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PostPosted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:45 am    Post subject: Battery Reply with quote

I feel the power surging through my body, like another heart beat hidden with in my own, pulsing and throbbing, searching for a crack, searching for a way to blast free from within. It hurts. At first. As I struggle to control it, it fights, like a wounded animal. My knees buckle, I lose control of my wrists, my hands curling tight within themselves. It rushes up, towards my brain. I force my eyes shut in fear, fear the soft goop I have for eyes is just the exit the power longs for. The energy hits my head all at once. The force drives me up, yanking me off my knees, back to standing. It doesn’t last. My knees buckle again as soon as the hurt returns. This time I fall completely, first on my face, then to the right where I turned fetal before I had completely hit the ground. I felt it in my stomach, burning like a torch. My arms broke free and I dig savagely at my chest as I feel the power rise to my heart. It’s looking for control, and it knows where to find it. It hits me like a truck, and my heart nearly bursts. It forces me from the fetal position, to being completely out stretched. I was a star, and I felt as if I were burning bright. I tasted blood, then felt the vomit rush up. I flipped to my stomach as it came out. It wasn’t puke. I stared at the pool of blood spreading out beneath me, a crimson lake of my life, seconds of my life gone for good. I knew its plan now. I knew it meant to gain release from me, by going out like a regurgitated meal. I wouldn’t let it. This battle wasn’t done yet. I wouldn’t let it be. It raced to my head again, intending to burst through my teeth, but it changed course at the last second. It knew it couldn’t get away like that, at surged for my head again. It carried me off my feet, into the air. I floated above the ground, for now I was the powers puppet. I had pissed it off, now Id pay the consequences. It raced through me again, through my veins, searching for an exit. I wanted to scream, but I couldn’t. It’d escape if I did. Instead I let it takes its course. My…everything burned. My body couldn’t take it. I felt my right shoulder burst open, but it didn’t leave. Blood poured free but the power didn’t leave. My left wrist went next. It snapped back with such a violent force that the skin tore free. It wouldn’t take long now. My hand hung limp, even as the rest of my body convulsed. At last it found my spine. It knew it would hurt, and it wanted to enjoy the moment. It rose through my nerves, frying them as it went. It crawled at a snails pace, and with each vertebrae the pain increased. My headshot back as it climbed. I couldn’t contain it. I screamed as it reached my brain stem. It ripped my mind apart. It burnt my soul to a crisp. I died when it dropped me. I hit with a splash as I landed in the pool of my blood. I felt my heart stop. Then the surge came. It felt like 20,000 volts to the brain stem. My eyes burst open, and I felt breath return to me. I sat up, wondering how this was possible. I looked at my wrist, to discover it healed. The pool of blood in which I rested was almost 8 feet around. There shouldn’t bee any blood left in my body. I had to test this. I had no blade, nor any foreign object, so I went about it with my own teeth. I bit deep into the meat of my left arm. It hurt. Nothing compared to what I had just been through. I drew back in disgust of what I had just done. But there was no blood. I used my hand to press the wound back, and as if by magic, a burning sensation appeared. I pulled free my hand and the cuts were nothing more then a small scar now.
“WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING TO ME!”
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

interesting and cool as always Cowboy

but maybe you should have ended it with WHERE THE HELL ARE ALL THE MARVELS!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good Comic.

But me and Dom (Interpol) were talking on yahoo last night, and now Im planning on redoing the ultimate marvels universe. The characters are the same, similar story line, but charcter will appear differently, fights and battles change, the town is different, as well as expanding the universe. The outsiders will play a bigger part in the main story, and vice versa, as well as the main character of Battery.


Battery is a character I created for a super hero version of D&D, and I will be using my friends characters as well. They are based on a different chunk of the planet though so its all good.

Mostly Im bored nowadays and miss the shit out of writeing things like the Ultimate Marvels. So if my plans as well as Doms work like i think they will, then bad ass things will start to happen.
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