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 Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:16 am Post subject: UPDATE: Ateles News and RaG comic news |
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I have Dark Hunters but dark hunters is a collaberation with my friend Guy he created the characters and we are making a comic with his stories but this character is all mine and I wanted to post him see what you guys think.
Im Still Unsure of his true name and superhero name but for now im callingin him monkey man because well i based him off a monkey kinda sorta and he has a monkey tail
I wrote a very quick origin story the other day in school and wrote up a character developement so its still in progress and subject to change
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| Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:17 am Post subject: Jim Cambel Bio |
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Short History:{takes place in Ultimate Universe} Unknown Mutant gene which didnt show itsself until late highschool(17 yrs old) His mutant gene gives him all his abilities enhanced (agility,stength,quickness, hearing, taste, smell, vision, Healing)
starts fighting low level crime but is mostly small time no big baddies as a senior in high school which makes him realize he wants to be in the FBI. He goes to college gets top marks in Law, and Criminal Justice. (he graduated a 4 year program in 2 taking summer classes as reading ahead passing exams) After College joins the United States Marine Corp. is enlisted for 2 years spending one in traning (with his great marks and good intelligence he learns many feilds from explosives to sniper) the second is spent in iraq and after a huge battle where he saves his squad is decorated highly and asked to leave if he wishes he leaves to follow his dream to become an FBI agent. He applies for the FBI but they say he needs expierence as a law officer so he becomes a Philadelphia Police Officer for 2 years. He then applies for the FBI and a few months in is in a fatal car accident coming to his suburban house he flies from his car staggers into woods and passes out. He awakes not remembering one thing about himself. and lives in the woods for 4 months in those 4 months he drinks from a river that Osborn industries were directly dumping their magic formula for a super soldier oz into. He gains his sessational super human powers that are just enhanced his mutant gene. With his new DNA structure damaged by oz he is not recognized as a mutant. He travels the world for 2 more years in search of himself until finally coming back and meeting his wife(who though always was told he was dead believed otherwise). This only tickled his memories and it didnt come back to him. He then lives a life of fighting crime. and eventually ends up meeting Nick Fury of S.H.E.I.L.D.
Real Name: James Robert Cambel
Alias: Monkey Man, Hot Shot
Group Affiliation:FBI[formerly USMC, PPD] *Eventually Sheild*
Identity:Secret [known by sheild eventually]
Citizenship: United States
Place of Birth:Philadelphia, PA
Known Realitives:Jennifer Kelly Williams[wife or girl friend(not sure how old i want him to be yet)], Joe James Cambel[father], Mary Anne Cambel [mother], Joe Ryan Cambel [younger brother], Brittney Nicole Cambel [Sister]
Age:26 [when employed by S.H.E.I.L.D. (depending on what story)]
Height: 5'10''[depending on age]
Weight: 182lbs[depending on age]
Build:Cut Athletic
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Education:College Degree top of his class, completed marine training in many different desk and feild operations, Philadelphia Police training in many areas, and FBI Training
Powers:He has the ability to lift/press 10 tons [still debating how much i want him to be able to do *also depending on age*] Super Human agility and reflexes, Has a 6th sense he calls his "bad feeling" [similar to spider-man's spider-sense but not as good and only in extreme cases detects where it coming from] Heals faster then a normal human [not a healing factor but just faster for example a normal person falls scraps knee takes 3 days to fully heal, he does it takes 12-18 hours], Peak of Human Hearing, tasteing, and Smell
Abilities: Accomplished athlete in highschool [stopped in college because of his powers] played football, baseball and basketball. Boxed since he was seven years old, because of his father being a professional boxer. Excelled in gymnastics since he could walk, his mother was an olympic gymnast and his teacher. Has leaping ability similar to hulk [unsure if i want to keep this but he doesnt have much of a mobility i dont want him swinging to spider-manish {of an already spidermanish character} and i like this ability]. While trying to "find himself" he has traveled through out the world and trained in many martial art forms and combat techniques around the world. Excellent Marksman from marine training, though he doesnt like to use guns[but he likes to collect them]. Excellent sword and Bo(staff) fighter as well as all other bladed weapons.
Weapons: He has adamantium "climbing claws" which help him climb when needed they come out of his boots and gloves[palm]. Has One normal sword which eventually he is given an adamantium sword along with an adamantium staff. Has two batons that he uses most of the time [he doesnt wanna kill any one]. He also carries any other items in his possesion he thinks he may need at a given mission or for a certain enemy.
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His Preliminary Sketches and Gear
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Cambel out of costume
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 5:51 am Post subject: Jim Cambel: Origin of a Hero |
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Part 1:Life leading up to His Big Change
James Robert Cambel Being 22 years old was a family man. He married his wife, Jennifer Williams, right after he finished college. The two are high school sweethearts. They began going out their junior year of high school. They were good friends since they met in middle school. Jen moved to Philadelphia, Jim’s hometown, from New York City in middle school and he became her first friend in a new school. Jen asked Jim out and they dated the rest of high school and even through college. Jim was surprised being asked out by her, but he kinda always was attracted just couldn’t muster up the courage to ask her out. After dating all that time and being friends it only seemed right to marry her.
In the end of Jim’s junior year he discovered he had special “powers”. Unknown to him he was actually a mutant. He was always the kid sticking up for the other kid getting picked on his whole life, and when he realized his true abilities he decided to fight some low level crime. He made a raggedy costume and fought crime through the rest of highschool. As a little child he always said he wanted to be a police officer, and then he realized it was his dream to be an FBI agent and do it big time for the government.
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I'll have part two up soon leave some comments tell me what you think it may be a little boring but i as a writer and a reader always like when you really get to know the main character.
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:40 am Post subject: Jim Cambel: Origin of a Hero |
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Part 2: Jim's College Career, Surfacing of Powers, Parent Relationship
Jim worked extra hard in college. Actually overboard. He is a very intelligent person, but pushed himself by taking summer classes and advanced classes and passing tests which granted him extra credits, to graduate college in two years. He wasn’t Reed Richards in intellect but he had the work ethic and drive to get everything done. His degree was in Law and Criminal Justice. Jimmy always had a fascination with guns. It was a weapon so powerful to instantly take life away from almost any living animal on earth, including his fellow humans. He loved to collect guns, but hated to use them. Jim never had any intention of ever using deadly force unless he or his loved ones where in life or death situation.
Jim was always quite the athlete playing football, baseball, and basketball since he was a small child and continued playing in high school. What helped his unbelievable athletic ability was in fact genetics. It was unknown to himself and everyone else he was a mutant. He was always abnormally strong for someone his age height and weight. He was 5'8'’, 157lbs his junior year and could out lift any lineman on the team. He thought this was weird to him so he decided to not lift with the team. His full mutant abilities didn’t show themselves until he was 17 years old. And when he found out about his true abilities he decided to quit sports. He felt as if he was almost cheating.
Jim’s father, Joe, was a professional boxer and his father trained him as a boxer since he was seven years old. His mother, Mary, was a medal winning Olympic gymnast and ever since Jim could walk he loved to do gymnastics.
Though a competitor, Jim had a heart of gold and he was an all around nice guy and treated every one fairly. For the most part he is serious though he likes to joke from time to time. His wife was the same but she had a little bit of a temper.
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Some more character back ground still boring but again i feel as though you need to get to know the character
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 7:09 pm Post subject: Brittney Cambel [Jim's Sister] Bio |
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Short History:{takes place in Ultimate Universe} Brittney Cambel is the younger sister of Jim Cambel. When Jim found out he was a mutant Britt was only 7 but her own mutant abilities where showing them selves. Very Similar to Jim's. Following in her mother's footsteps, she was a gymnast from the time she could walk. Her dream was to, like her mom, take a medal in the olympics, but with her mutant abilities surfacing she and her parents decided not to enter her into the competition. When she found out about Jim's High school vigilante outings she decided she would follow in his footsteps. She developed her own grappleing system to swing from buildings and even developed a light weight costume to block bullets, at age 15. One year later her brother Jim began working with S.H.I.E.L.D. and told Fury about his sister he brought her in and started having her develop for the agency. After seeing spider-man fight Doctor Octopus on television she knew she had saw a similar plant to Hammers industries in her area she stormed the Hammer Agency, but during her mission she was fighting security and happened to fall into a batch of Justin Hammers formula similar to OZ. The enhanced her strength and gave her the ability to lift 3 tons and made her "bad feeling" work more efficiently.
Real Name: Brittney Nicole Cambel
Alias: None
Group Affiliation: S.H.I.E.L.D., Formerly the X-Men [lasted only about a month she didn't like living with just other mutants didn't feel right to her and she missed her family]
Identity: Secret [known by shield]
Citizenship: United States
Place of Birth: Philadelphia, PA
Known Relatives: Joe James Cambel [father], Mary Anne Cambel [mother], James Robert Cambel [oldest brother], Joe Ryan Cambel older brother], Brittney Nicole Cambel [Sister], Jennifer Kelly Cambel [sister-in-law]
Age:16
Height: 5'6''
Weight: 112lbs
Build: Athletic, Skinny
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blonde
Education: Genius intellect passed down to her by her Grandmother. Excellent inventor. Still In high school. She skipped a grade and is in her Junior Year when she should be a Sophomore. Works after school for shield developing gear and devices along with the tinkerer. She is well knowledgeable in human anatomy and has also at times worked as a S.H.I.E.L.D. doctor when they are overrun with injuries. Learns from the brains at S.H.I.E.L.D.
Powers: He has the ability to lift/press 3 tons Super Human agility and reflexes, Has a 6th sense he calls her bad feeling [similar to spider-man's spider-sense but not as good. But better then her brothers'] Heals faster then a normal human [not a healing factor but just faster for example a normal person falls scraps knee takes 3 days to fully heal, he does it takes 10-14 hours], Peak of Human Hearing, tasting, and Smell
Abilities: Her older brother Joe. Had extreme anger problems as a child and would fight with his sister often. She gained experience fighting from this, even though her father never let her take place in boxing. Both her brother's boxed from the time they were young children. While living with the X-Men gained massive amounts of training in danger room exercises, in her month living there. She is beyond an olympic level gymnast and with the enhancement from the Hammer formula even better. Her reflexes are superior to her brother Jim's. When She joined S.H.I.E.L.D. Jim also took her under his wing and trained with her, without their parents knowing because he couldn't stop her from being a vigilante but he could at least train her to keep her safe.
Weapons: She invented grapplers [similar to batman and the black cat] to swing from building to building. Also can be used as a weapon grabbing and tying enemies. She invented a material that is soft and pliable but when hit by a bullet or knife becomes hard and rigid and cannot be pierced. Her Brother after training gave her his adamantium staff
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