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PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ULTIMATEA1 PRODUCTIONS PROUDLY PRESENT...



THE ULTIMATE MARVEL TRIVIA GAME!!!!



Issue #2






"NOOOO!!!!", yelled Mike in horror as the lethal green gas threatened to engulf him in the plane. Without a moment's hesitation Mike quickly stuck his hand over the gas and released as much A1 Steak Sauce as he possibly could. He knew it would never stop the gas, but it was his last hope before he would surely die. But something different happened this time. The brown steak sauce emmited a glowing green color. When the steak sauce hit the gas it seemed to push it back. The green glow to the sauce seemed to crackle loudly as it met with the lethal gas. It only pushed the gas back for a moment then it once again smothered Mike.



Mike's smile faded from his lips as he inhaled the gas cloud. He started to pass out, and his last thought before the darkness took over was, I'm dying... please God let me live so I can be the hero I've always dreamed of being. With that last thought Mike fell over, likely dead.



Meanwhile in a tall tower in NYC....



"Did you complete your mission Dark?" The monsterous DragynWulf asked from his throne.
"Well, as you know, master, the missiles did not kill him but I used my spells and managed to teleport a capsule of lethal gas into his luggage, so surely he must be dead by now." Mr. Dark told his master as he bowed to him.
"Good, he had better be for your sake. I don't like children with powers." DragynWulf replied nastily. "Now leave me Dark..."
"Yes my lord" Mr. Dark said as he left the room.


3 days later...



"AAAAGGHHH!!!!" Cried Mike as he woke up in a hospital bed. "What happened... Where am I...?" He asked drowsily as he looked around the small hospital room.
"Goodness! You're finally awake!" A blonde haired nurse said as she entered the room.
"What's going on? How am I alive?" Mike asked in a panicked rush.
"Relax son. Get your rest; you'll be fine." The nurse assured him.
"No, I wanna know how that gas didn't kill me." Mike demanded becoming more alert.
"I think the doctor may be able to explain better than I can." The nurse said as she beckoned the doctor to come.



"Hello there, Michael! How are you feeling?" A man in his mid 40's asked.
"Dizzy and a little nautious..." Mike replied as he examined the doctor.
"Don't worry about that, my boy. You'll be just fine as soon as you get a little rest"
"Look, I wanna know how that gas didn't kill me." Mike asked in a softer tone that before.
"Well, it's a bit of a complicated story... but if you must know now, I'll tell you." The doctor said as he sat on a chair.


"Well, luckily you were almost in New York when you passed out, so they made an emergency landing and transported you to this hospital, in the heart of downtown New York City."
"Wait how long was I out?" Mike asked him.
"Oh, about three days, but listen closely: here's where the story get interesting. A little investigation was made and they found a small gray capsule where the gas had come out. In it was a thick brown substance, which was later identified as a sauce known as, um... A1 Steak Sauce. Thing is this steak sauce had a small amount of green material in it, so we tested it."
"So what is it?" Mike asked impatiently.
"Ha, that's what I'd like to know myself. It's some kind of an unidentified mineral which seems to have a strong suction force in it."
"So the chemical that should have killed you was completely harmless, because this mineral that was found seemed to suck up every bit of the harmful gasses out of it. The gas you breathed in should have had 9 different kinds of poisonous gasses in it. Instead when we tested it, it had zero."



"So, you're saying this mineral sucked up all the lethal stuff and left just harmless gas?"
"Exactly, all the bad chemicals you should have inhaled are right here in this crystal," The doctor said as he held up what appeared to be a green shiny rock. "We think that this mineral or crystal started off in liquid form and as it started to suck up the harmful gasses it developed into a solid object with nine layers and was made harder than a rock." The doctor explained.
"Nine layers... Isn't that how many poisonous gasses you said were in that capsule?" Mike questioned.
"Yes, that is indeed correct." The doctor frowned.


"So now that you have all your answers, I have a few questions I'd like answered from you," The doctor said. "Where did you get a capsule full of some of the deadliest gases ever recorded, and where did that steak sauce and a never before discovered mineral come from?"
"Well, I have no idea about that mineral, or whatever, but I may know where the A1 Steak Sauce came from." Mike answered. "Yeah, see I love A1 Steak Sauce more than almost anything and I always, always carry a bottle with me wherever I go."
The doctor sighed and said, "Well, that may be believable IF THE SEARCHERS ACTUALLY FOUND A BOTTLE OF A1 STEAK SAUCE, EXCEPT THEY DIDN'T. Do you think this is a joke, you little terrorist punk? I know damn well where you got that capsule! You were planning on using it to kill everyone on board but because you're a little inexperienced punk, You messed up and accidentally released the crap on YOURSELF, YOU PILE OF GARBAGE!!!!" The doctor screamed.


"Whoa, man, I've never seen that capsule in my life! Someone tried to kill me, okay? Do I look like a terrorist? I'm almost 19, and I'm working on making a living, not trying to kill innocent men, women, and children. There are laws about citizen's rights! You can't harrass me and yell at me, because I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING!!!" Mike screamed back angrily.
"EXPLAIN WHY THERE WAS NO BOTTLE OF STEAK SAUCE THEN, YA SMUG LITTLE PUNK!!!" The doctor yelled as he knocked Mike's glass of water right off his nightstand.
"Dude, what is your problem?! I didn't do anything wrong!" Mike yelled.
"That's just fine! Play dumb! Too bad you didn't know that this little 'incident' caught national attention and that there's a warrant for your arrest." The doctor replied. "You may come in now agents." the doctor said as he rubbed his temples.


In the doorway stood two F.BI. agents with holstered pistols. "We're taking you in for questioning." One said.
"I D-I-D-N-'T D-O A-N-Y-T-H-I-N-G!!!!" Mike roared with rage. With that Mike charged for the door and squirted A1 Steak Sauce out of his hands at them. "I'm sorry I don't wanna do this. I'm not the bad guy." Mike said with a look of sorrow on his face. The steak sauce got in the eyes of the two agents and in the doctor's eyes too. As Mike bolted down the hall, he picked up the green crystal that the doctor had shown him that saved his life.
A few bold nurses stepped in front of him and tried to block Mike's escape but Mike easily squirted around them. He reached the end of the hall and opened an elevator. He hopped in and pressed the button that said "LOBBY".


When the doors opened to the lobby, two security guards were standing there with pistols raised to Mike's face, "FREEZE!!!" They yelled.
Mike put up his hands so his palms faced the guards. "Sorry guys, but I'm not going to jail when I didn't do it." Mike said as he squirted A1 Steak Sauce into their eyes blinding them temporarily. Mike could only imagine the burning feeling the eyes took. The guards fell down in agony. Mike bolted fast as possible out the front door and out onto the streets of NYC.


A few police cars were coming down the street. Mike was caught for sure. He didn't give up and ran down a corner and onto a different street. He ran past all the crowds of people who all looked at him. He ran for five more blocks turning every corner in hopes of losing the squad cars that were following him every step of the way. Luckily, it was rush hour in New York City. That meant lots and lots of cars, and heavy traffic. So the cops could only get so close, then they had to stop. No cars on the road could pull over because parked cars filled every side of the street.


Mike ran for about 35 minutes longer. He had lost them after about 16, but he wanted to be sure. He knew more would come soon to find him. He also knew how impossible it would be for them to find him in the heavy crowds of people. As he walked down the street he looked at all the tall buildings and said, "I made it; I'm in New York." In the crowd of the afternoon, Mike lost himself in his thoughts.


Mr. Dark tried to kill me, but how did he get that in my bag? It's impossible! And now everyone in America thinks I'm a terrorist. And I had to use my powers against cops and agents. I'm not a hero, I'm a bad guy! Mike sighed and kept walking. Mike was so bundled up in his thoughts, he didn't notice the hand that grabbed his arm until it started to pull him away form the crowd. Before he could say something or cry out, a second gloved hand covered up his mouth. He was dragged far away from everyone and into a dark alley.


At the end of the alley Mike was thrown into a brick wall and shoved into a corner behind a dumpster, "Listen man, I don't wanna kill you if I don't have to, so give me all your money." A man dressed in a brown jacket, black pants, and a ski mask said. He took out a knife. A sharp knife.
"Look, I just got into the city and I've been having a rough day, can't you leave me alone?" Mike asked.
"Let me think... ummmm-- NO!! Give me your wallet!"
"I just want you to know you're messing with the wrong guy!" Mike said as he bit his lower lip.
"Shut up!! You know how many people I rob that make that same claim? You're all a buncha tough guys ain'tcha?"
"That's what makes you so easy to rob; your ego"
"Fine scumball, I gave ya a warning, and now you're stating to PISS ME OFF!!!" Mike yelled as he poured steak sauce into his mouth and eyes.
"What the hell?! Wha-what are ya doin' to me ya freak...?!?! <gag> <gulp>" The thief said as he started to choke on the thick sauce.


The man recovered quickly and grabbed his knife and jammed it blindly and wildly forward in desperation. Mike dodged it with a half jump. He then lifted his right arm and made a fist. As he pulled his fist forward, it gave off a strange green glow. Mike was in trouble and his fist seemed to get bigger and he seemed to get a lot stronger. CRACK His fist made contact with the thief's left cheek. It punched so hard that the man went flying back and hit the wall with an incredible force. The man hit the wall and the wall cracked. Blood squirted out of his mouth and nose. His arm turned with a sick SNAP. The thief looked up just in time for Mike to deliever the end strike. The end strike was a gallon of A1 Steak Sauce right at his face.


It drowned the man in sauce. Mike was careful not to kill him. Mike knew that he would never kill a man; not even Mr. Dark. He was raised right. He knew killing was too far. He may've been a little too rough with the punk but he didn't mean to hit him that hard. It was the first time he'd discovered he had super strength. "Wow, how do I have super strength?" Mike asked himself in awe. He smiled proud of himself, when all of a sudden he heard a police car coming. Oh, no! Mike thought. This time I'll get arrested for sure, and if I run out on the street I'll be nailed by them!



It was night now. Darkness had come quickly to the city. The police car pulled up right in front of the alley. He was through. He decided he would not fight arrest. He would do whatever he must to prove his innocence. He didn't want ot go in, but he had no choice. The cops were getting out already with their guns ready. Mike looked up at the sky suddenly. His eyes glowed green again. He didn't know what was happening, but his eyes remained locked on the night sky above. His arms stretched to his sides. His hands curved away from his body. His legs locked together staight. His stomach stretched tight as a knot. As he kept his eyes focused on the sky, He felt light and it looked as if the stars were getting closer and closer. His sides trembled and his pulse strengthened. Mike got cold and it felt like he was being blasted by strong winds. Suddenly he regained control and looked down at the ground. He saw the two police officers way down below. Just like small figurines. He saw the buildings of New York stretching out for miles and looked down on the highest rooftops.



Mike felt faint. He knew what was happening. He was floating in the air. His eyes got big and he said "OH, MY GOD!!!" Mike tired to move his arms forward and see if it would work. It did! He was moving forward through the air. He was flying. Soaring through the sky like an eagle. Like Superman. The wind blew back his hair. He smiled a huge smile and started giggling like he was 5. He turned a few times in the air, once doing a 360. He lowered himself in the air and climbed altitudes. He screamed so everyone down below could hear, "I'M A1 STEAK SAUCE AND I CAN FLY!!!!". He flew faster and faster whizzing by buildings at speeds that even put birds to shame. He enjoyed every minute of it. Everyone below watched and pointed, but in the darkness no one could make out who he was.


He flew towards a couple of skyscrapers, each one at least 60 stories tall. He flew up the side of the building yelling and shouting. He let out a big, "WOOOOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!" He reached the top of the building and landed. But his landing was horrible. He tried landing on his legs, but he fell in the process and landed hard on his butt, "OUCH!!!" He looked straight up, flat on his back, at the night sky filled with many stars and wondered what was out there? He sat up slowy and wondered while smiling, "I can fly and exert super strength! Where did these extra powers come from?" Suddenly he reached in his pocket and grabbed the green crystal.


He looked at it carefully and said, "If I produced this through my Steak Sauce, and it saved me from the bad chemical particles, then maybe the rest of the gas gave me these powers? Myabe there was an extra compound in it, like some gas that opened up hidden talents within me? This is strange..." Mike puzzled. He stood up and walked to the edge of the building. He looked around and said, "Where am I gonna sleep tonight now that my picture is probably plastered everywhere?" He spied a building a few blocks down, "It's hard to see from way up here, but it looks like a warehouse, nestled in between those buildings.." Mike said to himself, "I'll bet it's probably abandoned. I could sleep there tonight." So with that Mike decided to fly over there and get some rest. It had been a long day.


He knew as soon as he leaped off the edge of the building he'd be putting his faith in his new powers that he didn't even know much about yet. He had to take the chance, though, it was getting real chilly up here. Mike made the sign of the cross upon his chest and uttered, "In the name of the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit; amen." And with that Mike ran and jumped off the building in the direction of the warehouse. He spread out his arms and prayed hard. Just when it seemed as if gravity was pulling him down, he soared in the air and flew again. "YEEEEEE-HHAAAAAAA!!!!!" Mike yelled. He flew through the air quickly and started to approach the ground already. He got closer and closer to the warehouse and soon he dropped to the ground right in front of the warehouse.


He looked up at it. It was two stories. "Well, home, sweet home." Mike smiled as he walked towards it. He approached the brown door and saw that the chain that had been locked on it had fallen off to the ground. He kicked it aside and opened the door, not knowing what to suspect. Mike stepped in his eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness. The whole room seemed to give off a creepy blue-ish glow. He looked down and saw a mat. He rubbed his shoes on it and walked in shutting the door behind him. He was suprised to see a lamp on a brown table lit and a couch on a carpeted rug. There was also an old coffee table in front of the red sofa. A red love seat sat next to the couch. There was also a 26 inch TV on a stand. There was a flight of stairs not too far away. There was also a computer propped against a wall on a desk.


As he approached the sofa, a big figure came out of a dark corner. He took thudding steps towards Mike, and as he came into the room's light, Mike let out a gasp. "Who dares invade my humble home?" Asked a huge figure. He had to have been 8 feet tall. He looked as though he weighed more that 800 pounds, and his muscles were bigger than any Mike had ever seen. He was dreesed in red spandex and pants, black slipper like boots, two red boxing gloves covered his hands, and he had an orange mohawk on his head. His eyes were big and brown, his nose looked like a pig snout, and his mouth was huge. He had one golden earing in his left ear, and on his red costume was a big bold "B". He was angry, very angry. He snorted once. "I ask again, punk; what are you doing in my house?" Repeated the huge figure.
"Uh..." said Mike looking up at him, "I'm sorry. I'll just leave and forget I saw you, and..." Mike trailed off in fear.
"Nah, I don't think so, midget." The big guy said as he swatted Mike with his hand, like a man would to a fly. His hand was bigger than Mike's torso. Mike went flying against the wall and hit with a hard THUD.
"Ow! Please I don't wanna fight, I--" WHAM The big guy slammed his whole body onto Mike and pinned him hard against the wall. "DO YA KNOW WHO I AM, JUNIOR?? I'M THE RED BULL!!! And now you're gonna DIE!!!!" He yelled as he charged him like a bull.
He slammed Mike harder than he had ever been hit before and Mike collapsed. "GIT UP!!!" Red Bull said as he punched him in the head. He kicked Mike with his big foot and picked him up. He held Mike over his head and tossed him to the ground. Mike's head bounced twice upon hitting the hard pavement. Blood trickiled down his chin and his nose bled.



Mike raised his left hand and squirted out a little A1 Steak Sauce, weakly. It hit the Red Bull in the chest and had no effect. "You're just a lil' freak, huh?" The Red Bull asked. "You're just a child, and I got no problem killing kiddies." The Red Bull smirked as he threw Mike against the wall next to the front door. Mike raised his head weakly and saw the Red Bull's fist as it smacked him with an incredible force, giving Mike a black eye. Mike tried to squirt more Steak Sauce out, but the Red Bull slammed into him with another deadly charge attack. Mike felt his ribs go out of place. Mike's nose broke and gallons of blood dripped out. Red Bull grabbed Mike's right arm and twisted it, making it snap. The Red Bull then slugged Mike using his boxing gloves. First the right fist then the left, Then the right, then the left. Over and over again just like that.


Mike dislocated his kneecap and left shoulder. The Red Bull stepped on his left foot breaking the big toe on it. He backed up and got ready to charge the bloody pulp that used to be Mike again. He snorted and said "Ya shoulda left me alone. Now you're gonna die." The Red Bull got down like a football player and got ready to charge him and kill him. Mike just stared with his left eye. Blood came out of Mike's ears, nose, mouth, and cuts and brusies were everywhere. His arm was twisted like a broken tree branch and his leg appeared to be dangling from his knee. A puddle of blood surrounded Mike and he knew he would surely die now. This time nothing could save him. Mike never even got the chance to use his super strength on him.


Just as the bull was ready to charge a figure stepped in between Mike and The Red Bull, with his arms hanging down to his legs. He wore a colorful costume, although Mike couldn't make out the colors. The Red Bull said suprised "Who is this clown?"
"People call me UltimateKevin, and after what you did to that poor guy, you better hope you have a guardian angel looking out for you, 'cause I'm gonna PULVERIZE YOUR ASS!!!!" Said the heroic figure. Mike smiled a very small smile, and then winced in pain. He knew this UltimateKevin was his last hope. Mike just wished he could remember where he'd heard that name before...




TO BE CONTINUED....
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HELL YEAH MAN THAT KICKED ASS!
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really? Ya think so? Thanks man! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You have a knack for introducing characters, A1! Keep it up!!
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Thanks! Glad ya liked it! Very Happy
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Ya. I was sitting ther goin holy crap! A1s getting hurt! This might not end well.
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Haw! Yup! I got my ass handed to me! That's because Ultimatekevin hasn't started training me yet! I'm an inexperienced hero at the moment! Wait'll you see next issue! Big throwdown! 1 on 1 action!


ULTIMATEKEVIN VS. THE RED BULL!!!!!!!!


And Emo-Girl makes her debut! Don't miss it!
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WOOOO!!!
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Can't wait!!!!
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ULTIMATEA1 PRODUCTIONS PROUDLY PRESENT...



THE ULTIMATE MARVEL TRIVIA GAME!!!


Issue #3





"HUUUAAARGGGG!!!! NOW I'M REAL MAD!!!!" Yelled The Red Bull as he charged at UltimateKevin with the speed of a real bull.
Kevin dodged easily because he was much faster than the big Red Bull. As he got out of the way he realized that now that he was out of harm's way, The Red Bull's crushing attack would nail Mike, who laid there barely conscious. Just as The Red Bull was mere steps away from Mike, two hands grabbed him and pulled him out of harm's way, just in the knick of time. As Mike was pulled away he realized that whoever this person was, they weren't visible. Some invisible force was pulling on Mike.


Just as Mike was about to attempt an attack on the force, it became visible and a girl who looked about 20-ish appeared. She had a colorful costume on with a happy smily face symbol on her chest. Mike remebered what it looked like. An emoticon he often used during trivia. The girl looked down at Mike and said, "Whoa, you don't look so good! Are you okay?"
"Uhhhhh..." And with that Mike collapsed onto the warehouse ground. The girl cried out to Kevin as he dodged another one of The Red Bull's deadly attacks, "Kevin, this guy's knocked out! What do I do?"
"Sorry Emo-Girl, but I'm kind of in the middle of something here! Be with ya in a sec..." UltimateKevin assurred her as he lept over The Red Bull, turned around, and smacked him in the back of the head with his left fist.


The fist hit him in the back of the neck. Red Bull turned around to face Kevin and said with a big grin, "Did ya think that would hurt me, man?"
UltimateKevin tried to block his next attack with no success. The Red Bull blasted his right fist forward and smacked Kevin hard in the chest. Kevin went flying backwards and hit the warehouse wall with a THUD.
Red Bull laughed and charged right for his target Kevin, who had become a sitting duck due to The Red Bull's last lethal attack.
Emo-Girl who was kneeled over Mike trying to get him to wake up, saw The Red Bull charging for her mentor, and lept into action instantly, "KEVIN!!!" She lept 10 feet into the air and came down on The Red Bull's head.
She put her hands on Red Bull's eyes, "HEY!!![/b]" Red Bull tripped on his left leg and fell to the hard floor.


Emo-Girl hopped off Red Bull's back before he could get to his feet and UltimateKevin was already up. He ordered Emo-Girl, "Nicole, you have to get outta here! You're not ready for this one!!"
Emo-Girl looked down at the 800 pound beast, "All right!"
"Good, now get that guy to saftey! I'll handle this..." UltimateKevin's eyes narrowed.
Emo-Girl obeyed and ran over to Mike. She picked him up, with little struggle and hurried to the stairs.
UltimateKevin turned his attention to The Red Bull who had just gotten up.


"That wuz cheap!! I had yer ass!!!" The Bull complained.
"Let me tell you something, Bull. That's the only time you'll EVER get the upperhand on me again!" He yelled as he ran straight for the Red Bull.
Red Bull frowned and got ready for another pitiful attack, but much to his suprise Kevin only faked a punch, and instead pulled out a truncheon and used it to smach The Red Bull's face in. It made contact hitting the Bull in the lower left cheek, knocking 2 teeth out of his mouth in the process. Red Bull held his mouth, "TOSE WERE MY TEEFF, YOU FLAT-HEAD!!!![/b]". He yelled with red eyes.
"Aw, c'mon, Bully! You weren't taking very good care of them anyway! They were yellow and rotten!!" Kevin said in a half joke tone.


"OH, YOU TINK YOU'RE A COMEDIAN, NOW??!!! RED BULL WILL SHOW YOU WHAT HAPPENS TO FUNNY GUYS!!!!", Red Bull screamed in hatred as he charged at Kevin again in raw rage.
UltimateKevin flipped over The Red Bull and watched as the Red Bull went straight for the warehouse wall. BAM He went right through and continued to go way into the distance until he hit a building about 30 yards away and fell down.
UltimateKevin wasted no time and ran out of the hole in the wall at lightning speeds. He knew that the Red Bull was a bigger threat now that he was out in the city. Kevin would not let any innocent people get hurt. He swore that to himself.


He reached The Red Bull just in time to see him get up again. The Red Bull got up and slugged at Kevin. UltimateKevin blocked it with his two arms. The Red Bull widened his eyes in suprise, "H-HOW DIDJA BLOCK TAT??!!" The Red Bull asked in astoundment.
"Hey, I got super strength, too, jackass..." He punched The Bull in the face twice in a row. Then, Kevin dived backwards, landing on his palms, and blasted forward again towards The Red Bull with his legs pointed right for The Bull's body. He made swift contact hitting the bull in the chin with both of his boots. The Red Bull fell backwards in agony, but managed to keep his footing.


"YOU'LL PAY FOR TAT, DAMMIT!!!!!" The Red Bull yelled as he lifted both of his fists in the air and lowered them with quickness. UltimateKevin dodged them with breakneck speed. Kevin disapeared in the shadows of the night. Red Bull looked in every direction. He whipped his head to the right, then to the left. Then, when The Red Bull had almost given up, Kevin blasted for him out of nowhere and tackled him to the ground. They rolled onto the streets of New York City and everyone screamed and ran. Horns blared and people got out of their cars and ran.
"Finally! Ya made your first mistake, butty..." The Bull boasted, "Here on ta street? Tis is my playground!" With that Red Bull ran towards a parked car.


He picked it up with ease and tossed it at Kevin. It was aimed for Kevin's head, so Kevin simply ducked and let the car go whizzing past him. Kevin looked over at Red Bull who tossed another one his way, before Kevin could react. Luckily, it was a bad throw and it missed Kevin far to his left. The Red Bull groaned, "AARRRRGGGHHHH!!!!", as he ran at Kevin arms stretched forward.
Kevin tried a new manuver this time. As Red Bull got close, he slid underneath his thick, tree trunk legs and let The Red Bull run wild again. Bull stopped himself and turned around.


This time Kevin was grinning and over his head he held a van. Red Bull stared at the van and sweated like a pig. "Say, Bull, it's been fun, but this show's coming to an end."
"No, wait!! Ton't trow tat!! Please!! Have mercy!!! I ton't wanna fight you no more!!!" The Red Bull pleaded in fear of the hero who stood before him.
"Gee, I'm pretty sure that's what that other guy must of said when you beat him into a bloody pulp and almost killed him, You pile of dirt..." UltimateKevin threw the van with a loud groan. He threw it fast. And right on target.
"Aww, shhhhit..." said Red Bull as he watched it sail for his body.


BAAAMMMM!!!!!! It crushed Red Bull with a deadly noise. The van pushed The Red Bull back against a New York building flattening the vile villian. Kevin looked as the van smashed into the side of the building. All that was viewable of The Red Bull now were his two legs under the van. The Red Bull was out. "Shouldn't have messed with that guy," Ultimatekevin told himself as he hurried off towards the warehouse again. He had already heard police sirens aproaching. They'd have The Red Bull behind bars faster than you could say UltimateKevin-laid-a-smackdown-on-The-Red-Bull!



Kevin reached the warehouse at the same exact time the cops reached the Red Bull. Kevin smiled as he watched the cops get Red Bull out and arrest him. He knew he'd done good again.
Kevin wasted no time and ran upstairs in the warehouse, "How is he?" asked Kevin as he reached a bedroom.
Emo-Girl was using some first-aid cream to heal up Mike's cuts and scraps. Mike was on a bed and Emo-Girl was on chair next to the bed doing the best she could to save Mike's life, "Not good, Kevin. He's in real bad shape and he won't wake up!" Emo-Girl cried in an extremely worried tone.
"Keep calm, together we can save him" Kevin said as he hurried over to help.


"The first thing we need to do is stop all this blood from coming out of his nose. It's pouring out like a fountain." Kevin told Emo-Girl.
"That's because it's broke, Kevin." Emo-Girl replied.
"I can see that, Nicole." Kevin responded in an annoyed tone.
"Sorry..." Emo-Girl said as she lowered her eyes.
"No, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to snap at you. It's just we gotta help him!" Kevin apologized.
"We will! Let's get busy." Emo-Girl smiled.



So in the next few hours Kevin and Emo-Girl worked harder than they thought possible, putting bandages over Mike's cuts, putting on a makeshift cast for his nose and then roughly snapping his ribs, kneecap, and arms back into place the best they could. They put icepacks all over his bruises and did whatever they could to help him. When they were finished they admired their work, knowing that Mike would surely be all-right now.
"Now what Kevin?" Emo-Girl asked the man next to her.
"Now, we let him get his rest and heal. Then in the morning we find out who he is, and what's going on." Kevin answered as he and Emo-Girl exited the room.



They headed into another spare bedroom that had two beds in it. "I guess we may as well, stay here tonight." Kevin suggested.
"Yeah, with all the cops out there, There's no way we're getting to our homes." Emo-Girl replied.
"Well, I gotta get out of this costume and slip into some PJs." Kevin said as he frowned at his dirty blue costume.
"Yeah, believe me, there's nothing I'd like more than to get out of this costume and cape but we don't have any pajamas here, do we?" Emo-Girl said as she pulled off her mask.
"We'll have to sleep in our tights tonight, I guess. It'll be a good lesson for you anyhow." UltimateKevin said.
"What do you mean?" Emo-Girl asked.
"Well if you're ever on the run from a group of villians and stuck out in the middle of nowhere, your only thing to wear might be your costume, so time to get used to it." Kevin said with a smile.
"Yipee, that's a comforting thought..." Emo-Girl sarcasticly said as she got into the other bed and went to sleep.



Meanwhile in a tower in New York...

"Dark!! I thought you said he was DEAD!!" DragynWulf barked from his throne.
"I was sure the gas would have killed him! I have no idea how he survived!! There were 9 different kinds of deadly gases in there!!" Mr. Dark replied as he bowed to his master DragynWulf.
"Well, explain this, then." DragynWulf handed Mr. Dark a poster. On it was a picture of a nineteen year old with brown hair. It said "WANTED: MICHAEL [??????]" The last name was covered with dirt.
"It is a poster of the boy..." Mr. Dark rubbed his chin.
"Well, OF COURSE IT IS, YOU FOOL!!!!" DragynWulf grabbed ahold of Dark, "You bloke! You ruined it. HE SHOULD BE DEAD!!!" DragynWulf yelled.
"It'll only be a m-matter of time now M-master. Someone will find him and he'll be arrested and--"
"I DON'T WANT HIM ARRESTED, I WANT HIM DEAD!!!!" DragynWulf barked.
"Your will is my command Master. I'll see to it right away." Mr. Dark said as he hurried out of the room.
"THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE, DARK!!! ONE MORE MISTAKE AND YOUR HEAD WILL BE RIPPED FROM YOUR NECK!!!!" DragynWulf screamed as he pounded the ground beneath him.




Back at the warehouse, morning....

"Huh? Now where am I?" A dazed Mike asked as he woke up in an unfamilar bed.
"Good morning sunshine! It's, like, 10:30!" A voice said from the doorway.
Mike looked towards where he last heard the voice, "You... you're that invisible person who saved me last night... I remember..."
"Yeah, uh, I guess I have to explain why I was invisible, and all." Emo-Girl said as she scratched her head.
"No, we'll do that in the living room, uh, if you want to call it that." UltimateKevin entered the room also.
"You... I saw you last night. Who are you?" Mike asked as he squinted at the man.
"I'm UltimateKevin. Now Nicole, help him out of bed and we can talk downstairs." Kevin started towards the stairs.
Emo-Girl approached Mike to help him, but Mike shook his head. "I can do it, I don't need any help." With that Mike slowly got up and out of bed and took a few baby steps.



"You okay?" Emo-Girl asked him. "
Yeah, just give me a sec..." Mike groaned with every step he took, but he found his way downstairs.
There he saw Kevin, sitting on a rocking chair, waiting for him, and Emo-Girl, too. Mike made his way across the room and plopped down on the couch. Emo-Girl took a seat on the other smaller couch, "Okay, we're all here. What are we gonna talk about, Kev?" Emo-Girl asked.
"About us, what we can do, and who we are." UltimateKevin said.
"Who goes first?" Mike asked both of them.
"I will." Ultimatekevin said as he stood up.


"All right, my super-hero name is UltimateKevin, and my real name is uh... well... Kevin! Anyway--"
"WAIT, NOW I KNOW WHERE I'VE HEARD THAT NAME!!!" Mike yelled as he hopped off the couch. "You're Ultimatekevin, from my trivia game!!" Mike said in shock.
"Your trivia game?" Nicole asked in disbelief
"OH MY GOD, YOU'RE A1 STEAK SAUCE????" UltimateKevin said as his eyes practically popped out of his sockets.
"YEAH, YOU'RE KEVIN!!!" Mike yelled excited.
"Well, it's uh... WOW, what are the odds?" Kevin asked.
"Dude, you have powers?!" Mike asked in amazement.
"Yeah, um, I'll finish my story, okay?" Ultimatekevin asked Mike.
"Sh-Sh-Sure..." Mike replied shivering as he sat down. He was in shock. He hardly knew what was going on right now.


"Well, like I said, I'm a superhero; a real one. This is my costume as you can see." There was a big red K with a U above it on his chest, "I have powers. I have super strength. Then again; who doesn't? When I first discovered my super strength, I could only lift about 250 pounds, now with years of training and practice, I've worked my way up to almost 635. I also have increased speed. I can run faster than most humans. My durability is higher than most others and I can perform some good moves. I know a ton of martial arts and a few karate moves also. I have trained my body and mind to near human perfection like Batman or Captain America. I also carry a few weapons such as truncheons, nunchucks, and a pole that extends from 2 feet to 12. I've had my powers since I was about your age. I've practiced and trained for more than 10 years, and have been training others for 2. That's about all there is to tell about me. Oh, and I've been fighting crime in New York City for about 4 years now. That Red Bull guy wasn't the toughest guy I've ever faced believe it or not, but he was close. Uh... Yeah, so, any questions?"



"Yeah, I've got one" Mike asked. "Why have you been playing my trivia for 5 years?" Mike asked him.
"Because I love Ultimate Marvel comic books and your trivia is so damn fun!" Ultimatekevin told him. "You do an excellent job of hosting, A1." Kevin complimented him as he elbowed him softly.
"Thanks, I try, I just... WOW, you're UltimateKevin!" Mike looked down in shock.
"Yeah, I never thought I'd have to save your life by fighting a big monster of a man either..." Kevin told him.
"Nicole, why don't you go next?" Kevin asked her.
"Right, now pay attention 'cause I'm only gonna do this once." Emo-Girl told Mike.



"I'm a superheroine in-training... kinda. My name is Nicole, but my hero name is Emo-Girl. I'm 20 and I've had these powers for 4 years roughly. I met Kevin here, a year and a half ago, and he's been teaching me everything I need to know to control my powers and fight crime, ever since. I'm kind of like his ward or uh... apprentice, but he thinks I'll be ready to go solo in a year or so. My powers work off my emotions. When I'm angry, I grow stronger; when I'm scared, I can turn invisible and when I'm happy, I can fly. This is my costume as you can see." She motioned towards the symbol on her chest. It was a smiley face. Her costume was yellow and blueish-purplelish. "I know some martail arts and a lot of self defense moves, too. Kevin teaches me more everyday. That's about all. Oh, and uh, I play your trivia sometimes too, you know me as Joemama5052." She finished with a smile.



"JOEMAMA, YOU'RE HERE, TOO??!!" Mike cried in suprsise, "Two of my best friends!! I always wanted to meet you guys... er and gals." Mike said as his cheeks turned red.
"Same here, can't believe it!" UltimateKevin said with a smile as he waved his hands.
"Yeah, out of the billions and billions of people in the world, and here we are!" Emo-Girl smiled.
"This is great, I thought I was the only one with powers!" Mike laughed.
"WHA, YOU HAVE POWERS, TOO??!!" Kevin shouted as he leaned forward.
"Yeah, tell us, it's your turn, A1!" Emo-Girl said in anticipation.
"Okay, here I go..." Mike said as he stood.



"Okay, my name is Michael, er; call me Mike. My super hero name and username is A1 Steak Sauce; call me A1. And this is my costume!" Mike waved towards his clothes. "Yeah, I know, I don't have a costume. Anyways, I developed my powers when I was 15. I was eating steak with my favorite, A1 Steak Sauce, when I started to wiggle on the ground and then holes came out of my hands and I squirted out... you guessed it, A1 Steak Sauce!"
Kevin and Nicole took there time to look at each other and burst out laughing.
"Yeah, right..." Emo-Girl laughed.
"A1, you don't have to lie and make up powers! We'll still be your friends whether you have powers or not!" Kevin said with a chuckle.
"Haha, you guys are a riot!!" Mike scowled as he squirted out steak sauce at the two.
"What is this crap?" Emo-Girl shouted as the A1 Steak Sauce got all over her and Kevin.
Mike let the sauce rip for 10 seconds, then stopped, "Told ya guys!"
Kevin and Nicole were completly soaked in the stuff.
"Uh, ooookaaaay... never mind! I guess you can squirt out steak sauce!" UltimateKevin admited as he looked at himself all soaked.
"Yeah! Our bad!" Emo-Girl said with a suprised tone.



"'Kay, I think I'll finish now... I've never told anyone about my powers and I continued to host trivia throughout the years. But once I reached 19, I got on a plane for New York to look for a place to live, and a college and maybe a job. In the plane, something weird happened, and I breathed in gas. Harmless gas, because my powers saved me. Then. when I got here, I woke up and the FBI wanted to bring me in, because they thought I was a terrorist. I then discovered my two new powers. One is, in times of trouble, I can use super strength. And two, I can also fly whenever I want... I think. Oh, and some guy named Mr. Dark, a moderator on Marvel.com blew up my house and tried to kill me, but let's not go there."


"Uh, that was a wild story!" Kevin told him.
"Yeah, but you had me hooked!" Emo-Girl said to Mike.
"That's the truth, guys! I swear!" Mike said as he took a deep breath.
"Super strength in times of stress, huh?" Kevin asked him. "With a little work, we may be able to get you to a point where you can use that super strength whenever you want, not just in times of peril!" Kevin assured him.
"That'd be cool..." Mike nodded.
"Yeah, and you almost died during that battle with that villian! You need practice and much training. You're not ready to be a superhero yet" Kevin told Mike sternly.
"Uh, yeah, you're right; I kinda do. Oh, but Kevin and uh... Nicole, thanks for saving me last night!" Mike thanked them, "You guys were great!"
"You're welcome! We do what we can for people in trouble!" Emo-Girl said as she shook Mike's hand.
Kevin reached his hand across to Mike, "A1, Mike... I'd like to take you under my wing, like Nicole, and teach you all I have to know, so you too, can be a hero one day."
Mike looked at him in suprise. "You mean, you want to be my superhero mentor?"
"Yes." Kevin nodded, "How about it?" He asked with a smile.



Mike looked at Emo-Girl who smiled and had her hands behind her back. Mike looked around and thought long and hard. He knew if he accepted he would never have the life he always wanted. The life of a regualr person. The life of luxary and hard work. But he thought harder. He always wished he could be a hero like in the comic books he read. He always wanted to be out there, risking his life and helping people in trouble. Most of all, he wanted to get a better grasp on these powers of his. And here were two of his best friends in all the world, who wanted him to join them. He and Nicole would learn together and train together. He'd have the best teacher and best guy in the world helping him. And he'd have a real good time doing it, too.
With that Mike stuck out his hand, grabbed Kevin's, shook it, and smiled, "Oh, hey, you just know it; I'm in." Mike agreed.
"WOOOOO!!!!" Nicole hollered with a big smile as she signaled her thumb at Mike. Mike signaled his thumb back, and turned towards Kevin, "I gotta tell you, man, I think this is gonna be my new home. It'll have to do." Mike told him.



"My question is, though, would you guys want to move in with me? We could train here all day, and do trivia here at night! What do you say?" Mike asked Nicole and Kevin.
"Well, I kinda already got a place. I got an apartment in the city, and I have a wife." Kevin told Mike.
"And I'm renting a few blocks down from Kevin" Emo-Girl sighed.
"So stop paying your rent and come here; it's free!" Mike offered.
"Well, that would be lovely. My rent is way too high." Nicole said with a grin.
"I-I-I'd like to, but my wife--" Kevin frowned.
"Are you sure?" Mike asked.
"I can't. It's bad enough I get her worried about vigilanting, like this..." Kevin told him.
"Well, you can still come by and meet here to train everyday."
"Yeah, maybe I should stay in the city too..." Nicole said with a frown.
"A1, we'll meet you here everyday at 10 AM sharp, and train and learn until 4:30, then we can all play your Trivia game." Kevin told him.
"Sounds good!" Mike and Emo-Girl agreed.



"Then it's settled..." Kevin stated, "Training begins tomorrow. For now we have to set up the training area and help you get some more stuff in this place, A1." Kevin ordered, "I'll start on the training room. Nicole, you and A1 go and get his costume. He needs one, and you know where to get it." Kevin said with a wink.
"Sure do! C'mon, A1! Let's go and get you that costume!" Emo-Girl said as she went outside, putting on her mask on the way.
"See ya guys in a little while..." Kevin waved from the warehouse.
As Mike and Nicole walked into the city, a floating camera watched them from the sky.



"Ah, just those two, and not that pesky Kevin... Now is the perfect time to hatch my next attack..." Mr. Dark whispered to himself as he watched a monitor from a tower in New York. "So the boy has found him some allies, we will see how long he and the girl last now..." Mr. Dark laughed as he pressed a button sending a deadly attack towards the unsuspecting heroes, A1 and Emo-Girl...




TO BE CONTINUED....
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Awesome issue!!!
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Thanks Kevin! Awesome editing! Wink
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Sweet issue man.
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Thanks Cowboy!
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Nice man, you got a great sence of description Very Happy
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Thanks man! I feel when I write I have to go into detail to make the story intresting! Next issue is gonna be the best one yet! I lota character devolpments next ish, and some good action scenes!
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Good news! I've been hammering #4 out and I should have it ready for Kevin's editing either tommorow or Wednesday! I'm not kidding when I say, THIS ISSUE IS GONNA BE TRIPLE THE REGULAR SIZE!!! IT's looooonnnggg!!! But good!
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*Triple?* Shocked
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SWEET ITS GONNA TAKE AN HOUR TO READ WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
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