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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 1:38 am Post subject:

The Blade never hits. Nick got hit. He jumped in front. Nick falls to the floor. Gambit looks at Daimein who is healing the wound in his chest. Gambit looks back at Nick.
"Why?"
"Beacuse you can beat him."
"No i cant. Ive tried before but failed."
"Huh.......i..................." Nick says. Then he says no more.
Gambit looks at Daimein who is now smileing. He begins to feel that energy again. His eyes begin to glow balck. He picks Nick up and moves him out of the way. He turns back to Daimein as his entire body begins to pulse. Daimein looks up in surprise.
"If you turley are a God now Daimiein then prepare to fight the Devil." Says Gambit wicklidy.
"You dont scare me. Face it you cant kill me.You know that as well as i do."

"That mabey true but I can make you wish you were dead. I can make you feel not only the pain of all the muntants that you have killed, But i can muptliy it ten folds."

"Just beacuse you give the i am a hero that has nothing to live for so i will kill you ten time over speech dosent mean it will scare me away. Let me guess you are gonna ask me to quit now beacuse you dont want to do this.?"
"Truthfully. No. This wasnent a choice for you to make. For I am you judge ,Jury and exctuiner. I have made the choice for you. Its death."

"Thats a new one. But still do you think you can kill me?

"ENOUGH TALKING!" Gambit screams as he charges.

Logan hops into a small jet. Slowely he take off and begins flying towards the main floor where the last heard Gambit.

Logan.
Yes Jean?
Gambit has dissapered.
What?
He was there but is gone now.
Is he dead?
I dont know but i still feel two people in the room.
Nick?
No. His life force is gone.
Damnit....
Just hurry.
Ok.

Gambit punches him across the face knocking him down. Daimein tries to hit hit back but is blocked. They both start doing martial arts. They cant touch each other. As the ba ttle Daimein notice Gambits face begin to grow darker and darker.Daimein looked to his left. There stood Gambit. But he was still blocking punchs from where he stood in front of him. Gambit kicked him across the room. He turns to his lefts as he sails across th room. Gambit stands there. He smacks him back the other way. After a couple more times Daimen falls to the floor. Gambit picks him up.

"Hheheheheeheeehhhehheeeeheeehrheheheeheehehehehehehehehhe" Daimein
laughs.,

"Whats so funny."
"Your transtion into darkness is almost complete"
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 1:40 am Post subject:

Holy crap that was a lot of writing/typing.
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 2:45 am Post subject:

Damien is really... Emperor Palpatine?

Laughing

Kidding! Great stuff! Wow, I wonder if Gambit will turn bad! That would be intresting!

I wish this series would never end!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 3:48 am Post subject:

Sooooo... he's turning... evil?

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 2:27 pm Post subject:

COme on that would never happejn.....this early in the story.

Just think back to when the first found him and Logan. Where were they?
Who was there master? Who has a lot of power?
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 2:51 pm Post subject:

Gambit drops Daimein.
"No."
"Yes. Your becomeing darkness."
"NO!!"
"Yes you are."
Gambit drops to the floor. Clutching his head his mind begins to flash.
"NNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!" He begins to scream. Over and over. So many images flash before his eyes. Images of his life. His childhood. Him as a teenager. Adn now. His chest began to hurt as the image of the iceicle piercing his chest. He rears his head back as his eyes turn white. Then they roll back into his head and he collapes.
Daimein smiles and begins to walk forward when he hears an explosion.
He turn and sees a jet floating there. Logan jumps from the cockpit.
"GETAWAY FROM HIM!!!!!!!!" Logan screams as his claws sink into Daimeins chest.
Daimein stumbles back as Logan strikes again. Logan slashes and tears at him . Daimeins blood is everywhere. As Logan swings for his head, Daimein blasts him back. He turns and runs away. Logan gets up to chase him but sees Gambit.
"No...." He says as he rushs towards him.
"JEAN! HELP!"
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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 5:06 pm Post subject:

Wow! I hope Gambit is all right! What a great story! This is nothing short of a masterpiece!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject:

Thanks A1!
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what now? why won't damie die!!!!!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 11:11 pm Post subject:

Wow!!

rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:47 pm Post subject:

Cowboy i just read the whole story its great keep it comin

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:51 pm Post subject:

Typeing a huge chunk right now.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:39 pm Post subject:

I have been typing for about an hour and still am not done with this part. You guys will be surprised.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:42 pm Post subject:

The following takes place at muir island.

"Its been two weeks. Are we sure he is even going to wake up?" Logan asks
"He'll pull through. He's tough." Answers Moria.
Its been two weeks from the last fight with Daimein. The world has heard nothing from him in that time. Gambit hasent wokens up and Rouge is close to going into labor. Bobby is finally back on his feet after all this time and is starting to regain control of his powers. Nightcrawlwer, Kitty,and Colusses have been helping whats left of Sheild clean up new york.
Jean,Rouge,Logan,And Moria are standing over Gambit.
"I'm going into his mind." Jean says outta the blue.
"What?" Asks Moria.
"I'm going in and find out what is wrong with him."
"He's in a coma."
"I dont think that is it. Stand back i'm going in." Jean says with athourty
Before Moria can protest Jean enter Gambits mind.

Nightcrawler notices it first. A giant crack in the ground raceing towards them.
Ghost rider explodes from the ground and leaps towards them all. Kitty,and Colusses dont pay any attention they just think that he is here to help. Nighcrawler dosent. He pulls his blades and Ghs chain launchs towards Kitty. He throws one blade through a hole in the chain sticking it to a wall. Before GH relizes whats happening Kurt is upon him. As kurt slash him he sees GH's eyes. They are how Gambit explained Franks eyes.
"KITTY, PETER, HE IS BEING CONTROLED!"
The both run forward but are stoped by a wall of flames. They turn around and see Blackheart standing there.

Jean is confused by what sees finds. She was expecting it to be like a urban place where theives were everone. BUt this wasnt that. This was black. Pitch black. The only thing see saw besides that was a small path that she began to follow. After a short walk see found Gambit. He was just sitting on the path.
"Gambit?"
"Go away...."
"I'm here to help."
"I'll hurt you."
"Why would you hurt me?"
"Beacuse i cant be controled."
"Just let me hlpe you." Jean said as she took a step closer.
Instantly two arms burst from Gambits back. His face grew black and hoen sprouted from his head. Two more legs appeared. As he jumped at her she saw him completly.
The closer left arm was normal but just really big and coverd in the balck fur like material that covered his body. His closer right armwas big at first but went small and pointed like a whip. The left back arm had three finger but then a lage blade where his ring and pinkey finger should be. The right back arm was big too but the hand was like a spike but in the shape of a dimand. It had two front legs and two back and a long one in the middle. Its face was long and slender. Its eyes were white and so was its mouth expect for its black teeth. The entire creature was covered in a black fur. Jean tried to jump back but triped and fell as the creature was about to land on her. It landed right next to her leg and then jumped back to where it had started. It instantly transformed back into Gambit who sat back down.
"Told ya....." Gambit says.

Gh kicked Kurt off but he teleported back and sunk his blade into GH's shoulder.
Gh fell back in pain.
Kitty sprinted through Blackheart. Peter punched him across the face knocking him towards Kitty who kicked him away. As blackheart stood he was hit by a car crushing him into a building. Kitty jumped through and grabbed him tossing him out towards Peter. Peter hit him back into the gas tank of the car explodeing on impact.
Gh tried to hit him with pennence stare but before he could Kurt rammed his saber though him. Then Kurt did something he had never done before. He pictured the chip in Gh's head and concintrated. Seconds later Kurt held a Microchip in his hand. He smiled at his accomplishment but then fell to his knees in exaghustion.

"WHAT WAS THAT GAMBIT?" Jean asked almost screaming.
"Darkness. I dont know what else to call it other then darkness."
"DARKNESS!"
"Daimein said that the darkness was taking me over. Normally i wouldnt trust him but ever scence Apocclops has me i have had this feeling that someone else was in my head."
".......I.....I dont know what that could be...."
"No one would. Thats why i need to stay here and keep it from taking over."
"Let me help you then."
"You cant waste that much energy on me and then try and fight Daimein and his forces or wahat ever there called."
"Then i will leave the fighting to you."
"Then he will have all his men attack you."
"Hold on a sec......"
Suddenly Rouge appeared.
"Remy let Jean help you."
"NO."
She stepped toward him
"STAY BACK!"
"REMY LET HER HELP YOU!"

Five mintues ago.....
"How were you able to get pregent Rouge? I though that you couldnt let anybody touch you." Asks Moria.
"....Back when me and Gambit returned home and Daimein was there. Right after the bomb. Daimein shot me with a dart. I thought it was a trank but.....It....it took my powers."
"No....Daimein has that kind of tech. Why hasent he used it then." Logan asks.
"I dont know......" Rouge says.

Now....

"Remy please."
"NO! JUST LEAVE!"
"Let me help you!." Jean butts in.
"NO ONE ON THIS EARTH CAN HELP ME!"
"Well its a good thing that i really dont live on this earth any more."
Gambit looks up and sees Charles Xaiver standing there.
"Hello Remy." He says.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:43 pm Post subject:

That was fun.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 11:22 pm Post subject:

I just put this into word and was checking out the states on this.

18 pages
896 lines
6456 words.
28703 letters.

For the origninal holy wars it was.

9 pages.
445 lines
3418 words.
15488 letters.

Combine together it is.

27 pages.
1328 lines
9874 words
44191 letters.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 1:00 am Post subject:

Awesome!!

A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 6:42 pm Post subject:

Whoa! Great story!

Since I'm off today, I'm gonna work on that annual now!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 11:29 pm Post subject:

Sweet
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 12:45 am Post subject:

"I can serperate you and that beast Remy." Charles says.
"Outta my head Xaiver. You dont belong here."
"Just let me help you."
"No."
"You need to be sprate."
"Proffeser your alive?" Asks jean.
"Yes i am. Would you help me seperate these two please."
"Dont listen to him jean." Remy says loudly.
Jean steped forward towards Xaiver when Gambit stood up.
"OUTTA MY HEAD!"
"No. You need help Remy. Let me help you."
"THATS IT!!!!" Gambit said as he charged Xaiver.
Gambit punchs him across the face. Xaiver hits back. The go back and forth. Hit for hit. Gambit kicks him back and chrages forward again. Xaiver stands up and knocks Him back. Suddenly he transforms into Daimein.
"Hello Remy."
"Get OUTTA my HEAD!"
"Why. Its just so lovely in here."
"What did you do with him?"
"Who?"
"Xaiver. You dont have the power or tech to do this your self. You have him dont you."
"And this is where it sucks. How did you figure that out. I mean COME ON?"
Gambit smiles.
Daimein dissapers
"How did you do that Gambit." Jean asks
"Beacuse its my head. I wanted him out bad enough. Now get out and send Logan in."
"Why?"
"Beacuse i need to train."
"ok....OH! Ok."
Seconds later her and Rouge dissaper and Logan appears.
"Teach me everything you Logan.Its my head so in here it seams like a week in here but in an hour out there."
"Ok. But this will be one of the toughest thing you'll ever go through especially beacuse its all in your head."
"If i complain make it harder."
"Deal."
Over the next 24 hours Jean,Rouge,and Moria waited.

In Gambits Noggin............

Logan showed him attacks and blocks that havent been heard of in hundreds of years expect by him and his master. He showed him sword play and close quaters combat. He taught him almost all Japanze fighting style. Then they went to styles the Logan had made up himself. The they moved onto Chineze martial arts. Logan was right. It was tough. Even though it was in his head it still hurt. Bad. Logan nearly broke both of his arms. Ouch. Gambit never complained. No matter how painfull it was he never did. Logan knocked him senseless a couple of times.
Fianlly after 24 weeks of traning Logan said it was time to wake up.

Gambit sat up quickly. He checked his surrondeings. Rouge hugged him.
"Im glad your back. You guys took forever...." She said almost crying.
"I took even longer in there."
"I love you.......
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