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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 10:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, yeah! Reading this feels like reading any other USM issue! Kudos!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks! lol
Um, why do you keep logging off and on again?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know... See if you spend at least five minutes anywhere on the boards without going to a separate page, your username at the bottom of the main page just disappears.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, OK. So how are things?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm actually really worried...
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Worried? Why? Is someone sick or something?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You hear about that earthquake in Peru? Almost 500 have died and twice that amount are injured. I got family that I haven't even met living near there.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh man.... I didn't hear about that. You haven't heard from them?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not that I know of... I didn't even know I had family there.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

.... I'm sorry.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry.... I've got to go. See ya.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Take care, man!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm back on! I see you are too! But I can't stay for long, I'm going to the cinema again. Do you want to know the twist about MJ-Hamster-Wolf-Girl and why she's like that?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wierd when that happens...
Yeah, sure!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 7:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice job on the story man!!!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 7:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Previously in Ultimate Spiderman.... (Soooo professional. I even have little recap paragraphs)
After being experimented and operated on to supposedly become a Goblin-like Wolf creature in the Clone Saga, Mary-Jane has been expierencing shaking in her arms and her fingernails have been turning into claws. She has not told Peter, her boyfriend afetr he broke up with Kitty Pryde (A.K.A. X-Man Shadowcat), who is also the superhero Spiderman. Spiderman is a public hero now after bringing down the billionaire industrialist Fisk, who was secretly New York's Kingpin of Crime. Following this, Fisk's former asassin Bullseye has escaped from custody and has set to free Fisk from jail so Fisk can pay him to kill Spiderman. Meanwhile, Mary-Jane experienced trembling in her right arm again whilst waiting for Peter to show up for a date in a diner. When half-human half-cyborg villain Deathlok attempted to blow up that same Diner, Mary-Jane was once again transformed into the creature. She quickly defeated Deathlok in front of a shocked Spiderman.

At the Diner. MJ is towering over Deathlok's dismembered body. She roars. Spiderman slowly gets up and walks over to her.
SPIDEY: M - Mary? Mary? It's me. It's Peter. Peter. Remember Peter?
MJ looks at him and sniffs. Her eyes widen.
MJ: P - P - Petttttterrrrrrrr....
SPIDEY: Yeah. Pettttterrrrr. That's it. Peter. Me. I'm here.
MJ: Whatttttttt's haaaappennnniiiing....
SPIDEY: We'll get you better. OK? Come with us. Come with Peter.
MJ: N - Nnnnnoooooooooo!!!!
She swipes Spidey away into a wall and towers over him.
MJ: Don't patronise me, you little freak!
She picks him up and looks at him.
MJ: Where is she? Where is the cat?
SPIDEY: Cat? Cat what cat - MJ - let me go. You don't want to do this.
MJ: Don't tell me what to do, spitball! You treat her like dirt! You treat us like dirt! Now where is the cat? The cat! Tell us now or you DIE!
There is a small thud. MJ looks at her shoulder. There is a tiny blue device stuck to it. Suddenly her whole body surges with electricity. She falls to the ground and drops Peter. She looks up. The Heli-Carrier is above her and S.H.I.E.L.D. agents are dropping from it.
MJ: Nooooooooooo!
SOLDIER: Yes, little lady. Now come quietly. My ma told me never to hit a girl and I don't intend to start now.
MJ: No! Get away! Get away!
She swipes at them. Several more drop down, including Nick Fury on a little jetpack, why not.
FURY: Shoot to wound, ladies! I don't want the girl hurt!
SOLDIER: You heard the General, men! Open fire!
They aim at her legs and starts firing. She quickly dodges them and picks up a large chunk of rock from the explosion.
MJ: Is that all you got? Let's see how you deal with a -
There is a boom and she pauses. Her eyes widen and she collapses. We see Nick Fury standing behind her with a large bazooka-like machine.
FURY: Huh. Lucky break.
SPIDEY: What the hell did you do to her, you jackass? Give me back my girlfriend! Right now!
FURY: Yuo'll never see your girlfirend again if you don't come with us. Now.
SPIDEY: The hell is that supposed to mean?
FURY: .... We've just had some bad news from the Fantastic Four.

At Rykers. Bullseye is standing in a room full of dead cops. Kingpin walks into the room, adjusting his cuffs. He has a rather tight detective suit on.
BULLSEYE: Nice look.
KINGPIN: I'm afraid they didn't have your size.
BULLSEYE: So how is this gonna work? You pay me now, or I stick Spidey and you pay me later?
KINGPIN: Later. I don't do advance. What happened to my old building?
BULLSEYE: How the hell should I know? I've been in jail for he last ninety-two weeks. Come on, let's find an exit.
He runs off. Fisk isn't used to being treated liek this. Bullseye's clearly got balls.

At the Baxter Building. Peter, Reed Richards, Sue Storm, Johnny Storm, Ben Grimm and Nick Fury are there. Reed is giving a demonstration of some kind.
REED: How did you say you got your powers?
SPIDEY: .... A super-spider bit me.
SUE: The Oz drug, right?
REED: Right, right.... Well, basically.... how do I say this....
SUE: It was you.
REED: Right. The Oz drug didn't just give you powers and go away, it stayed in your body. It took control. You barely even have any human blood left, it's all Oz. Your heart is pumping it everywhere through your body. It's like a disease. And it's infectious. When you kissed Mary -
JOHNNY: Or, you know, did the horixontal Tango, the dirty doo, the -
BEN: (Idiot.)
REED: - When you interacted with Mary, you passed it onto her. You gave her the drug. She.... She's pumping Oz too. Man.... your girlfirend kicks ass.
SUE: (And yours doesn't?)
SPIDEY: So I - I made her this? She's a - a - a giant fuzzy goblin girl because of me?
JOHNNY: Don't beat yourself up about it. Happens all the time.
BEN: I swear....
SPIDEY: But what about the operation that clone guy gave her? What did that do?
SUE: Aside from barf-up her kidneys a little.... absolutley nothing. That clone was crazy.
SPIDEY: But.... But I couldn't have! That's not possible!

HOLY HELL! WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT????
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 9:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious man!!!!!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 9:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wooooo!! Awesome!
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 8:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy My fans love it....
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 8:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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