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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 11:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Steve wakes up in a darkened med center. He stands and looks down expecting scars and bandages but there are none. He puts on civilin cloths and picks up his sheild. He walks to thedoor and tries the door. Locked. He knocks a couple times but no one is around.
"Furys gonna kill me for this but......" He says as he rears back. He hits the door right off its hings. He steps out and looks out the window. The sun is setting. For some reason there are no lights on. He wanted to look at the city but he was on the oppsite side. Better find Fury Steve says to him self. He started jogging around the building. The entire time he worried about Jan. Did she get hit by the explosion. Did i throw her into the building too hard. Just as New york was about to enter his line of vision he relized two things. One was that there was NOBODY here. None. Zip. The second was there was a man laying on the floor in front of him. Next to him was a badge. He knelt and turned the man over. It was Nick Fury.
"NICK! What the hell happened?" Steve said as he looked down and saw that Nick had been shot.
"Him........that father a yours.........he didnt die.......scarred his face badly......got a red mask in the shape of a skull......graffted to his.........new nazis.......under his control....."
"Damn IT!!! "
"Ultimate hideing........he controls........half the country...........ultimates trying to sneak outta his half.....gotta catch up with them if ya want to live......"
"Nick. HOW LONNGH WASS II OUTT!!!"
"One year.....SNIPER!" Nick yells as he pushes Steve away.
The bullet hit Nick square in the chest.
"Take....this....." Nick says as he hand Steve a broom handle mouser. Nick dies there.
Steve marvels at the pistol. A huge stack of ammo lays next to Nick.Steve sees the laser from the snipers weapon. He jumps into the open and traces the beam with his gun. He fires. The laser pointer beam dissapers. He stand and slatues at Nick.
"You'll die father. You'll die.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 6:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

WHAT??!!?!?!?!
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 3:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Confuseing or are ya mad at me leaving right there?
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 11:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Steve collected the snipers gun and had wandered into the barren waste land called new york. What was left of it any way. He climbed ontop of a building and sat for a few mintues. Thats when he heard a scream. He stood and a few blocks away saw a small boy being chased by waht appeared to be wolves. He knew there was no way to get there before the wolves got him so he shouldered the sniper rifle. He shot the first round just behind the boy. It took the first out. He missed on the next two shoots. Then he shot the second wolf. Two down two to go. It took him three more shots to kill the third. His sight was perfect as he pulled the trigger on the last one. There was one problem. The gun jammed. He pulled it back and began hitting it. After a couple of tries it unjamed. Helooked around until he saw the boy. He wasent ready for what he saw. The wolf had caught him. Steve looked away and tears began to roll down his cheeks.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh, that blows...

I didn't expect that Fury would die like that!!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In a later issue you will find out why he was still at tresklion. Man i can never spell that.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hm. Look forward to it!

Oh, it's Triskelion... I think... Confused
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok thanks man.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 10:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He stood looking at the monument of his so called father. Just stareing at it he grew angry. He kept seeing that boy running away from the wolf. Suddenly two men spotted him. The came running at him. Steve knew that thay would suffer just like he would make his father for this pain. HE threw his sheild takeing ones head off. He grabbed the other.
"Where is the boarder?"
"How do you not know this?"
"Beacuse im not from around here?"
"The mississippi river." The man said. He drew a dagger from his pocket and tried to stab Steve. Steve shot him.
"To the mighty Mississippi then.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 1:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow!!
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He speed across the town. Running. Hiding in the shadows. He would have never done anything like this but he didnt want to have to fight alot while traveling. The world has being destroyed by his own father. He didnt know what to think anymore. Thats whne he walked into some terrible. As he saw it he only thought one thing. Cncentation camp. It looked exactly like one. Steve nearly vomited right there. There were men in there assulting women and childeren. Steve knew that he had to free these people. He took his chance and as gaurd walked by. He grabbed uhim from behind and broke his neck. He pulled the smg of him and lined the sights over a man. He pulled his pistol and aimed it at anothers head. HE pulled the triggers simutaniously. He sees two gaurds pull grenades and toss them at the corwd below. Steve shots one but the other explodes killing lots.
Steve rips through the gate and take out two gaurds with his pistol. Three more fall from Smg fire. The last one charges Steve with a giant knife. Steve throws the now empty smg into his face. He picks up the unconsis man. A small family runs up to Steve.
"Come with us. We can hide you for a while and you can hurt that man for answers." The father say.
Steve nods......
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 12:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice action sequences!!
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He had beeen in that back room of the familys houise beating on the guy for 20 mintues before he spoke.
"WHERE IS MY FATHER!" Steve yelled
"He went to kill your team. He thinks your with them."
"WHy did he attack tresklion? Why did he attack the us?"
"I dont know."
"Why did you try to kill civilans when i attacked?"
"Beacuse we were oredered too." The guys said with a smile.
"Besides. Every time you hit me. My guys got closer to this house." And with that Steve heard a scream and then gun fire that stoped the scream. The crys of the childeren that were also ended by gun fire. Steve reared back. A full swing punch hit the man so hard his head snaped back. It never moved again. He heard the men outside the door. Steve pulled and knife inn his left hand and his pistol in his right. As the door flew open Steve rammed his knife in the first man. He held him there using him as a sheild while the others opened fire. He shot two of the 4 men and threw his human sheild at the last. The man dodged and rushed Steve. Steve dropped to his knee and then vaulted up in a awsome uppercut. The mans head went through the celling. Steve picked up a gun from one of the men. More men were gathering outside the house. As one pushed open the door Steve jump kicked it. As it closed Steve opened fire through the door. He heard the screams of men as the were hit. He looked out the window down the street to see a man with an rpg. He loaded it and fired as Steve jumped out. Steve rolled onto his knee and put the sights of his pistol on the man. As he loaded the second grenade Steve shot him. He turned and swipe kick a man that was coming at him from behind. When he hit the ground Steve shot him. Steve ran down the street as more men appeard. They shot at him from behind. Steve turned and opened fire. 3 out of 4 fell. As he sprinted down the street men just started coming out of the wood works. Steve just kept running and shooting them...................
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 1:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice, man!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 9:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Man this keeps gettin' better dosen't it?


Great job Cowboy! This series is really good! A ton o' action! Keep it up!
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