went into the hall. He locked it and turned to be face to face with none other then Tony Stark.
“Hello Oliver.” Tony said.
“Stark. Let me guess, some kinda tracker in the money?” Oliver replied.
“Nope. Just followed you until I found you.”
“Sure. If you don’t feel like telling me how then don’t but, don’t think of me as an idiot.”
Tony smiled an uncomfortable smile for a second. Oliver returned the favor. Before he knew what was happening Oliver was flying back through the door. He crashed and rolled across the ground, panting. He looked up as Tony walked in.
“Hit pretty hard for a little gu…” He stopped mid sentence. Tony had raised his right hand reveling a robotic hand. With his left hand he hot a switch and instantly an iron armor assembled on him.
“What the hell..are you?” Oliver said as he stood and drew and arrow.
“ I AM IRON MAN!! ” He yelled as he charged.
“Is that what I think it is?” Charles asked.
“I think it is!” James replied.
“Where…where did you get it?”
“As I wandered through the artic three years ago I found it in a snow heap. It still worked back then but after using it to fly back to Canada it lost all its power and doesn’t work now.”
“He must have dropped it.” Charles said.
“Who?” James asked.
“Hal Jordan.” Charles replied as he stared at the Glowing ring James held in his hand.
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| Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 12:02 am Post subject: |
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I need a name for this... 
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Part 2 was awesome man! Nice job!
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| Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 12:08 am Post subject: |
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Thanks. I got a big plan for 1)the next issue 2) The climax of Chunk one.
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Kickass!
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