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CowBoy From Hell
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 Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:03 am Post subject: A poem I wrote |
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I dont feel like logging off yet so I will add this poem i wrote for the fun of it.
I stand before the gates of oblivions.
To step through could mean eternal salvation.
To step back could mean eternal damnation.
In my hand is freedom in a steel shell.
This is my chance.
With this I could change the world.
For better or worse,
I do not know.
I pull free the soul of freedom,
And I count the copper plated changes.
Bang.
I could stop evil.
Bang.
I could murder good.
Bang.
Good bye to the corrupt and evil.
Bang.
I send the righteous to their god.
I give freedom it’s soul back,
And point the weapon of change at the gates of oblivion.
Voices,
One tells me to act.
To destroy the gate and make the changes.
The other asks,
Who gave you the right to make this choice?
The voices rip apart my mind.
They fill every crevasse of my mind,
Screaming for my sway.
I smile as the Occam's razor rears its face.
This isn’t my choice.
It’s my obligation.
The world needs the truth.
And the hell that lies behind the gates is just that.
I fire change and shatter the gates.
I shoot again,
This time at the gate keeper.
My head disappears,
And Hellish freedom consumes the world.
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| Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:47 am Post subject: |
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Wow, this is amazing, man...
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| Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 4:17 am Post subject: |
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Thanks. And I wrote it for fun the other day. I usauly dont write poems but I liked this one.
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I could never write a poem even half as good as that. I suck at writing poems, although I'm quite good at memorising monologues and speeches and stuff. Maybe the play's the thing!
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Its always worth a shot
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