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joemama5052 · Ving Rhames Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 868

woooo!!! It's the best!
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 9:39 pm Post subject:

Yeah that was a good start there! I love this series! And the last 2!
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joemama5052 · Ving Rhames Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 868

This should most definitly be finished!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:11 pm Post subject:

I am finishing it. But i keep thinking of how it should start. It keeps changeing in my mond to include more and give back ground and all that jazz.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:16 pm Post subject: Part one.

“GUYS! WE HAVE TO GO NOW!!!” I yelled as I turned to leave. There was a blast above us. I turned and looked back at my friends. The guys I grew up with, Disappeared in a blinding light. I covered my eyes from the light. I couldn’t see but I could hear a voice.
“Don’t move. I don’t want to hurt the son of him.” The voice said. It sounded almost robotic. As my eyes focused in I saw him. Iron man. Tony Stark. Leader of the sentinel program. He worked with Nick Fury, the man that hunts down any hero or mutant.

“And what if I do? You’ll blast me too!” I yelled
“I didn’t blast them I teleported to base.”
“BULL! I KNOW EXACTLY SIX MONTHS AGO FURY ORDERD LETHAL WEAPONERY TO BE USED ON ALL TARGETS!”
”Wow. Hacked government files.” He lifted his arms with the blaster attached at me.
“Your wearing an old armor the Iron dude! Why?” I said as I reached in my pockets.
“Cant beat the classics. I beat Caption America once in this armor.”
I smiled as my hands came back out of my pockets. I had grabbed just what I needed.
“What are those between your fingers?” He asked
“Air soft BBs. Small. But very easy to carry around. I have thousands in my pockets.”
In between each of my fingers on both hands I held the BBs. I had at least a hundred. And each one started to glow.
“DON’T!” He yelled as he blasted. The force of the blast helped me in lift off as I jumped to him. I threw all the ammo in my right hand at him. Each hit him with the explosive power of a stick of dynamite. My trench coat was made of Kevlar, strong enough to stop that blast. Well not the blast at his range but fifteen feet up and twelve away would stop it with only a few burses. I turned my back to it and went fetal as the explosion went off. I went through the wall and out side the warehouse. I rolled across the ground and turned as the ware house caught fire.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:18 pm Post subject:

All-right! Good job man! Iron Man got it good!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:21 pm Post subject:

Nice!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:23 pm Post subject:

That nothin A1. Check back later for part 2.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:38 pm Post subject:

I heard a high pitch charging sound. Iron man blasted out of the warehouse and tackled me into the wall. He held me there as he started to talk.
“In the name of shield you are under arrest, for attacking and officer and hacking into top secret government files.”
“You know what you TIN CAN! YOU talk to much.” I said as I grabbed his helmet. It started to glow too.
“HELMET DETACH!” Stark yelled as he jumped back. I landed and threw his helmet at him. It exploded on impact sending him through a wall. I had never been hit like that. I felt weak and tired as I feel to my knees. Sweat drenched my face. I stood slowly again try to see if Stark was coming back at me. I couldn’t see him. But then the ground rumbled. He shot up from underneath me. I screamed in pain I was flung into the air. I reached in my pocket and pulled a few fire crackers. As I fell Stark circled around to strike again. I can charge the bbs to have the force of a stick of dynamite each. Firecrackers and like tank rounds. Stark saw them as they were about to hit him. He covered his face as they exploded. This blast sent me flying. I landed in someone’s apartment. There was a propane tank next to me. I picked it up as ran out side. Stark was just pulling himself off the ground. I charged the tank and threw it. I wouldn’t have done it if I had known how big the bang was going to be….
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:44 pm Post subject:

Oooh...
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 7:05 pm Post subject:

Stark screamed as it left my hands. It was to late to stop it now. I flew straight and true, right into his arms. He caught it and laid on top of the tank. It blew. The force shook the ground. Stark was annihilated. His armor did next to nothing to stop the blast. The force wave hit before the explosion. Windows shattered and street lamps fell. Then they burst into flames. I turned my back into the explosion and flames. I flew forward and hit the ground a block later. I couldn’t hear a thing. I stood slowly and tried to breath but there wasn’t much oxygen left in the air. I turned back down the street. It was nothing but a crater. I walked into an alley way and waited. I needed to regain my composure. I just killed Iron Man. I looked up as shield helicarrier uncloaked itself. It lowered itself down until it was almost touching the rooftops. That’s when I decided that Nick fury had to die. I was positive he was on this ship. They wouldn’t rest until they got me for killing Stark. So it was time to take the fight to them. I checked to make sure the knife my father gave me last year was there. It was. I ran up the fire escapes and to the roof top. From there I sprinted and jumped from roof top to roof top. I dodged past the shield agents that were clearing the scene with ease. I tied a cloths line I found a few roof tops back around the handle of my knife and threw up, sticking into the ship allowing me to climb up. As I climbed up I heard a noise to my left. I hand reached out of the wall and pulled me in the chip along with my knife. I lay on the ground, it was too dark to see the man. I could tell he was holding my knife.
“So you never did die up in space did you? How’d you survive it? Bail out before you got to high up?”
“I have no idea who the hell you are or what your talking about!”
Suddenly the lights came on.
“Your not Gambit.”
“And your not my father. That’s my knife.” I said with a cocky smile as I kicked him in the knee cap. As he fell I grabbed the knife and held it to his throat.
“I know your Nick Fury.” I said.
“And your Vincent.” Said a voice from behind me.
I turned to see Captain America behind me. He reached forward, grabbing my coat. Before I could even put up a fight he threw me down the hall. He still had my coat. He dropped it as he came at me again. I was left weapon less. He reached me and backhanded me across the room. I was picked up by so machine. As I rose to eye level I saw I was looking at iron man.
“HOLY SHIT! H..H….HOW ARE YOU ALIVE!”
“You don’t think that was the real stark do you? I’ve got clone all over. I’ve been reported dead 20 times now kido.”
“So are you the real one?” I asked
“Real one? I don’t know what you mean by that but im the original if that’s what you mean.”
“Good to know.” I said as I put my hands to his chest. He jumped back before I could do anything. Cap jumped at me and swung, I wasn’t strong enough to catch his fist. Yet.
The instant I caught his fist he stopped.
“How?” He asked.
“Simple. My other power. I can steal yours!”
“Just like your mother.” Nick said fro across the room.
“Huh? WHAT!” I yelled Cap grabbed me and threw me. I landed with Iron Man flying at me. I threw my weight into the punch. It connected and sent him back across the room. I smiled until I felt a sharp pain in my back. I reached my hand out only to have an arrow fly through it. Hawkeye stood across the room docking another arrow. This one would have killed me. I had one chance to make it out of here alive. I put my hand on the floor and charged as much of the floor as I could.
“Ill take my leave now. You shoot me and this place is gone.” I said as I limped across the room to Nick. I smiled at him as I walked by. I picked my knife and cloths line up as I got to the door. It opened. All I could see was clouds. I was hit in the back of the head and fell out. I turned in mid air and threw my knife at the door. Nick had hit me. My knife got him. As I fell I pulled the line and yanked him out. He came right to me and was greeted with a punch. It sent him back through the door. I cursed under my breath as I realized that he would be okay. Then I remembered I was falling to my death…..
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 7:07 pm Post subject:

See Bendis and all the writers said that Ultimatum would end the first chapter of the ultimate marvel universe. I want this story. Holy wars to be the end of the first book of the Normal universe.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:23 pm Post subject:

Good work, man! Surprised

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