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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 8:29 pm    Post subject: Holy Wars. The Ending Begins. Reply with quote

15 years. Never thought i would live to see the day. Vincent was born fifteen years ago today. I never told him who his parents were. I never told him of how his real father saved everyone. Or how Nick fury destroyed muntants. Or at leats in prisions them. His powers are delopeing and I know today is they day i must tell him the truth. And if he wants it. We will strike Nick furys base and free the muntats. Even kill nick fury. If its what he wants. This could be the end. And i just wanted you to know............
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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 8:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WHOA! IT'S BACK! IT'S GREAT! Sweet job Cowboy!
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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 9:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I always liked that name... Good job, man!!
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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 11:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

interesting idea, i'm looking forward to how you'll handle this
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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 7:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually Tom this is the end of a triolgy. I wrote the first two a while back.
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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sorry i hadn't noticed that, i'll have to go back & check out the others
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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool. I think you will like them!
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 11:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOOO! It's back baby!
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 11:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You bet it is!
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 12:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

SHORT AND KINDA CHEESY

Figured you guys needed a small taste. Eprologue





“PATCH WAIT UP!” Vincent yelled
“Just walk faster boy.” Patch replied.
“Tomorrow I turn 15! WOO! What did you get me dad?”
“You’ll find out tomorrow. Now. When we get home straight to bed. Got it bub?”
“YUP!!!!!”
They walked into the house and Vincent went straight to bed.
Patch sat in a chair by the fire.
“Been living in Japan for 15 years and now Im going to leave most likely tomorrow…..Damn kids….. I always hated that Patch name too but cant let any one know I’m him.”
Patch fell asleep then. Dreaming of that day. Walking from the launch chamber. Knowing he was dead. Taking Vincent from Rogues arms. Taking his hand. All the pain. All the lose……..


“WAKE UP!!!!!” Yelled Vincent.
“WHAT!!!!”
“WHERES MY PRESENTS OLD MAN!!”
“I need to talk to you.”
“Ok.”
“I need you to take off that bracelet I gave you on your tenth birth day.”
“Ok…?”
As the bracelet came off Vincent’ hand began to glow.
“You know they day you were born all the mutants were locked up?”
“ya….” He said as he went pale.
“You are one.”
“Oh my god….. Dad…..they’re going to KILL ME!!!”
“No.”
“Yes they are!”
“No….Im not your dad.”
“WHAT!”
Out of Patch’ hand appeared three long claws.
“THEN WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!”
”I’m Logan. Aka Wolverine.”
“Of the…….the …..Xmen?”
“Ya.”
“Then who was my father? How do you have me! Wheres my mother!”
Suddenly that house shook.
“I will tell you all this later. Now. We have to leave.”
“Why?”
The roof was suddenly ripped off.
“That’s why.”
“SENTINALS!!!!!!”
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 1:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hot damn!!
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 1:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think its pretty cheesy.
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 1:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's just an epilogue! It has to get better from here on out!!
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 12:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i'm finally caught up & this look awesome
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 11:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok. You know what! Screw this begging. This is not the way my story was meant to be. It needs to blow you guys away!!!!!1
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 12:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is how it should start!


The Hole. This is a Club were a group of mutants hang out. I bet your think how can there be mutants? Nick Fury nabbed them all right? Well we have our DNA hidden. See none of us are over 16. They don’t check us yet either. But if our parents found out we come here to fight on another. We would be in deep shit. I’m the youngest. I’m just about to turn 15 next week. So in celebration the guys are making me fight all of them. Well they don’t know that I come here every day a practice with my powers. Or about the other powers I developed. Here they come. Oh. And I’m Vincent. And the Four guys charging me are, Tim ,Bruce, Will, and Ben. Tim can turn into a rock thing. Bruce can teleport. Will can shoot fire and Ben Can change into anything he thinks of. TIME TO FIGHT!


“GOING DOWN Frazzel Snazzel BOY!!!” Tim yelled.
I smiled as my hand began to glow. I punched the ground and it exploded sending them flying back. Ben jumped through the dust as a wolf. I dropped to my knee and upper cut him. Now this place in an old wheelhouse. Tools everywhere. Two floors. And the big construction floor with every thing missing. Perfect place for a good fight. Bruce teleported behind me and grabbed me. I couldn’t pull free. Will was about to blast me. I knew it was time to revel my new powers. I thought of the hulk.
“How…..?’ Bruce said as he tripped back. I samacked Will into a wall before he could hit me. Then I went back to normal.
“How did you do that!” Tim said as he walked up. “You just had powers to charge Kinetic energy till it exploded.”
“Ya but I found out that I can copy your guys powers.” I said as I burst into flames.
“Damn…..” Will said as he looked to the ground.
Suddenly there was a loud bang followed by lots of screams.
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 12:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, this is badass, man!!
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 12:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thats what i was going for!!!!
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 12:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well mission accomplished!
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 12:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOOOOOOO!!!
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