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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 11:19 pm Post subject: Creation Myth.

See i have to do this for my English class and its a story of how the world was created. So heres mine. Tell me if its good or not!

There once was a god named Chochu. He lived with his wife with the rest of the gods in the great beyond. He was also the leader. He choose when to create a new solar system or galaxy. The rest of the god came to him for him to choose which solar system they would watch over. One day his wife bore a beautiful child. It was a boy. ChoChu thought long and hard for a name for his son but couldn’t think of one. Finally he had a brilliant idea! He would name his son Sun. After many years Sun grew into a young man. The age where he watch over. His father brought him to one and said to make planets. So Sun did. Then his father told him to stay in the center and watch over the planets. So Sun created nine planets to watch over. But the first three were always close to him so they were his favorite. After a time he grew bored of watching the planets revolve around him. So he decided to look at his planets. So he left some of his power to watch over the planets and went to the first planet. He stepped upon it but all it was was a desert. He grew bored quickly so he went to the next planet. But again it was just a wasteland. So he went to the third planet. As he came to land on the surface he found no land anywhere. So he stood in the water. He had seen water before but never this much. It went clear to his waist. HE looked down and saw all the creatures in the water. But every time he reached for them they swam away. So he started walking. He walked until he felt his footprints under the water again. He had begun to grow bored with this place when he had an idea. He could create land. He reached down and pulled up some dirt from under the water. He held it to his powers up in the sky. Suddenly the dirt grew and grew and grew. When it was as big as he wanted it set it back in the water. He climbed upon it and looked at what he had created. It was land but it had no beauty. He then remembered that as he walked around the planet he could feel small plants touching his feet. So he once again used his power and covered almost all his land with grass. But it was still flat. So he decided to make tall grass thus creating the trees. But again he was saddened. There was great beauty but nothing to enjoy it. Then he remembered all the creatures in the water. How happy they were. So he decided to make creatures upon land. He created Bears, Wolfs, Fox’s, Beavers, And Birds. He stayed with these creatures for many years. He grew old with them. Then came the time when he knew he had to leave for a new god to watch over. But he knew that the next god to come would not watch his creature like he would. So he needed to create a creature like him. He made a spitting image off him self only smaller. In doing this he first created man. When his father came to him to take him back to the great beyond he saw his Sun with all these creature. He saw how much he cared for them. So he said that from this day fourth his Sun would watch this place, giving it life forever.
So he carried his son to the Center of the solar system and returned him with his power. Thus creating the Sun.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 11:25 pm Post subject:

That was very poetic, man. Nice.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 11:26 pm Post subject:

Thanks man. I hope its an A paper!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 11:33 pm Post subject:

Totally, man. Good luck!
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Ultimates_rock25 · Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 3:02 pm Post subject:

That's pretty cool. Hope you get the A.
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