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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:16 am Post subject: A Dark day for Ben.

As normal people walk down the street they wonder things like what to do for dinner. Or What time to be home.
As Ben walks down the street he wonderes things like how will this world. end. Every day from his birth he only had one dream. Of himself walking down the street and watching as two jets shot nuclar missles at some creature high above new york.The only problem is that Ben couldnt find out what day that would happen.

That day is today.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:17 am Post subject:

6:00 am

Ben woke up to a small rumble. It lasted for a couple of mintue then stoped.
Wonder what that was.
We walked to his bathroom and looked into the mirror. He saw himself. About 5'9. Slight muscle. His messy Black Hair. And his five a clock shadow. As he started to reach for his razor another rumble. The blade fell and cut his hand. The floor was shaking badly now. He heard something that sounded like a crash. Instinctlvy he raced towards his room. As he left the bathroom something broke through the roof and onto the very spot he was standing seconds ago. Staring at what just fell into his bathroom he felt the ground stop shaking. As his eye focused on what was on his floor he knew what day this was. For on the floor of his lay the left wing of a U.S. Fighter jet.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:18 am Post subject:

6:12

Ben quickly got his cloyhs on and ran outside. As he walked down the street he wrapped his hand in gaws. Then he stopped, for he noticed something odd. It was 6:14 and yet the sun was high above his head.
He conutied walking. He headed towards the center of new york when he saw a police officer.
"Hello"Ben said."Whats going on here?" He waited for a response
Nothing. He reache dforward and tapped the mans shoulder.
The police officer turned annd poited his gun at Bens chest.
The police man smiled.
Ben knew that face. It was the man from his dreams. The one they were shooting nukes at,
"Hello Ben." Said the man.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:19 am Post subject:

6:31 A.M.

Ben ran into an allyway and stoped. He didnt know what that guys was. I mean afterall he got hit by a speeding car' Ben thought to himself. I need a weapon. Mabey some guns. But where do i get some guns. Thats when he soted a phone booth. He steped in and pushed 0.
"Operator"
"Yes i need to know where any gun stores are. I need help fixing a rifle."
The Operator told him.
"Thanks."
He headed towards where the operator told him. As he walked down the street he wondered what to do next. He thought what to do when he got the guns and if it was possible to stop this day. Then he spoted the gun shop. The sign outside said THE GUNRACK.
He walked up and tried the door.Locked.So he went around back and broke a window. As he climbed inside he knew why it was called the gunrack. Every wall had a gun. He reached forward for one when he felt something hard pressed against his head.
"Why did you break into my store." A voice said.
"Beacuse i need a weapon."He answered.
"Why?"
"For protection."
"From what?"
"I dont know"
"Stiupd son of a..." The voice yelled. Then he was hit over the head.
The last thing he saw before he blacked out was a girl kneeling beside him
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:20 am Post subject:

7:30 am

As Ben opened his eyes he was met by a shot gun barrel.
"Ok......Any reason for this." Ben asked
"Ya. You bust into my store looking for guns to protect yoursel with. NOW the entire tri state aera as gone nuts. Murders,rapes,riots,vandlism. So if ya dont start talking i'm gonna shoot out your knne caps. GOT IT"
"OK OK.....I'll tell ya."
Over the next few mintues Ben told him every thing.
"Wow" The man said. "I will belive ya for now. My names Jim. You may take what ya need but i am comin.
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bobbydrake · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:20 am Post subject:

Oooo. Very gripping beginning.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 10:16 pm Post subject:

Thanks. I will be posting more later.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:33 pm Post subject:

7:38

Ben,Jim,and Jims Daughter, Leave the store eqqiuped with an arsonal of weapons. Ben sees what Jim was meaning when he saids the whole town went crazy. People are running ever direction.Some of the running people are shooting the other running people. As the work there way toward the center of the city Bens sees overturned car, Dead bodies,People jumping out of building and even people Ben knew to never committe crimes mugging people and robbing stores.
"Why." He asked himself quielty. Ben began to wonder things. Like would he live through this day and would he have to kill anyone. That answer came quickley.
A man brandishing a very large knife caught him in the arm and then went after Jims daughter. Jim grabbed her and ran back. The man turned his attention back towards Ben. He swung the knife at his head. He thought this was the end of his life. But the blow never landed. Ben looked at his hand. He had caught the blade in his bare hand. Quickly he drew his pistol and shot the man. He let go of the knife expecting to see lots of blood but there wasent even a scratch.
"You got lucky kid. Thats all. Now lets go.
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